83 posts
Discord: Fade#2686
Clans: Infinite Zero
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Post by Fade on Jan 4, 2017 5:29:02 GMT -5
It's a good concept, even though it was inspired by another level. However, there is some need for improvement in some places, for example: prntscr.com/drc9qaYou could have put those small corner blocks that make those look better and get rid of those gaps. There definitely is a lot of room for more decoration, although I am impressed by your use of move triggers. The bossfight could use some improvement in terms of difficulty, maybe you could have the obstacles lock on to your current y position and then move towards you and you have to avoid them. Otherwise, I can't tell whether it is feature worthy, but good job
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2017 13:44:01 GMT -5
I will judge, just give me some time.
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Hektorite
Stereo Madness
Waiting for the update...
13 posts
Discord: Hektorite#2809
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: "-Grindfury-" by Loogiah and Hinds
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Post by Hektorite on Jan 4, 2017 18:06:26 GMT -5
I will judge, just give me some time. Why don't judges care about my levels tho =(
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83 posts
Discord: Fade#2686
Clans: Infinite Zero
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Post by Fade on Jan 8, 2017 7:01:03 GMT -5
I will judge, just give me some time. Why don't judges care about my levels tho =( There is currently A LOT of levels requesting to be judged, and loads more each day. You bothering them about how they "don't care" about your levels is irrelevant. All the judges are trying to judge levels as fast as they can. They don't need people saying stuff like this. Also, why would you put this on someone else's thread?
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221 posts
Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 8, 2017 12:24:12 GMT -5
Okay I'm here to judge now ;3; 0% - 23% I like the concept of those spikes that follow you on the side but if it had some kind of design on them then that would've looked amazing. The decoration is kind of blank but it seems like you are focusing more on the block effect you did there. The background is a little blank because they move like every 5 seconds. It could have been better if it moved to the sync of the song. The game play is alright but it is not good when you make random auto parts. It could have been better if you included some kind of custom ground that did some kind of retro effect too. Effect - 4.5/10 Game play - 2/10
24% - 33% It is not a good idea to change from a retro theme to a colorful theme. Only if you are making a level that switches through the themes. Other than that the design for this part is actually pretty good. I like the concept of the ufo portal being inivisible but it shows you that you will turn into a UFO. The effect were the blocks go back and forth is kind of overused but still kind of alright. Game play - 3/10 Effect - 4/10 Decoration - 3.5/10
34% - 38% I like how you used slopes as blocks but it kind of looks like you forgot some corner pieces. Love how they move to instead of being still. Although I don't like that you copy and pasted all those pulse objects. It doesn't look good. I guess it could have been better if you made a variation of decoration here. Or make the opacity of the pulse objects lower. Decoration - 5/10 Game play - 2/10
39% - 65% I like the concept of the three dimensional background. The spikes that follow you on the sides look amazing because they have some decoration in it. A huge flaw on this is that you for some reason went BACK to the retro theme. Retro theme aren't really the best when you are making some rainbow-ish level. I know that your first language was not English so I was expecting some kind of English error on the text ,and I did. At 61% it says "Me, Your wrost enemy!! So...be ready for die" The "for" should be replaced with a "to". Effect - 5/10
66% - 100% It is not the best to make a boss fight using that dinosaur thing. I only see early 2.0 levels did that. Now in then the boss fights I see are all like some boss that people made there self. For example Manix, Lazerblitz, Noriega all made there own well made boss for levels. And all of those bosses did some kind of attack did were a effect. Also this part was super blank on the decoration. Effect - 2/10
Overall, you seem to make boring game play, blank decoration and blank effects. If you improve on all of these flaws you will eventually get a feature or rated level!
Moved to Decent Levels.
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Hektorite
Stereo Madness
Waiting for the update...
13 posts
Discord: Hektorite#2809
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: "-Grindfury-" by Loogiah and Hinds
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Post by Hektorite on Jan 9, 2017 14:32:30 GMT -5
Why don't judges care about my levels tho =( There is currently A LOT of levels requesting to be judged, and loads more each day. You bothering them about how they "don't care" about your levels is irrelevant. All the judges are trying to judge levels as fast as they can. They don't need people saying stuff like this. Also, why would you put this on someone else's thread?I just always feel like I'm ignored because of Google+ and Twitch streams auehdaidu
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