69 posts
Discord: #8015
Favorite Level: Voyager by nasgubb
Hardest Demon: blue
Mini-Profile Background: why
Mini-Profile Name Color: book
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Post by Cirtrax on Sept 26, 2016 5:20:40 GMT -5
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Post by RekindL on Sept 26, 2016 5:44:00 GMT -5
Ok, I going to review this level, so lets go.
Gameplay 4/10
So I know that this level is an auto, but the gameplay is bad-ish. There are some weird parts of the level (Like the part where the platforms slowly rise and launch the player up into the air and other similar gameplay), but overall the gameplay definitely needs to be improved on. I recommend that if you want to make future autos, use more upbeat songs instead of the song you used in the level.
Deco 5/10
Okay. The deco is pretty bad as well, but I'm going to pass on this category. There are some cool ones (Like the animated stick figure and so on), but some of the decoration in your level is low-quality, Especially the beginning of the level. Most, if not all autos rely on deco to really make the level as it is. So this is another suite that you can definitely improve on.
Music Sync 4/10
Ok, another thing that really sets autos apart from other levels is the sync with the music they are using. Unfortunately, this level does not contain the most stellar sync with the music. Of course there are some parts which sync perfectly with the music, but making auto levels requires a good knowledge of syncing with the music, so if you're planning to release more autos, please contain better sync with the music. It just gives people that tingling sensation of satisfaction when they realize that the music goes along with the level well.
Overall 4.3/10
Overall the level can definitely be improved on in many aspects, and I hope you consider my opinions about your level and improve your creating skills based on this. Thanks and have fun ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).
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69 posts
Discord: #8015
Favorite Level: Voyager by nasgubb
Hardest Demon: blue
Mini-Profile Background: why
Mini-Profile Name Color: book
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Post by Cirtrax on Sept 26, 2016 16:30:36 GMT -5
Ok, I going to review this level, so lets go.
Gameplay 4/10
So I know that this level is an auto, but the gameplay is bad-ish. There are some weird parts of the level (Like the part where the platforms slowly rise and launch the player up into the air and other similar gameplay), but overall the gameplay definitely needs to be improved on. I recommend that if you want to make future autos, use more upbeat songs instead of the song you used in the level. Deco 5/10
Okay. The deco is pretty bad as well, but I'm going to pass on this category. There are some cool ones (Like the animated stick figure and so on), but some of the decoration in your level is low-quality, Especially the beginning of the level. Most, if not all autos rely on deco to really make the level as it is. So this is another suite that you can definitely improve on. Music Sync 4/10
Ok, another thing that really sets autos apart from other levels is the sync with the music they are using. Unfortunately, this level does not contain the most stellar sync with the music. Of course there are some parts which sync perfectly with the music, but making auto levels requires a good knowledge of syncing with the music, so if you're planning to release more autos, please contain better sync with the music. It just gives people that tingling sensation of satisfaction when they realize that the music goes along with the level well.
Overall 4.3/10
Overall the level can definitely be improved on in many aspects, and I hope you consider my opinions about your level and improve your creating skills based on this. Thanks and have fun ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). Thanks for the honest review! I had worked on this when I first got geometry dash, and since then, I tried to keep a continuous movement of the level. Thank you for your review and hopefully a mod will see it! 😊 |
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3,278 posts
Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
Mini-Profile Background: 36caa1
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Post by milesman34 on Nov 7, 2016 18:45:51 GMT -5
Ok, I going to review this level, so lets go.
Gameplay 4/10
So I know that this level is an auto, but the gameplay is bad-ish. There are some weird parts of the level (Like the part where the platforms slowly rise and launch the player up into the air and other similar gameplay), but overall the gameplay definitely needs to be improved on. I recommend that if you want to make future autos, use more upbeat songs instead of the song you used in the level. Deco 5/10
Okay. The deco is pretty bad as well, but I'm going to pass on this category. There are some cool ones (Like the animated stick figure and so on), but some of the decoration in your level is low-quality, Especially the beginning of the level. Most, if not all autos rely on deco to really make the level as it is. So this is another suite that you can definitely improve on. Music Sync 4/10
Ok, another thing that really sets autos apart from other levels is the sync with the music they are using. Unfortunately, this level does not contain the most stellar sync with the music. Of course there are some parts which sync perfectly with the music, but making auto levels requires a good knowledge of syncing with the music, so if you're planning to release more autos, please contain better sync with the music. It just gives people that tingling sensation of satisfaction when they realize that the music goes along with the level well.
Overall 4.3/10
Overall the level can definitely be improved on in many aspects, and I hope you consider my opinions about your level and improve your creating skills based on this. Thanks and have fun ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). Review Approved. Moved to Decent. |
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