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Post by doctorofdeth on Dec 23, 2016 18:42:01 GMT -5
My best work yet! id: 27478345
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Post by doctorofdeth on Jan 5, 2017 0:47:14 GMT -5
Anyone? Please let me know about my level. Any feedback and/or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
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Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 5, 2017 11:17:33 GMT -5
0% - 14% The block design is kind of off because those two blocks you used don't go well together. It could have been better if you made the outline of the blocks inside the block the same as the ones outside. The decoration is alright ,kind of blank but it is still alright. The game play is fun for a beginning because it is rising to a drop. 6% the blocks look amazing! I see you were focusing here on the blocks more than the decoration because the decoration is blank. The game play is fun still. Block Design - 5/10 Decoration - 3/10 Game play - 5.5/10
15% - 37% This wave part was fun to play. The decoration is good because it is not that over decorated. But some of it looks like it was copy and pasted. I can't really say much about the block design because they all simply have the same design. At 29% the pulsing objects that overlap each other doesn't look good. It could have been better if they were all separated. This whole part was really fun to play. Decoration - 4/10 Game play - 6/10
38% - 56% The game play is fun but the decoration is really blank. The block design is really bad ,it is one block design but the slopes do not look good with those blocks. 42% does have better block design it still looks weird because of the decoration. The decoration looks like it was copy and pasted to much. The rainbows on top at 49% look out of place because it has colors that doesn't go with the decoration. 51% the block design did get better but it has the same problem as the block design at the beginning. Decoration - 4.5/10 Game play - 6/10 Block design - 3/10
57% - 72% Now that custom background is awesome! I can't judge the block design because it seems like you focused more on the effect than the block design. The game play is fun but it little buggy sometimes but not all the time. Effect - 7/10 Game play - 4/10
73% - 93% The block design doesn't look right because of the blocks you used. They have holes in them which kind of messed it up. The decoration is alright ,only because it is a little blank but mostly alright. The game play is really fun. There isn't much else to say. Decoration - 5/10 Game play - 6.5/10 Block Design - 4/10
94% - 100% Kind of went off the theme here because the level was. The decoration was really blank. The game play is alright for an ending. Decoration - 2/10 Game play - 4/10
Overall, you seem to copy and paste to much. Also sometimes you make blank decoration. Lastly try to make block designs that has like a complex design. But never make good block designs when there is an amazing effect. I see you followed that but I was just reminding you.
Moved to Decent Levels.
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