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Please note that my reviews are PROGRESSIVE, I might praise something in PART 1 or 2, and then criticise it harshly in 3 or something, et cetera...
Don't forget the fact that repetitive things WILL have a big chance of being criticised harshly.
BEGINNING SCORES
Gameplay [0/5]
Decoration [0/5]
Music Sync [0/3]
Transitions [0/2]
Coin Placement [0/1]
Creativity Points [0/5]
PART 1: 0-24%
Transitions were smooth and did not involve any blind jumps. [+2
Transitions]
Music Sync was pretty decent. The UFO portal was right on time, good job! [+2.6
Music Sync]
I liked the design, but it was pretty simple and empty. I was also confused as to why 12% and on had a black surface without a line lining, as it looked just a teeny bit weird. Although overused, the effect looked pretty good. The saw designs fit in too. I just wish there were some more decoration. Maybe white dots on the black surfaces and EVEN MORE different sized saws? [+3.6
Decoration]
There wasn't anything special about the gameplay. It wasn't good but wasn't bad either... However, it wasn't memorable. [+2.3
Gameplay]
No coins here.
Creativity Points: None awarded.
BASE SCORES FOR PART 1
Gameplay [2.3/5]
Decoration [3.6/5]
Music Sync [2.6/3]
Transitions [2/2]
Creativity Points [0/5]
Comments: So far,
GOOD LEVELS.
PART 2: 25-48%
So far, all transitions are great, but they're the same. This might have an impact on your Gameplay score, but not Transitions score.. [+1.8
Transitions]
No problems with sync so far... [+2.8
Music Sync]
The gameplay is ALL THE SAME THING. It's boring, boring, boring! There's no excuse for a boring level! Try adding more variety, like Lonely Travel did with its gamemodes, and what Motion did with the speed. [+1.3
Gameplay]
I quite liked what you did with the spikes in the ground, it was pretty good. However, the same effect is still there! There's no variety in design and no variety in atmosphere... It's just dull... Plus, we see this everywhere now! There wasn't even any moving obstacles or decoration apart from the background! [+1.6
Decoration]
No coins here.
Creativity Points: None awarded.
BASE SCORES FOR PART 2
Gameplay [1.3/5]
Decoration [1.6/5]
Music Sync [2.8/3]
Transitions [1.8/2]
Creativity Points [0/5]
PART 3: 49-74%
Ah, nice to see some new things in the background! However, you did not add anything new to the design, and everything in the foreground just looks copied and pasted! (Especially the spikes.) Please think up something new. [+1.4
Decoration]
Gameplay is slightly fun, because of how much more you have to do in this section of the level. This is arguably the turning point of the level. [+3.1
Gameplay]
Still not a single problem with the sync here. [+2.9
Music Sync]
Transitions are still great. [+
1.9 Transitions]
No coins here.
Creativity Points: +0.8
BASE SCORES FOR PART 3
Gameplay [3.1/5]
Decoration [1.4/5]
Music Sync [2.9/3]
Transitions [1.9/2]
Creativity Points [0.8/5]
PART 4: 75-100%
It's really great to see you inverted the colours! Adding the grass and utilising spikes to make the part look even better was a great idea. I did find that you messed up one block of grass directly above the coin though. You haven't added ANY new designs either! Please add new designs! The part gets repetitive quickly, but luckily, this part was rather fun so I forgot all about it! [+3.2
Decoration]
The gameplay was at the peak in this area, as it was the most balanced part in the level! I love it! [+4.3
Gameplay]
...You didn't even try to make the coin creative, didn't you? I think the coin path is even easier than the non-coin path. Please change that ASAP. [+0
Coin Placement]
In the entire level, I did not find much errors in the music sync! Good job! [+2.6
Music Sync]
Buggy transitions were nowhere to be seen in miles, but then again, it's just the same transition over and over... [+1.8
Transitions]
Creativity Points: +1.7
BASE SCORES FOR PART 4
Gameplay [4.3/5]
Decoration [3.2/5]
Music Sync [2.6/3]
Transitions [1.8/2]
Coin Placement [0/1]
Creativity Points [1.7/5]
CALCULATED SCORES (Average)
Gameplay [(2.3 + 1.3 + 3.1 + 4.3) ÷ 4] = [2.75/5]
Decoration [(3.6 + 1.6 + 1.4 + 3.2) ÷ 4] = [2.45/5]
Music Sync [(2.6 + 2.8 + 2.9 + 2.6) ÷ 4] = [2.725/3]
Transitions [(2 + 1.9 + 1.8 + 1.8) ÷ 4] = [1.875/2]
Coin Placement [0 × 1] = [0/1]
Creativity Points [(0 + 0 + 0.8 + 1.7) ÷ 4] = [0.625/5]
2.75 + 2.45 + 2.725 + 1.875 + 0 + 0.625 = 10.425/25
10.425 × 4 = 41.7
41.7/100
Belongs in DECENT LEVELS section.
Whoops, seems like I got my prediction wrong.
