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Post by Anigmus on Oct 27, 2016 18:52:59 GMT -5
I worked really to have cool block design, fun gameplay, as close to perfect as I could sync, and keep it original. And I think it turned out really good. ID: 25925061 rate 4 stars imo. Perhaps this time I will get featured. (I try to keep my hopes up but I'll never get noticed Kappa FeelsBadMan) geocrafter12
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Post by geocrafter12 on Nov 20, 2016 11:16:55 GMT -5
I worked really to have cool block design, fun gameplay, as close to perfect as I could sync, and keep it original. And I think it turned out really good. ID: 25925061 rate 4 stars imo. Perhaps this time I will get featured. (I try to keep my hopes up but I'll never get noticed Kappa FeelsBadMan) geocrafter12 Sorry about taking so long, thanks for tagging me though!! Gameplay: This was pretty good gameplay you made in this level overall! I was able to beat this level pretty easily for its difficulty, nothing really wowed me in this level though and it has a few share of bugs in this level as well, they aren't any major bugs in this level just a few tweaks that could definitely make this level better. First off is the portal at the first cube section, I know you said that I shouldn't jump but my brain keeps telling me to jump there for some reason and I keep dying there. Perhaps you should add some spikes or make the portal smaller to make us not jump because it is very confusing for me since half of my deaths are there. Also sometimes it throws me off that I end up upside down in the flying section, I always would think I was right side up. The 3rd thing which is all the things I found was the bug at 83%, I press the white orb a little early and I die just short of the block, if you place a small invisible platform it would be all fixed just minor bugs you can fix in 5 minutes, nice job on the gameplay! 8.5/10Decoration: The decoration in this level especially the background decoration of this level, is kinda meh, I've seen most of these decoration or similar things like it. One that I don't like is the last one, the white outline hurts my eyes a little bit. It's too out there, it shadows the block design and it makes it hard to see where you are supposed to be going. Either make the design more opaque or make the block design easier to see, preferably both. I don't like that you don't have orb decoration for your orbs, at all. There should be at least something on those orbs, it looks very plain and boring if there isn't, for me. One thing I like a lot is the block design, It looks very nice, fits in to the level very well, looks simple and great. Overall just a few things to fix on the decoration. 8/10
Sync: The Sync is this level is very good, most of the jumps and the portals go very well into the music. Especially the first flying part, that is probably the best part that is synced to the level great job. Although a few jumps could be worked, I found a lot that aren't perfectly synced to the level, like the cubes and ball parts. 4.5/5So the overall total is 21/25 or 8.4/10 this will go in Feature-Worthy Levels
Suggestions: There is some tweaks that should be done in this level like the few bugs in the gameplay that I had mentions and a few things to be worked on for decoration, like the decoration on the orbs and the last part of the level. The white lines make the blocks hard to see you need to fix that part. Good job on this level overall though!
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