90 posts
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Hardest Demon: Game Time
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Post by Ignium on Jan 18, 2017 16:27:44 GMT -5
Level name: Faded Rated: Hard (No stars) Creator: 2ShyGuy4U (Me) Song: Alan Walker-Faded Solo Level ID: 26606572
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90 posts
Creator Points: 0
Hardest Demon: Game Time
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Post by Ignium on Feb 1, 2017 21:12:35 GMT -5
plzzzz rate
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221 posts
Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 4, 2017 8:52:17 GMT -5
Block Design - 1/10 It really doesn't even have design in them. If not you are using default blocks. Which is alright until I realized you're using the ones have an outline on every side. Don't use those blocks. They look ugly. Also if your going to use outlines make sure to actually put a block inside the outline. Then it gets to the wave. Which uses those black slopes that don't have corner pieces. Which doesn't really go with the background. Then even at the ending it still has that same problem of you stacking blocks that have outlines on every side! wtf? This has got to be a joke.
Decoration - 1/10 The beginning of the level were the black block blocks that icon doesn't look good at all. That needs to be removed. Also the background is good, but then it starts getting repetitive because you dragged it through half the whole level. Don't do that because then it gets boring and it doesn't become amazing anymore. At 0:17 on the video why did you put black blocks out of no where? I know it is to hide your character but don't put them like that. It's ugly. Oh, how original, a boss fight. Did you make this early 2.0? If you did that would explain a lot. If not then...You need a lot of improvement. First off if you're going to make a boss fight ,create your own boss with great designs such as what Lazerblitz, Manix, Funnygame etc. Also make it actually look like it is trying to attack you. Don't just put random saws around and think that's an attack. Also don't make boss fights that are long. Because that's just boring. Also color combinations is something big on this level. First off for some reason at the around 0:43 you use a lot of blue, a little yellow, and a little green. The right after that there is a lot of green and a little blue. Either way blue and green don't make a good color combination. And nothing goes with yellow.
Game play - 1/10 It is really boring and should be a 2 star due to how easy it is. Fast and rapid vehicle switching is fun. But slowly changing to vehicles while in a slow speed isn't fun.
Overall, you need to improve on game play, decoration, block design, color combinations, boss fights & effects. If you improve a lot on those then you could possibly get a rated or featured level.
Moved to Needs Improvement.
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