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Post by SuperJedi224 on Jan 25, 2017 10:57:17 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2017 2:37:08 GMT -5
Title: Into the CoreCreator: SuperJedi224 ID: 28737865Song: DJVI - Explore the CoreGameplay - 3/10- Super repetitive, but you do mix it up towards the end.
- More variety of gamemodes could've made your level more fun.
- The same as said above can apply with orbs and slopes too.
- But you do use some speedchanges and size portals in the level!
- Some parts are a little hard for a 2-3 star level.
Decoration and Block Design - 2.5/10
- The same block design is present throughout the whole level.
- There is almost no decoration in the whole level
- BUT I noticed the chains and beating orbs.
- The colors of the level made it hard to see in some parts.
- Maybe use some air deco to help assist your gameplay?
- Also maybe change your block design to make the level more unique?
But at least the default fading looks good!
- The music sync might just be the best part of the level.
- The gameplay does indeed assist with the music sync via speed changes.
- The decoration does also (well the beating orbs go with the music anyway)
The ship, spider and cube parts could've been more synced in my opinion.
Final Score - 9/30!
Personally I think that this belongs in Needs Improvement. @fireblizzard @jy2000 Approved?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2017 2:53:44 GMT -5
I'm gonna have to agree. Adding on to the review, try using multiple objects to create block designs instead of just plain old blocks, it makes the bocks look complex and pretty cool. Also try to make the pathway you need to go through clear; like repeater said, the block's color almost matches the background's. Also try to fill up all that empty space. Finally make your gameplay dynamic with lots of variation, instead of the same spike jumps at the same y-coordinate over and over. Right now this level is looking like a 1.0 styled level made with 2.1 features. Repeater pretty much explained the rest of my thoughts.
Try to improve from these tips, and you'll gradually get better at creating one level at a time. Try looking at other recently rated levels to get inspiration/ideas (but don't copy them exactly). Also try diversifying your gameplay and decoration, there's an entire editor you can use, not just one block or one spike.
Review Approved
Moving To NeDs IMprUvmEnt
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2017 2:59:46 GMT -5
You got here b4 me JY... how dare you xd
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