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Favorite Level: Shitty Stereo Madness 8)
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Post by SpricySauceFR on Jan 8, 2017 4:14:18 GMT -5
Hi guys! Here's my new level, ParadoX! Level infos: Name: ParadoX ID: 28061174 Creator: DasHexagon
Difficulty:  4-5
Solo level?: Yes
Some screens:
Video is coming a bit later!
Enjoy! 
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Favorite Level: Shitty Stereo Madness 8)
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Post by SpricySauceFR on Jan 8, 2017 4:38:28 GMT -5
Here's the video:
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Favorite Level: Shitty Stereo Madness 8)
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Post by SpricySauceFR on Jan 14, 2017 3:53:54 GMT -5
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221 posts
Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
Mini-Profile Background: 0077ff
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 14, 2017 14:27:05 GMT -5
0% - 26%
Block Design - 2/10
Nothing special about the block design. Just regular blocks.
Decoration - 2/10
The saws were good at first until I saw how many times it was copy and pasted. The background is good but if it had some pulse effects or some other stuff added to it then it could have been better. Overall this lacks decoration besidse those arrows that show up reminding you were to go.
27% - 53%
Block Design - 2/10
Still regular blocks but with red outlining now. I could have been better if you made it glow inside.
Decoration - 2.5/10
The color combinations with the block design and the decoration is not good because there is more white than red so it looks off. Also I see those copy and pasted saws again. Try using a variation of saws so it would not look as copy and pasted. The background was pretty good. The white spikes look good but there is a little white line at the surface that kind of messes it up. Also if you put more decoration inside of the white spikes instead of just chains it could have been better. The saws do not look good when it overlaps with a block or glowing objects.
Game play - not judging just wanted to say something about it.
C'mon I know this seems just like an effect level but why make the game play so boring! Atleast make it a reverse or mini ship from time to time!
54% - 75%
Block Design - 3.5/10
The pulse objects inside the blocks are pretty good but if there was more pulse objects inside then it could have been better.
Decoration - 2/10
There you go again with the copy and pasted saws again. The glow around it is good but not good when it overlaps an object. 70% The lines there is pretty good.
76% - 100%
Block Design - 1.5/10
The moving platforms look good inside the blocks but not good when it does this weird thing. Such as at 81%, when it reaches the end of the blocks but you do not add one.
Decoration - 1.5/10
The saw are once again copy and pasted so they look reptitive but the objects you put around the saws do not look good when it overlaps a block or other things.
Overall, your problem seems to be using good color combinations, making good looking decoration and block effects. Also the difficulty you choose is to easy for a 4 or 5 star level. More like a 2 star. If you improve on these you could get yourself a rated or featured level.
Moved to Needs Improvement.
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