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Post by Awedsy on Dec 19, 2016 7:16:21 GMT -5
 Harder than just normal, :V. Gameplay 9/10: Very Funny, even tho, most of your levels have good gameplay, this one in particular haves the best (FF:1.5 Congrats!!) Decoration: 6/10: Try always to not use the same patterns and colours, it isnt great at all, also, IT NEEDS, MORE BLENDING. (that thing its a meme i created lol xD) Sync: 7 / 10: Decent on the gameplay, but not a good on the auto part. Final Rating: Good Decent: Star Rating Deserved (8.25) The level is simple, fast and funny, but try to Upgrade the quality, by watching some triaxis videos or just ask any good creator by pm  |
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Post by PKPear on Dec 19, 2016 11:59:45 GMT -5
Decoration: The decoration is pretty good. The blocks have decoration inside of them and there is something going on. It feels a bit empty though. 14% however, seems that there is nothing going on. Also, it seems like you have used a bit of copy and paste as the blocks seem very similar to each other. The decoration in the background at the first robot part seems a bit like a mess. LDM does fix this, but then the level once again, looks empty. The block choice at the first ship seems pretty good. There is evidence of the move trigger, but that is not used often. And, there is one thing people will push down your throat is ALWAYS TRY TO USE BLENDING. This will make your level look much better with it. If you don't know how to use it then look up some tutorials. Gameplay: The gameplay is pretty decent. It's not too boring and the level syncs well with the song. But, the gameplay is very sudden. For example, there is quite a bit of falling before and after the ship part, which makes a need to memorise the level, which some people get annoyed with. Also, the gameplay is very slow at the beginning, and gradually speeds up. For me, this makes the level less interesting. At the beginning as well, there are lots of annoying timings with the orbs. This also makes the level less interesting and even more frustrating. The level is also pretty bouncy, which due to your theme of hell, doesn't fit. Hell is a place where there is torture, sadness and neglect. Being bouncing is the equivalent to being happy, which if you think about it, doesn't fit your theme very well. Effort: I can't really see that much effort being put into this level. The robot onward seems like you've used swipe to place the decorations (the background especially) and the blocks seem like they have been copy and pasted (the detail inside the blocks). There is some effort however as you have made the background move and the spikes in the ship. There is also proof of effort as you have changed the colour of the portals and orbs. However, this is pretty common now and this is easy to do. Rating: 12/40 = Decent. Helping Points - Use Blending
- Fit the theme
- Use less Copy and Paste
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Post by traviss1 on Dec 19, 2016 12:24:14 GMT -5
Decoration: The decoration is pretty good. The blocks have decoration inside of them and there is something going on. It feels a bit empty though. 14% however, seems that there is nothing going on. Also, it seems like you have used a bit of copy and paste as the blocks seem very similar to each other. The decoration in the background at the first robot part seems a bit like a mess. LDM does fix this, but then the level once again, looks empty. The block choice at the first ship seems pretty good. There is evidence of the move trigger, but that is not used often. And, there is one thing people will push down your throat is ALWAYS TRY TO USE BLENDING. This will make your level look much better with it. If you don't know how to use it then look up some tutorials. Gameplay: The gameplay is pretty decent. It's not too boring and the level syncs well with the song. But, the gameplay is very sudden. For example, there is quite a bit of falling before and after the ship part, which makes a need to memorise the level, which some people get annoyed with. Also, the gameplay is very slow at the beginning, and gradually speeds up. For me, this makes the level less interesting. At the beginning as well, there are lots of annoying timings with the orbs. This also makes the level less interesting and even more frustrating. The level is also pretty bouncy, which due to your theme of hell, doesn't fit. Hell is a place where there is torture, sadness and neglect. Being bouncing is the equivalent to being happy, which if you think about it, doesn't fit your theme very well. Effort: I can't really see that much effort being put into this level. The robot onward seems like you've used swipe to place the decorations (the background especially) and the blocks seem like they have been copy and pasted (the detail inside the blocks). There is some effort however as you have made the background move and the spikes in the ship. There is also proof of effort as you have changed the colour of the portals and orbs. However, this is pretty common now and this is easy to do. Rating: 12/40 = Decent. Helping Points - Use Blending
- Fit the theme
- Use less Copy and Paste
The review here for the level is pretty good, I think this review has some very good points in it. However, 12/40 is not a decent, this is a needs improvement rating and I will be moving this thread to Needs Improvement due to the fact of the score being so low. Otherwise, the review consists of very good points and it makes its points across, so overall, a very good review. Tips to the reviewer: I did say it was good, but let me add some pointers. Add some more to your explanation to get your point across and for the creator t understand, he will understand ways to improve if you give him examples of levels that use blending, for example. It is hard for someone to understand what blending may be until they see a level. Also, due understand if you got a 12/40 on a test, you would be near 30%, that is nowhere near a decent. Otherwise, good review!  |
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Post by PKPear on Dec 19, 2016 13:29:39 GMT -5
Decoration: The decoration is pretty good. The blocks have decoration inside of them and there is something going on. It feels a bit empty though. 14% however, seems that there is nothing going on. Also, it seems like you have used a bit of copy and paste as the blocks seem very similar to each other. The decoration in the background at the first robot part seems a bit like a mess. LDM does fix this, but then the level once again, looks empty. The block choice at the first ship seems pretty good. There is evidence of the move trigger, but that is not used often. And, there is one thing people will push down your throat is ALWAYS TRY TO USE BLENDING. This will make your level look much better with it. If you don't know how to use it then look up some tutorials. Gameplay: The gameplay is pretty decent. It's not too boring and the level syncs well with the song. But, the gameplay is very sudden. For example, there is quite a bit of falling before and after the ship part, which makes a need to memorise the level, which some people get annoyed with. Also, the gameplay is very slow at the beginning, and gradually speeds up. For me, this makes the level less interesting. At the beginning as well, there are lots of annoying timings with the orbs. This also makes the level less interesting and even more frustrating. The level is also pretty bouncy, which due to your theme of hell, doesn't fit. Hell is a place where there is torture, sadness and neglect. Being bouncing is the equivalent to being happy, which if you think about it, doesn't fit your theme very well. Effort: I can't really see that much effort being put into this level. The robot onward seems like you've used swipe to place the decorations (the background especially) and the blocks seem like they have been copy and pasted (the detail inside the blocks). There is some effort however as you have made the background move and the spikes in the ship. There is also proof of effort as you have changed the colour of the portals and orbs. However, this is pretty common now and this is easy to do. Rating: 12/40 = Decent. Helping Points - Use Blending
- Fit the theme
- Use less Copy and Paste
The review here for the level is pretty good, I think this review has some very good points in it. However, 12/40 is not a decent, this is a needs improvement rating and I will be moving this thread to Needs Improvement due to the fact of the score being so low. Otherwise, the review consists of very good points and it makes its points across, so overall, a very good review. Tips to the reviewer: I did say it was good, but let me add some pointers. Add some more to your explanation to get your point across and for the creator t understand, he will understand ways to improve if you give him examples of levels that use blending, for example. It is hard for someone to understand what blending may be until they see a level. Also, due understand if you got a 12/40 on a test, you would be near 30%, that is nowhere near a decent. Otherwise, good review! Ok. I will next time and I will update my signature to show the new update |
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Post by Awedsy on Dec 19, 2016 20:43:47 GMT -5
dude, i reviewed first :V
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