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Post by Cień Świetności on Jan 1, 2017 11:40:49 GMT -5
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 10, 2017 17:17:30 GMT -5
0% - 25% I like the concept of this being a music level that isn't black and white. The effect of the music note easing in looks pretty cool. Although the color of the music paper is yellow which kind of ruined it. If the background of the paper was green it would have looked good ,or if you made the green a dark yellow because the other parts of this level are like that. The game play is annoying and fun at the same time. The complex designs for the blocks look pretty good. The decoration seems to be pretty blank or weird. Seems like you are focusing more on the block design or the sound bar effect. 24% got pretty blank. It could have been improved if you were to add some blocks with the same complex designs over top of your icon ,or add some little decoration above. Block design - 5/10 Game play - 5.5/10 Decoration - 3/10 Effects - 6/10
26% - 45% This part doesn't seem to have much originality because the level Audio Excursion by Goodsmile has a part by Yaro that uses the same part of this song and makes a memory-ball part. Such as what was done on this part of the level. I apologize if it was your intentions to copy off of Yaro's part. I probably wasn't a good idea to use bright blue blocks. It probably could have been better if you used light or dark black for the blocks. If you did that then you could have made the background effect more visible. The effect if the spikes zooming in and out rapidly is good. I kind of goes to the beat in some way which makes it better. Effects - 5.5/10 Game play - 2/10
46% - 64% Now this is good! Specifically the block design is amazing! Love the well-made complex designs you added to the blocks. It seems like you focused more on blocks designs here than the decoration because the decoration seems to only be copy and pasted stars. If this had some well made decoration to it than this could have been equivalent to an Orion level. 56% gets a little blank. There seems to only be the same decoration in the slopes. Which is alright but the decoration is a copy and pasted green pillar thing. Could have been better if there was a variation of decoration added to this part. The game play was pretty fun but kind of boring because it is a long wave part but it is mostly good. Block Design - 7/10 Game play - 5.5/10
65% - 79% This part is actually well designed. The block design isn't complex but it isn't something super simple either. It seems like you got back to the musical theme. The game play is pretty fun but it can get a little annoying. Block Design - 4/10 Decoration - 5.5/10 Game play - 4.5/10
80% - 100% I like the idea of the blocks having a music note on it to give it the musical theme. It seems like you focused more on the block design than the decoration. Only because the decoration seems to be just copy and pasted clouds. The ending looks off because the background turns black but the ground stays as a bright orange, could have been better if the ground also became black. Also the purple text at the ending should have been orange. Decoration - 2/10 Game play - 5/10 Block Design - 5.5/10
Overall, you seem to struggle designing levels. You do well making block design. The game play is already good but it can be better. With these tips you could have a rated or featured level in no time!
Moved to Decent Levels.
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