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Discord: https://discord.gg/J2HEmhXV3H
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Favorite Level: Rupture / El Dorado
Hardest Demon: Sonic Wave
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Post by Nem5703 on Dec 26, 2016 19:18:41 GMT -5
Name: Empyrean Stars: 3 Creator: Discard
ID: 27584829
My best work yet! Ever! So, so proud of this. I'd appreciate feedback very much!
Intended to be a simple but fun and good looking level.
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90 posts
Discord: https://discord.gg/J2HEmhXV3H
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Rupture / El Dorado
Hardest Demon: Sonic Wave
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Post by Nem5703 on Dec 30, 2016 7:38:49 GMT -5
By the way, it is supposed to be a fairly simple level (but still looks nice). :3
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Post by DubstepJoltik on Jun 18, 2017 11:20:03 GMT -5
Okay then. The gameplay starts off very smooth in the cube part, but then gets a lot more boring later, especially at the wave part and the mini ship part. The coin route seems a little bizarre as well, but nothing too overall terrible about the gameplay. I think a 3-star rating is a good fit, maybe 4 stars. The sync to the song starts off okay, but then gets legitimately terrible later. Toward the end, it looks as though the sync didn't even attempt to match up. Now, this isn't the worst thing ever, because sync doesn't really add to the level's experience as much as other things such as decoration, so it's not too serious. Since this is clearly a "simple" level, I didn't expect a lot of decoration. However, there's a little more thought put into it than I thought there'd be. Some of it looks pretty decent, like the ground decorations in the wave part, while others don't look too good, like the background in the first ship part (it's not the background that's terrible, really, but it's the way it moves). One of my favorite things about the level, though, is the song and how you tried to use the unknown creator's song in the level. While the song isn't a perfect match, it's still a thing I find very admirable. I like how original some parts of the level are too. While some parts look like a typical 2.1 level, like the first cube part and the auto part, others look more original, like the mini ship part near the end. (Just a quick note, I have my own rating system.) On a scale of 0-100% with ≥46% being star-worthy, ≥64% being feature-worthy, and ≥82% being epic-worthy, I want to see this level is about a 55%. It may be a simple level, but it works. Sadly, it doesn't work well enough to be in the "Featured" tab of Geometry Dash, but it still might have a chance at a star rating. Also, quick note. For "Hardest Demon" for you, it says "00adff", which I assume was supposed to go under a color...?
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90 posts
Discord: https://discord.gg/J2HEmhXV3H
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Rupture / El Dorado
Hardest Demon: Sonic Wave
Mini-Profile Background: 1921e6
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Post by Nem5703 on Jul 9, 2017 5:42:04 GMT -5
Okay then. The gameplay starts off very smooth in the cube part, but then gets a lot more boring later, especially at the wave part and the mini ship part. The coin route seems a little bizarre as well, but nothing too overall terrible about the gameplay. I think a 3-star rating is a good fit, maybe 4 stars. The sync to the song starts off okay, but then gets legitimately terrible later. Toward the end, it looks as though the sync didn't even attempt to match up. Now, this isn't the worst thing ever, because sync doesn't really add to the level's experience as much as other things such as decoration, so it's not too serious. Since this is clearly a "simple" level, I didn't expect a lot of decoration. However, there's a little more thought put into it than I thought there'd be. Some of it looks pretty decent, like the ground decorations in the wave part, while others don't look too good, like the background in the first ship part (it's not the background that's terrible, really, but it's the way it moves). One of my favorite things about the level, though, is the song and how you tried to use the unknown creator's song in the level. While the song isn't a perfect match, it's still a thing I find very admirable. I like how original some parts of the level are too. While some parts look like a typical 2.1 level, like the first cube part and the auto part, others look more original, like the mini ship part near the end. (Just a quick note, I have my own rating system.) On a scale of 0-100% with ≥46% being star-worthy, ≥64% being feature-worthy, and ≥82% being epic-worthy, I want to see this level is about a 55%. It may be a simple level, but it works. Sadly, it doesn't work well enough to be in the "Featured" tab of Geometry Dash, but it still might have a chance at a star rating. Also, quick note. For "Hardest Demon" for you, it says "00adff", which I assume was supposed to go under a color...?Sorry for late reply. Keep in mind this level was made in mid 2.0, and my creator skills are so much better now. Thanks for the opinion though! And yeah, I don't know why it's like that. Better fix it. I needed to update it anyway.
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