63 posts
Discord: HerobrineCraft#4286
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Trump Circles by RLol
Hardest Demon: Breakthrough by Hinds
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Post by herobrinecraft on Jan 20, 2017 15:48:18 GMT -5
I have worked so hard on this before 2.0 but when 2.1 came out I improved some parts. This is by far my best block design, even though it may still suck lol. ID: 28500351 Video: m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZudVswJ1z3MThanks megaman9
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221 posts
Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 20, 2017 19:53:26 GMT -5
0% - 38% Block Design - 5/10 The block design at the beginning isn't that amazing. The spikes that don't have a block on them does not look right. If it at least like one block underneath it. Although don't put faces in blocks. They don't look good. 26% looks pretty good!
Decoration - 1.5/10 It is good at first. Then it gets a little blank. Kind of ironic because when the decoration got bad the block design got good. If you did both at the same time then it could have looked better. The decoration could have been better if you didn't used copy and pasted white clouds. Pretty much what I am saying is that it is blank and it needs a lot more decoration.
Game play - 6/10 It's fun. Okay next.
39% - 68% Block Design - 5/10 This looks the same as the last block design just with out colors. Although it does look kind of off sometimes because it looks blank. 64% looks pretty good.
Decoration - 3/10 Some thing tells me you are focusing on block designs more than the decoration. That's fine but if you focused on both it would've looked great. But if you were trying to focus on the decoration then here are some improvements you need. First off it is blank so it needs decoration. Such as glowing objects or something. At least pulse objects.
Game play - 6/10 It is still good. Okay next.
68% - 100% Block design - 3/10 Once again it is the same as the other block designs but with different colors. BUT, the problem here seems to be color combinations. If you are going to use a second color make sure to use that color just as much as the other one.
Decoration - 2/10 The same as the last point I made.
Game play - 6/10 It is still good.
Overall, you need to improve making better decoration and making good color combinations. Other than that you are great.
Moved to Decent Levels.
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