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Post by Zoroamaster on Oct 11, 2016 11:39:26 GMT -5
This was an old 2.0 auto level that I made a while back when I was trying to get used to the 2.0 mechanics. This level was made just so I can get used to making effect levels. And it's a sequel to the first Funimation which won't be there anymore. Hope you enjoy the video. Also thanks @realgravity for judging my Light Show level and for becoming my friend. If you want you can judge this level too
Information in the spoiler:
Level Name: Funimation 2 Creator: Zoroamaster Length: 2min 1sec Difficulty: Auto 1* # of Objects: 30k Level ID: 16138225 Song Name: Chaoz Fantasy Romos Remix Song Artist: Romos Song ID: 595194
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2016 14:44:12 GMT -5
Nice I'll try to judge it tomorrow afternoon and try to convince my parents to skip a day of cross country
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2016 15:58:38 GMT -5
Yay! I got to judge faster than I expected Deco:The first part feels a bit empty, and the stars feel too big and too thin. You should try making them smaller, and at a 0.5 opacity, blending. Same with the blue stars. The ground feels repetitive and symmetrical, and mostly asymmetry works in making grounds. Maybe add a variety. The wind lines feel a bit short, and the moon feels sloppy. The water also feels weird, because you feel underwater. Is that what you were trying to accomplish? Although I am not a big fan of the start, the second part, I enjoy. It was creative and nice when there were colors to split open the paper, to reveal monsters. But that part feels bland. If you added a texture to the white part, it would look very great. The next part looks kind of repetitive and not interesting. Add a variety of music and stars, and maybe replace the background. The closing feels smooth. The next part looks bland, especially the blocks. Maybe use blending and a mix of vibrant colors. I enjoyed how that animation closed with the lasers. The next part looks better than the last. The background feels very dark and, well, there. Maybe make it move around, but not off the screen? I like how the diagonal lasers come down on the rotating 3D cubes, which I like too. When they split to cover up the background, and pulsed, I thought it was great. I also liked it when they all combined into one cube. This part looks nice, but is in desperate need of an opacity change and blending to make it blend, instead of having all of the colors stand out and look sloppy. But I did like how the glow objects turned into a glitchy style glow. I also liked the symmetry, which was necessary unlike the start. I was a fan of the pillars turning next to it. Wasn't this made in early 2.0? That was amazing. I also enjoyed the glass shattering, although it needs to be thinner. But I loved how the effect glitches out with the shattered glass. At the end I enjoyed how the stars followed the words a bit, but like I said earlier; they need to be thicker, smaller, and a lesser opacity and need blending. I also liked how they spelled out your name. One thing I would enjoy is if you put an effect on the words that make them glow and distort, like how most people use it in around this 2.0 age. Nice level! 7.5/10 Total Score:7.5 out of 10 or Good Level, Star Worthy.If you look at my signature, 7.5 is not star worthy. But this is an exception. For an early 2.0 level like this, it deserves to be starred. Again, symmetry when needed, stars thicker, smaller, opacity and blending, and keep up the good work! Rate: Auto 1 star
(I didn't judge gameplay nor sync because it is an animation level.)
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Post by geocrafter12 on Oct 16, 2016 17:08:00 GMT -5
I approve some things you say but I want to point somethings out, imo, I don't think the time it was released matters for the rating, because we should always rate as it was compared to levels today. Also the first part is way to long, you have to sit there for a whopping 45 seconds. Also The colors at the end where it lags should use some work, it does not look good. And the ending part is too long as well. Some blending could've definitely should've been used. Overall I think that this level should be High End Decent.
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