[ti]Hard[/ti]Galaxium Light - By Zoroamaster [FEATURE WORTHY?]

Art - 5.5/10
Some of the art is good. Just that it seems a little to simple sometimes. Such as the earth on the beginning, it looks good just that it looks a little blank. Some of the "continents" inside are deformed. It would also look better if it had some glow. Just to make it a little better. Try to use this video for reference to make the earth : www.youtube.com/watch?v=FT07ldW7H_I . 30% looks better then the first art. I like how you made at least some block design to it. Although the sun looks weird because it has a lot of glow. Also the dots on the moon would be better if the dots were replaced with glow circles. It kind of took me a while to realize that the background had an earth because it is so dark. 50% has a good effect just that it last for a little too long for a minor effect. 71% has some good art. I love the background. Also the shooting stars are good. I like the add-on of the shooting stars because if it was just that background I would soon get tired of it. I apologize for not having much to say about this level. I'm not the best person to ask for feedback on art.

Game play - 2/10
I know that you focused more on the art but just wanted to say that the game play is too boring. It needs some fun! Usually changing to a lot of vehicles and a lot of obstacles to dodge are good.

Overall, you need a little help making planets. Sometimes they look a little deformed or have to much or no glow. That's about it. If you improve on these your art would be amazing!

I would say this level is a high decent.

Detail: So staring off from the beginning. I can see where you're coming from, a space themed level. I completely understand that. But let's see the detail. The first thing i noticed was the giant earth. And i must say, it does not look very good. It looks like a rubbish attempt to make it, which in this case not good. The earth definitely needs more improvement. Or to just get rid of it. The part would probably look better without it. The stars... I first thought they were scattered all over the space, but i realized that they were just copy pasted copy pasted. This can be used, however you should only do this once. Instead of copy paste, you should make some different star layout. If you know what i mean. For example, you make multiple star layouts, and use them all. Not just one like you did here. Now on with the block detail, definitely needs some improvement. The plain white gives it more of a better look, however it would be nice to see some space themed blocks. Custom created. I have never seen some before, so i thing you should bring it in. Would be a very interesting creation. It would also be pretty cool to see some deco, where the moving objects match the music.
Now the second part, the first thing i knew, it was the same repetitive white blocks. Could be changed with the theme of the sun and moon lunar eclipse. Now speaking of the sun and moon, again looks very rubbish. Definitely needs improvement with those. Now the block detail again, I have no idea why there were those gear thingys inside the blocks. Terrible idea of putting those in there. Get rid of them. Also, I saw one of the blocks where it has the glow things on top, but none on the side. Either get rid of the glow things, or add them to the side also.
Next part: This part definitely needs A LOT more deco. The block deco should be improved. I really liked the background honestly. But there should be some more block deco.
The last part: This part i liked the most. I really liked the background, it was well done. The falling star really added some nice sync with the music. It wasn't awkward or odd, it was done very well. The block deco did fit the theme of this part also. Well done here.
Overall: 4-5/10 Needs improvement at beginning. Needs to start strong, stay strong and end strong.

This part will be very short, as there are only some things to say. There were basically no music sync at all, except the background at the ball part, and the last part. Why do we need music sync you might ask? Music sync adds more flow to the level. It makes the level flow a lot better. So needs a lot more music sync in this level.
Overall: 4/10 Needs more sync.

Welp, gameplay will probably will also be pretty short. The gameplay wasn't that fun at all. Here's the reasons why.
Starting off with the beginning
The first ship part wasn't strong at all. All you had to do was straight fly until the part was done. Very repetitive thing to do here. You should have done something like more ups downs etc. You name it. But just straight flying until it was done was very boring.
The eclipse part
Again same thing. Just click click click then it's done. It almost seemed like a flappy level. What this means was it was very VERY repetitive. Try looking at some successful levels where they have UFO's in them. Try getting off some ideas from them. Just click click click until it's finished is very boring.
Ball part
Same thing. Just click the ball up down up down, like 3 orbs then portals then done. Very very repetitive. I'm gonna say the same thing, get some ideas from successful levels that includes the ball mode in them.
The last part
This part saved the entire level basically, was the only fun gameplay, best deco and good music sync. like i said, needs to start strong, stay strong and end strong.
Overall: 4/10

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4.4/10 Decent or Needs improvement.

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Gameplay: 8/10
Nice, smart, easy to catch, calming and funny, sincerely amazing, but, need a bit of more frenetism to be honest :/, but overall, the gameplay is very good, (Examples: The whole level)
Decoration: 8/10
Very nice decoration here, the first earth part (the first and only ship) may be a little bad detailed, but its just details, also most of the ideas of backgrounds and effects are original as well, apealing to view, and nice to look at. (Examples: Last cube, the ufo)
Sync: 8/10
Very Well synced level, and most of move objects as well, nice
Final Result 24/30 (Good/Featured Worth Level)
Level is fun and awesome, but it should have a bit more of duration, an extension should be good
Needs to improve:
- More Pulsing objects
- More Effects
- More Duration to the level
- More Decoration
- Remove Herobrine

Gameplay:

Not very fun to play. The transitions are annoying, mainly because you can't see what mode you are. In the future, give players a warning what mode is being entered. 5/10

Sync:

