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Post by alex1304 on Jan 26, 2017 7:44:43 GMT -5
Hey, I'm new to this forum! I play GD since 1.9 and I'm mostly a level creator. Here is my latest level, my best one yet. I'd like to get some constructive reviews on it  LEVEL INFO: Name : Feelings Creator : Alex1304 (me) ID : 28597212 Objects : 27,5k Groups used : 141 Video : Note : This level is basically a 2.0 level with some 2.1 stuff from the drop (such as dash orbs and lightning decos) Thank you in advance  ~ Alex1304 ~ |
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Discord: #8777
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Anything by JerkRat or Glittershroom
Hardest Demon: Airtime by nasgubb
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Post by CreatorAP on Jan 26, 2017 12:47:17 GMT -5
Why the black'N'white gears and white clouds?  I would give this 8/10 |
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Post by alex1304 on Jan 26, 2017 16:23:31 GMT -5
Why the black'N'white gears and white clouds? I would give this 8/10 Thanks What would you put instead of gears and clouds? |
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Discord: #8777
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Post by CreatorAP on Jan 27, 2017 16:27:49 GMT -5
Some other non- black'N'white gear and pulsating objexts instead of clouds.
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Post by alex1304 on Feb 1, 2017 17:15:08 GMT -5
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Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 1, 2017 20:45:30 GMT -5
0% - 17%
Block Design - 5.5/10
It's pretty good and simple. Not anything amazing. I like how you actually added some decoration instead of adding one plain color.
Decoration - 5.5/10
It seems like you're doing the style were you build something that is simple but still looks good. Which is what you did. Looks pretty good. It could just use a little more decoration that doesn't have low opacity added to it. Also what CreatorAP said it would've been better if you didn't use black saws. You should've used the new hammer saws with low opacity.
18% - 38%
Block Design - 6/10
This is pretty much the same as the last block designs so I still have the same opinions about it. Simple but good! After a little while though it gets a little complex so it is also good!
Decoration - 6/10
I like that effect you put. Pretty good! If it was with decoration instead of platforms then that would have been better! 20% has an alright effect but if it was something a little more major then it would have been praised more.
39% - 82%
This is the same as the other previous parts of this level. Nice block design and decoration. That's about it. Okay next.
83% - 100%
This is also pretty good. The only thing that bothered me was the beam at 95% that messed up the color combination.
Overall, you did pretty good! Keep it up!
Moved to Feature-Worthy level.
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Post by artsy on Feb 1, 2017 21:36:19 GMT -5
Cool level! (already been reviewed)
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Post by alex1304 on Feb 2, 2017 3:23:01 GMT -5
Thank you for the review, so I need to work on some background decorations and saws. Glad you liked it on the overall though |
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Post by RyanAB on Feb 12, 2017 15:00:37 GMT -5
Sent: Harder 6* Featured
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Post by [GD] NiceRed on Feb 24, 2017 23:16:58 GMT -5
Men Feature this Easy Demon: 29794665  |
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Post by kiriE on Feb 25, 2017 7:44:00 GMT -5
Men Feature this Easy Demon: 29794665 Hey, please read the rules of the judging panel. You're NOT allowed to advertise in other people's threads, make a thread your own instead. |
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Post by xmegaflamex on Mar 10, 2017 8:36:18 GMT -5
Do u want to collab with me also new to gd, i mean im very new, maybe you could also teach me to make good levels, pls read, thanks ^_^
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Discord: œ
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Post by œ on Sept 21, 2017 18:07:11 GMT -5
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Discord: CreativeGuy#3418
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Post by CreativeGuy on Sept 21, 2017 18:28:01 GMT -5
Yep.
Moving to Rated Levels. Good job!
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Discord: œ
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Hardest Demon: œ
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Post by œ on Sept 21, 2017 20:29:13 GMT -5
Yep. Moving to Rated Levels. Good job! You didn't move it |
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