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Post by kari1337 on Dec 24, 2016 7:44:57 GMT -5
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Post by kiriE on Feb 10, 2017 18:51:47 GMT -5
Gameplay: Wow! This is actually pretty good for an easy level The gameplay is varying gamemodes frequently, you use a lot of speed portals and the sync is really good as well. Not bad at all! Design: Now the design isn't bad, but could need some improvements here and there. First of all, it's bland. The block design is not original and it's very plain and simple. Try to be more creative with the block design, use more types of blocks instead of just one type! And please try to reduce your copy+paste, it's everywhere! Do not copy the same block shapes over and over, use variations. It's old, but this video explains my issue with the level perfectly: www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJ78i9LpvoQ I also want you to add more decorations, many parts are severely underdecorated. Originality: I didn't see much originality here unfortunately. The only thing which was kinda cool was the gameplay, I really liked it, but even the gameplay wasn't anything super unique either. Just try to be more original and use more blocks and variety in your level next time, ok? Music Sync: Not bad at all! The music is very good Some minor issues, but all in all this level syncs really nice to the music. DECENT LEVELS
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