I felt the music sync was very awkward, especially at the beginning. It didn't sync very well together. The lag also offset the song for me, so I often had to re-sync. I bet you could improve on this, by making sure that you sync the timing with the music very well. 4/10

Decoration:

For all that the block design was nice and simple, I felt that they were appropriately decorated due to the effects being the main focus. The background causes lag, and with it disabled, the level is too empty. 9/10

Coins:

Not very good coins, they aren't free though, so that's at least good. I'm a Viprin on coins, so this category is very strict for me. 2/5

Originality: Fairly original for the most part. The design idea of the background wasn't but the way you put it together with the blocks was very neat! 4/5

Total: 24/40. Star-worthy, normal 3 stars. In the future, try to make the gameplay more enjoyable and have the sync be more on-point. Other than the sync/gameplay, everything else was great! Also, the coins. Try hiding them in a more hard/more hidden place, but DON'T make them invisible. Have fun creating! 3

So, due to the reasons stated in this video, I would give this a Decent rating. Well done!

Ship Section (0-25%) - The gameplay isn't terrible here, but still has room for improvement. Most of the time you're jut straight flying with very tiny movements in the Y-axis. Try to make your gameplay more dynamic with more stuff to do, rather than repetitive and dull. Adding gravity portals, orbs, and speed portals helps sometimes. Deco-wise, the background is alright. I like how you used multi-layered backgrounds with different timed move triggers to enhance the effect. However, sometimes less is more. In my opinion if you removed some of the stars from each layer and left these bunches of stars, it would look a little better and less cluttered than just all stars across the screen. Also try varying the positions of the stars, the copy-paste is clearly visible and it looks too symmetric. The planet doesn't look half bad, but could have been executed a little better; you could have used a glow around the landmasses to lessen how sharp they look and round off the edges. Finally, the block design was nearly non-existent, the black glow under each obstacle had some strange contrast with all the other objects, and the shape of the obstacles could have used some variation. I would have liked to see a spacey block design in this section, it would complete the look.

UFO Section (26-48%) - The gameplay is a little better here. Much more movement and things to do. The background was pretty good too, although the sun, moon, and black hole were pretty plain. Since this was still in space I think if you had added stars like the previous section it would have looked even better. Again though, the block design isn't that great. If you use glows and add smaller blocks within those big plain blocks it adds a lot of detail and overall makes the final product much better. Some more foreground deco objects would have been nice too, it's looking a little empty in that department.

Ball Section (49-72%) - The gameplay is getting better as we go on. I like it. This part made good use of everything that lacked in previous sections: there were orbs, pads, and portals. What makes this even better is that you balanced the amount of orbs and portals with the amount of obstacles. The background isn't as complex as the previous sections, but this isn't a major problem. What is the problem once again is the lack of block design and foreground deco. Throughout this whole level the background has been attempting to make up for its lack of foreground deco. In this section though, the background is a little plain, which means you need the foreground to cover for it. Once again, you should try to make complex block designs using glows and smaller detail blocks, as well as adding some pulsing objects, spinning decorational gears, etc. Your placement of the regular gears and spikes was on point though. Finally, the coin looks really out of place and kind of throws off the look of the level, it could have been placed better.

Cube Section (73-) - The first thing I run into when I enter this section is a sharp, pointy spike that kills me. In other words, the transition here is way too sudden. Either remove the black fade effect when entering this section, or add a pad to the first obstacle so we at least have some time to react. Anyways, apart from that, the background again isn't bad, but overall needs a little improvement (no not Needs Improvement xd). The house looks a little bit strange, I think if you simply change the color of the roof and add some contrast to it it'll fix itself, and also maybe change the windows so it doesn't look like it goes into a wall xd. The rest of the art looks great, very good use of shading and depth. Finally, the stars again are pretty repetitive. As I said in the first section, delete some stars into groups and vary the distances between them for maximum effect. The block design was better; still not amazing, but better. Simply adding detail to the obstacles in the previous section would have overall mace the level better.

OVERALL:
Gameplay - 7/10 - Overall I wasn't too impressed with the gameplay. No speed changes at all, very little gravity portals and orbs. The only part I really liked was the ball part. Overall, just try to add variation to your ship gameplay instead of mostly straight flying. For UFOs, maybe add some gravity portals to spice it up. And for the cube, do what you did with the ball; orbs, portals, etc.
Decoration - 7/10 - The backgrounds in the level were pretty good for the most part. Again, it still needs a little polishing. For the Earth in the first part, trying smoothing out rough edges. In the second part, try adding some detail to the sun/moon/black hole with glowing circles acting as dust. If you look at a real planet you'll see that it isn't all one color. Simply doing this would make the background look insanely detailed imo. For the last background, all you really need to do is fix the colors with the house. In half of the sections however, there is a copy-pasted and cluttered star background. I said this before in the other parts, but just to repeat: less is more. Finally, you nee to work on your block design and foreground deco. Most of the sections had the background trying to make up for the lack of foreground. Use pulsing objects, spinning gears, more spikes, etc to make complex designs and in turn, make your level better.
Sync- 0.8/2 - Sadly, there is not a lot of sync in this level. Try to match your jumps and click with the beat for an enhanced gameplay experience.

Note: I just realized in my previous reviews my scale was completely screwed up, so the score might not match up with the previous section placings.

FINAL SCORE:
18/30 - Decent
If you fix those minor flaws, you might have a star-worthy level in the making.