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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 10, 2017 13:22:46 GMT -5
Please someone review this and tell me what you think about it. If you think something bad, I can improve it. Info: Name: Unity Creator: TheRealTero (Me) ID: 27337640 Style of level: Old-school Version made in: 2.0 Video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBlLG6HICTMLength: Long Song: Unity by TheFatRat Stars: No Featured: No Rating: Hard (No stars) Stars Requested: 5 |
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163 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Death Moon
Hardest Demon: The Nightmare
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Post by SuperJedi224 on Jan 10, 2017 17:38:09 GMT -5
^What's the ID of the level?
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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 11, 2017 8:17:00 GMT -5
^What's the ID of the level? 27337640 |
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163 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Death Moon
Hardest Demon: The Nightmare
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Mini-Profile Name Color: 4400aa
Mini-Profile Text Color: EEEEEE
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Post by SuperJedi224 on Jan 11, 2017 8:47:10 GMT -5
Gameplay: 12/15. Good overall, but not quite 5-star worthy. Rated 4  . Also, I think that first triple spike was put a little too close to the start of the level. Decoration: 6/8. Pretty good. Sync: 2/2. The sync works fine. Overall: 20/25. A GOOD level. |
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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 11, 2017 13:34:23 GMT -5
Gameplay: 12/15. Good overall, but not quite 5-star worthy. Rated 4 . Also, I think that first triple spike was put a little too close to the start of the level. Decoration: 6/8. Pretty good. Sync: 2/2. The sync works fine. Overall: 20/25. A GOOD level. Ok thanks for enjoying it. I don't know if I should nerf that triple spike part? |
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Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Motion/ -Sirius-
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Post by Eternalyz on Jan 15, 2017 15:12:28 GMT -5
This is a good first level as it sync well with the music.
However,
The design is minimal so needs to use more 2.0 styled blocks.
The level needs more deco, e.g arrows, pulsing objects and ground decoration.
Overall: 1/10 (Needs Improvement) - i was once this bad- sorry if im being a bit harsh- you will get better with experience and you will create your own style..
Hopefully i have not put you off building and just keep practising untill you get a good level.
Some advice;
Dont rush the level,
Start of with a simple Meltdown style and improve it.
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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 16, 2017 8:04:02 GMT -5
This is a good first level as it sync well with the music. However, The design is minimal so needs to use more 2.0 styled blocks. The level needs more deco, e.g arrows, pulsing objects and ground decoration. Overall: 1/10 (Needs Improvement) - i was once this bad- sorry if im being a bit harsh- you will get better with experience and you will create your own style.. Hopefully i have not put you off building and just keep practising untill you get a good level. Some advice; Dont rush the level, Start of with a simple Meltdown style and improve it. Advice is good, but I have one thing to tell: - It's an oldschool level. I will create a level better than this with the song Ludicrous Speed by F-777 codenamed "TheRealTero" and preview is released by the name of "Unnamed 0". |
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Discord: #8777
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Anything by JerkRat or Glittershroom
Hardest Demon: Airtime by nasgubb
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Post by CreatorAP on Jan 18, 2017 12:07:47 GMT -5
*Muffled laugh*
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Favorite Level: Dem Travel
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Post by TigreRevenge on Jan 18, 2017 12:48:50 GMT -5
I like that level  |
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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 18, 2017 13:35:53 GMT -5
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Post by Zirphynx on Jan 18, 2017 13:36:10 GMT -5
I like that level Thanks. |
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Post by Zirphynx on Mar 1, 2017 13:49:03 GMT -5
Bump, I want this to be judged by a few more judges.
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Post by Zirphynx on Mar 10, 2017 3:17:28 GMT -5
I hope someone can check this out
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Post by artsy on Mar 15, 2017 18:53:32 GMT -5
This is a good first level as it sync well with the music. However, The design is minimal so needs to use more 2.0 styled blocks. The level needs more deco, e.g arrows, pulsing objects and ground decoration. Overall: 1/10 (Needs Improvement) - i was once this bad- sorry if im being a bit harsh- you will get better with experience and you will create your own style.. Hopefully i have not put you off building and just keep practising untill you get a good level. Some advice; Dont rush the level, Start of with a simple Meltdown style and improve it. I agree with your review, and thanks for offering improvements and things to do for the creator! Just try to go a bit more in-depth as to why the level isnt that great. Moving to Needs Improvement |
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