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Post by FlameShooter on Oct 15, 2016 16:31:35 GMT -5
Just uploaded my best level ! Here are info : Name : Team Flame Creator : FlameShooter (Me) Music : Team A - MadHouseDude ID : 25644613
Sorry for no vid ! I can't record without a phone ! Do you think that's it's good ?
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Post by Spadekilla on Dec 22, 2016 21:04:47 GMT -5
Sorry, but I can't judge the sync of this level because there is no video. And if I have to play this level myself I would lag because I can't have chrome and Geometry Dash open :v 0%-12% The way you presented your name was okay. I probably didn't fully like it because I don't understand what the theme is. Like I thought it was purple and white ,but then I saw black and grey. Also there is a lack of decoration here. Most of the decoration looks like it was copy and pasted. The custom portal for the robot was unnecessary. Also the portal to minimize and normal size the icon is unnecessary. The block designs could be better if you added different kinds of blocks. 1.5/10
13%-32% The game play is alright. Also this part seems pretty blank. Because it lacks a lot of decoration. Also the theme seemed to be purple and pink but then I saw black and white pulsing objects. In addition at 16% the transition into the ball is glitchy. The game play is glitchy too. Probably because of the pink or yellow orb you have to click that is hidden in the block. The decoration looks copy and pasted. Which isn't a good thing. The block design could be better if you used a diversity of blocks. The rise to the drop is quite boring as well. The rise could have been better to if you actually added blocks to the platforms that switched the gravity of the icon. 2/10
33%-43% Okay, so the theme completely changed to blue. Which isn't really a problem. But what is a problem is that it didn't fade to the color of blue ,it just flashed to it. I see you used the same kind of decoration for this. The decoration isn't very good though. It just looks copy and pasted or blank. It could have been better if you added more and did a different style of decoration. The block decoration is okay. You probably already know what I'm going to say that could have made it better. Also at 39% choosing your way is something I'm pretty sure is something I only see when I press the recent side of Geometry Dash. Try making better game play. 2.5/10
44%-53% The color combination of green and blue then adding rainbow blocks isn't very good. The game play isn't very fun. Could have been better if you rapidly switched game modes. This is also quite blank. 1.5/10
54%-60% This dual is kind of buggy ,but when it doesn't glitch out it is fun. So far this levels seems like a normal or hard. The block design is okay. I like the concept of it being different blocks that are a little tilted to each side. The black pulsing objects seems out of place due to its color. The design still looks copy and pasted because I seen those objects already through out this level. 3/10
61%-66% The decoration is okay. The block design is pretty good. The game play is kind of fun. Not when you have to go through the block at one point. The grass that is green looks out of place due to the fact the theme is now orange and the grass is a different color. At 65% the part when your gravity rapidly switches is glitchy. 4.5/10
67%-74% The blue moving blocks look pretty cool. The game play is pretty fun. The design is okay. Could have been better if you added more. That is about it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 5/10
75%-100% All I have to say about this is that the credits lasted way to long. And there should've been like some game play or effects to keeps us something to do or watch. 1/10
Overall, the things you need to improve on is your decoration and gameplay. Some of your game play is quite glitchy so you should learn to make game play that doesn't glitch much. Also your color combinations aren't really good and some things just look out of place. If you improve on these then you'll have great game play!
Moved to Needs Improvement
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