[ti]hard[/ti]Time Leaper by Discard (me) ~ 3 - 4 stars

Hello! The level is okay, but there are a few flaws.. in my opinion, the background is not the greatest, as it contains a lot of copy+paste. Also, I like the gameplay, but it seems very buggy at some parts. Overall, the level just needs a few tweaks and its pretty good

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I would say that the level is definitely better than the last level I had reviewed. It had better deco and a vast diversity of design. Yet, it could still be further improved.

The cube & robot segment from 0% to 26% could be further improved. The gameplay was fun to play with, which is that without duplicated gameplay throughout the whole part. Yet, that bunch of green orb somehow makes the gameplay buggy because how the player hits the orb, early or late, or that moment when the cube is right in the middle of the orb, determines how the orb will flip the player, which may cause the player to miss the next green orb, causing awkward crashes. I would suggest using different orbs other than green orbs. As for the decoration, although it was incredibly hard to notice yet making significant contribution to the bg deco, the background circles were divided into two groups and moving in different speed. This makes the decoration not too dull or fixed to the player, which I appreciate that very much. Yet, the part does seemed a bit empty and more foreground deco could be added.

I would rate this part 7/10

The wave part and the ship part from 26% to 41% had a great gameplay and deco, yet there are some flaws that I would like to mention here. The wave part had a new background design and block design. The gameplay also syncs with the music well. Yet there seemed to be a bug where it will lead to a crash when the wave is at the edge of the platform. I think it is due to misplaced platforms which was rotated 180 degrees. As for the ship part, the same platform of the first part had been used, yet it is still ok. There was more decoration, and it does not seem quite empty here.

I would rate it 7.5/10

The segment following after could be further improved. (41% to 63%) The ball part had a great deco which clouds had successfully filled in the empty spaces, and the gameplay which the segment actually move up and down, was enjoyable to play with. One thing I would recommend is that the background could move a bit instead of just following the player. The other parts are just duplicated from the previous parts, which make it feel kinda boring.

I would rate this part 6/10

OK so it is for the cube section and the ball section(63% to 100%). I would say that I appreciate that the platform design for this part was different, and the background decoration was good. Though one thing I would like to say is that the transition from the ball part to the cube part is buggy, which I had ended up crashing either fall or jump to the portal. I would recommend adding one more block of invisible platform below the portal to ensure game consistence. Also, all of the platforms had used the same design, which again gives the boring feel. I would recommend adding more foreground deco
to this part and change some of the platform design .

I would rate this part 6/10

Overall scoring : 7 x (26%-0%) + 7.5 x (41%-26%) + 6 x (63%-41%) + 6 x (100%-63%) =6.49 Decent level


Sorry, but I do really have a lot of school work to do, that I could not review your level in depth. The reason being it is unlike Sad Machine; it has different backgrounds, colours, etc. <- This is what I was told for the description of the level, and I totally agree with it. The level is indeed more colorful and with more deco, yet there are still some aspects you could improve. I enjoyed your level very much and it would be my pleasure to rate your levels again
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