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Post by Lkrboy24 on Oct 17, 2016 19:46:06 GMT -5
This is a "sequel" of a level i made a long time ago, back when i was really bad at creating. (and i probably still am XD) but i've yet to make a good design level so... well... this happened. Any feedback is appreciated, thanks.
Level Name: Inspired
Creator: Lkrboy24
ID: 25697910
(Estimated) Difficulty: 7-8 Stars (more 8 stars)
Song: Sad machine (ardor remix) by TheArdor
Collab/Solo: Solo
Pass: 101072
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Post by Agg on Oct 19, 2016 5:09:14 GMT -5
Well,at first sight,it looks good,with fun gameplay,not buggy,with not much details but nice effects,but with some Copy paste i see in some parts,Original,with good music sync.Found some portal bugs where you can go above it.Anyways,I see that you worked a lot with this,as this is solo,i can say that you had the motivation and inspiration to make all of this. Well, Im gonna give it a 7/10 High-End Star Worthy/Low-End Feature Worthy.  8 Stars |
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Post by milesman34 on Apr 27, 2017 18:58:45 GMT -5
(0-15%)
The beginning has pretty fun gameplay, but some of the slopes are hard to see. You should change the color so they don't look as much like the background color. As for the look of this part, the block designs are pretty good, but some of the background deco appears to cut off, which looks weird. Also, the white clouds just don't work well here. The sync is very good though, as it uses background pulses at key points and is well synced in general.
(15-31%)
The gameplay is also pretty fun here, except for the UFO part, specifically where you have to do some spamming. Spam isn't really that fun in levels, and while this part isn't so bad, it's still a little annoying on mobile. As for the design, it's pretty good, but not much has changed from the last part. You need to add more variety. The music sync is still really good, though.
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The gameplay gets better here, as there aren't really any noticeable flaws. As for the look of this, the design just needs more detail, and the decoration is too similar to earlier parts. However, the sync isn't as good here, due to missing pulses and subpar gameplay sync.
(49-65%)
The problem here is that the spikes in the ball part are invisible. This means that you have to memorize parts of it. You should use visible spikes here instead. The ship part is more fun though. As for the design, it doesn't introduce anything new, which is becoming more of a problem. You need more variety in the design. A good thing is that the music sync is a lot better in this part.
(65-81%)
The parts here are more fun. They have good gameplay. The problem is that the block designs are minimal and the colors aren't really that good. You should improve the color scheme. The music sync is very good in this part, though.
(81-100%)
This part has pretty good gameplay, but the mixed dual is rather hard for a 7-8 star level. It makes the gameplay a bit too unbalanced. The design is also too minimal, and the decoration is a bit too much like the earlier part. The sync also has poor transitions. They should be improved a bit.
Originality
The decoration just doesn't have enough variety. There needs more variation, as it looks somewhat copypasted.
Scores
Gameplay: 15/20
Design: 6.6/20
Sync: 7.7/10
Originality: 0.9x
Total: 26.4/60 (Decent)
Difficulty: Insane 8
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