tellu321
Stereo Madness
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13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Jan 22, 2017 7:48:28 GMT -5
Level Name: Journey Level Creator: tellu321 Level ID: 28598619 Level Difficulty: Hard 4* Level Song and Author: Event Horizon by Xtrullor Collaboration / Solo Level : Solo Level
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tellu321
Stereo Madness
Hello strangers!
13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Feb 8, 2017 9:59:39 GMT -5
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tellu321
Stereo Madness
Hello strangers!
13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Feb 14, 2017 9:46:00 GMT -5
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tellu321
Stereo Madness
Hello strangers!
13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Feb 20, 2017 11:17:43 GMT -5
HELLO!?!?!?! IS THIS REALLY GETTING IGNORED? THIS IS REALLY SAD. IT WON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO RATE THIS TRASH. ACTUALLY PATHETIC! RyanABmegaman9
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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2017 17:11:38 GMT -5
Title: Journey Creator: tellu321 ID: 28598619 Gameplay - 4/10
- Some transitions can be worked on.
- One example is the mini wave transition.
- The mini UFO part is bothersome to play.
- Invisible speed changes can be annoying to some people.
- Decent use of size portals to make gameplay though.
- But invisible size portals are cumbersome.
- More orb usage would've been better..
- This level isn't really long, so a long review wouldn't make sense
Decoration + Block Design - 4.5/10
- Good attempt at variating block designs.
- The platforms on the ceiling are a nice touch.
- I like how you make the decoration pulse at the beginning.
- Color combinations need to be worked on though.
- A link to a handy color combo sheet can be found here (link)
- However, there are lots of copypasted elements in this level.
- Including the saws and the decoration at the beginning.
- I like what you did with the lightning at the beginning.
- Don't Fade would be good for your level too.
- Again, short level, short review.
Music Sync - 4/10
- There are lots of missed opportunities of music sync here.
- Some platforms and spike jumps do sync with the music!
- Occasionally, speed portals do sync with the music too.
- But some parts of the level are off sync in terms of gameplay.
- The decoration could've been more "involved" to the music.
- Maybe make it flash with the music?
- Maybe even the color changes can sync with the music?
- How about background flashes?
- There really isn't much to say about music sync here.
Final Score - 12.5/30 Personally, I think that this level belongs in Medium - High Needs Improvement to Low Decent. @jy2000 haastregt Approve?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2017 18:25:17 GMT -5
Seriously? You break a bunch of rules in the judging panel, tag the owners of all people, and you call US pathetic? We have over 10 fucking pages of levels, that's over 300 levels at least, some people have been waiting for more than half a year. We're doing you guys a favor by reviewing your levels and really don't appreciate you yelling at us thinking you're more important than others. We have more to our lives than judging unappreciative user's levels all day long.
... Anyways, on the topic of the review...some more points to add on. Although after seeing that OP I don't really want to. This level is really short, which means there's a pretty slim chance of it getting rated, although judging from the looks of it the chance was almost nonexistant in the first place. Try adding some background deco or a custom background to fill some space up. Also don't use saws only as gameplay, it's not fun at all. You also don't use the right end/corner pieces for the blocks, make sure you're using the right ones. Try to keep the gameplay difficulty consistent, there's a huge jump going into the drop buildup, and use something to kill you when you go flying into the ceiling so we don't have to wait. Finally, don't use blind transitions, they make the gameplay just terrible.
If the level was a little longer it may have qualified for borderline Decent.
Review Approved, Moving to NI
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tellu321
Stereo Madness
Hello strangers!
13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Apr 1, 2017 12:00:01 GMT -5
Hey @31retaeper ! Thanks for the feedback. I will try my best on my second level!
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174 posts
Discord: TaylorTSpook#4193
Creator Points: 77
Favorite Level: Evolution-Sirhadoken
Hardest Demon: Nine Circles (im a creator DansGame)
Mini-Profile Name Color: Black
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Post by Awzer on Apr 3, 2017 8:56:44 GMT -5
i feel like you should be a bit nicer to the people judging your levels ;-; (this isnt to do with the level itself, but if you were nicer this could have possibly (not definitely) gone in decent levels, but you chose to tag everyone and get angry, causing judges to definitely go a bit harsher. if not your levels,work on your attitude. i await your next level to see your improvement, and i hope you improve in both areas.
sorry if this counts as a necropost or whatever .-.
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Post by Subzero on Apr 3, 2017 9:12:30 GMT -5
i feel like you should be a bit nicer to the people judging your levels ;-; (this isnt to do with the level itself, but if you were nicer this could have possibly (not definitely) gone in decent levels, but you chose to tag everyone and get angry, causing judges to definitely go a bit harsher. if not your levels,work on your attitude. i await your next level to see your improvement, and i hope you improve in both areas. sorry if this counts as a necropost or whatever .-. It's like 2 months not 2 days lol.
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174 posts
Discord: TaylorTSpook#4193
Creator Points: 77
Favorite Level: Evolution-Sirhadoken
Hardest Demon: Nine Circles (im a creator DansGame)
Mini-Profile Name Color: Black
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Post by Awzer on Apr 3, 2017 11:43:29 GMT -5
It's like 2 months not 2 days lol. oh ok
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tellu321
Stereo Madness
Hello strangers!
13 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Electrodynamix
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Post by tellu321 on Apr 4, 2017 9:09:39 GMT -5
@awzer Hi! Thanks for saying that to me.I appreciate that you understand.
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