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Discord: QuantumFlux#0764
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Favorite Level: Slap Squad
Hardest Demon: Nine Circles
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Post by quantumflux on Nov 18, 2016 3:20:46 GMT -5
Name: Eric Van Wilderman
Creator: QuantumFlux (me)
ID: 26458496
Objects: 14k+
Dedicated to EricVanWilderman (obviously). Insane 8*?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 28, 2017 1:18:38 GMT -5
Title: Eric Van Wilderman
Creator: quantumflux
ID: 26458496
Gameplay - 5.5/10
- The third coin could be improved on.
- Decent usage of orbs to make gameplay
- The first coin could be more "obvious"
Decent usage of speed portals also.
More slopes (not just for duals) could make your gameplay more unique.
Some parts of the level (robot jump) are buggy.
The invisible gravity portal the icon shoots at the UFO could catch someone off guard.
Decoration + Block Design - 4/10
- Good attempt of variating the block design.
- The colors in some parts of the level are a bit iffy.
Maybe make the colors red and white? (like EVW) - There is a bit of copy pasted deco in some parts of the level.
Don't Fade works a lot better when it comes to this level.
Good attempt at recreating EVW's iconic icon.
The layering of some of the deco could do with some work.
But at least you used corner pieces.
Music Sync - 3.5/10
- The music sync could do with some changes in this level
- The gameplay in some parts of the level are off sync.
However, the orbs in this level did sync with the music occasionally.
Maybe the lasers EVW's icon shoots could go with the music?
The gravity portal at the first UFO part provides music sync.
More decoration should've synced with the music.
The equalizers on the sides in the first ship part do sync with the music.
As well as the hexagons at the last dual parts.
Final Score - 13/30!
Personally, I think this might belong in High Needs Improvement or Low Decent. haastregt @jy2000 Approve?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 28, 2017 1:36:06 GMT -5
Adding on to repeater's review, the gameplay has a bunch of bad transitions and blind transitions that you could have been simplified a ton. Try to avoid sudden transitions, and make sure your level flows smoothly. Bugs really bring down the level. The block design in some spots are decent, but in other spots are completely nonexistent. Use multiple objects in one block to create a more complex design. The foreground is also really, REALLY empty in a lot of spots, try filling it up with some decorational obstacles or add more gameplay elements to the playing field. Also try to use multiple shapes for your obstacles instead of the plain one block strips. Another thing is a lot of your ship/UFO gameplay is really straight, and your cube gameplay has a bunch of cluttered orbs. Try to balance orbs and blocks, and also make your ship/UFO gameplay a little more dynamic.
This is a pretty tough decision, this level seems Needs Improvement in some places and Decent in others, but I think in the end it's gonna have to be NI, but just inches from Decent if you fix some of the things discussed in the review and my addons.
Review Approved, Moving to NI.
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90 posts
Discord: QuantumFlux#0764
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Slap Squad
Hardest Demon: Nine Circles
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Post by quantumflux on Apr 15, 2017 3:48:14 GMT -5
Oh wow guys thanks for reviewing this! It's such an old bad level now that I look back on it
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