14 posts
Discord: NicusorN5#6330
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: White Space
Hardest Demon: Virtualization (Easy demon)
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Post by NicusorN5 on Dec 18, 2016 4:27:27 GMT -5
An example of this would be as followed:
Level Name: Blooddust
Level Creator: NicusorN5
Level ID: 27143716
Level Difficulty: Insane 9
Level Lenght: 4 mins
Level Song and Author: "At the speed of light" by Dimrain47
Collaboration / Solo Level : Solo Level
Additional Notes : I can't make an video , not even a auto level (it takes too much time) , instead the level is copyable without any password
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Post by PKPear on Dec 18, 2016 6:40:24 GMT -5
Decoration: The decoration isn't really that great. There isn't a lot of 2.0 blocks and block design is a bit boring. Also, try to use 3D blocks correctly so that the level doesn't look like it took 10 minutes to build. And please add corner blocks. This will make the level look at lot smoother and good to look at. Also, some parts are messier than others, which sort of makes the level inconsistent.
For example, Scorch didn't have corner blocks and when I played that, the level didn't look so appealing. But look at something different with corner blocks, it's nicer to look at.
And maybe you could make a better background decoration?
Gameplay: The gameplay isn't this level is pretty boring (take that as constructive criticism, not as an insult) and the level seems to drag with it being 4 minutes long. Maybe make this level more lively, this would make the level more appealing.
Effort: I can see that some effort was added into the level, but the dedication was not. Why? Well, right at the end, it looks like you swiped the area with the object. So the effort is not so great for a level. And the only reason so many objects are used it because of the little scribbles and length.
4/40 = Needs Improvement.
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14 posts
Discord: NicusorN5#6330
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: White Space
Hardest Demon: Virtualization (Easy demon)
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Post by NicusorN5 on Dec 18, 2016 9:04:41 GMT -5
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Post by artsy on Dec 18, 2016 13:16:45 GMT -5
Decoration: The decoration isn't really that great. There isn't a lot of 2.0 blocks and block design is a bit boring. Also, try to use 3D blocks correctly so that the level doesn't look like it took 10 minutes to build. And please add corner blocks. This will make the level look at lot smoother and good to look at. Also, some parts are messier than others, which sort of makes the level inconsistent. For example, Scorch didn't have corner blocks and when I played that, the level didn't look so appealing. But look at something different with corner blocks, it's nicer to look at. And maybe you could make a better background decoration? Gameplay: The gameplay isn't this level is pretty boring (take that as constructive criticism, not as an insult) and the level seems to drag with it being 4 minutes long. Maybe make this level more lively, this would make the level more appealing. Effort: I can see that some effort was added into the level, but the dedication was not. Why? Well, right at the end, it looks like you swiped the area with the object. So the effort is not so great for a level. And the only reason so many objects are used it because of the little scribbles and length. 4/40 = Needs Improvement. Approved! Moving to Needs Improvement! Thanks for your review. |
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