54 posts
Discord: DevilSpain#6601
Creator Points: 2
Favorite Level: DeadLocked v3
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Post by DevilSpain on Sept 6, 2016 11:49:42 GMT -5
Ey! I did not want to focus on this occasion in the details. Since I'm not a good player , I prefer to create a level gameplay. ID: 24639216
Thx for u time!
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Discord: milesman34#2076
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Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
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Post by milesman34 on Dec 12, 2016 20:19:15 GMT -5
Gameplay (13.2/20) The first cube is pretty fun, although a few unexpected elements are present. However, many problems are present in terms of colored and hard-to-distinguish orbs and portals. Plus the UFO is a bit too spammy in some parts. The ship is pretty good, and you can tell the portals apart pretty easily. However, the robot type part is a bit too confusing due to the messiness as well as fakes, memorization, and too many unexpected moving objects. You do have some fun parts, but they are weighed down by bad gameplay.
The wave part is pretty fun. Even though some objects are invisible, you can tell they are there through the general pattern. The cube also doesn't have problems in the gameplay. The gameplay overall is great until around 80%. That is where you have a rather confusing ball part with too much memorization. Reducing the level of memorization by removing the invisible spikes or making them visible, as well as reducing the number of objects in general, would really improve the gameplay. Things are definitely better after that, but it is still a relevant problem.
The gameplay is pretty fun, but suffers from some confusing memorization parts.
Design (6/20) The first part doesn't look the best. It is a bit too messy, and I think that blending could really improve it. The UFO has a few good parts, but the background pulses are not that good due to their effects on the colors. The black color also isn't that good for the ship, but at least a few cool elements are present.. Then there is the robot part, which is very messy, despite having a cool background. Removing some of the background decorations (not the effect) and/or changing the transparency of the effect, would really improve the look.
The wave is also quite messy, due to negatively overlapping decorations. The designs there are pretty cool and original though. However, in the cube part, the designs are basically a layout. The first background is too messy, and the later parts are too empty. Adding more decoration later on and using transparencies in the first background would improve things a lot. The ball part after that has a few cool ideas, but has too much messiness. You need to change the transparencies to make it look better. The designs also don't have the crystal objects placed well, which should mainly be placed next to 2 connecting line objects.
The next wave also is not that good, due to the empty design and lack of some corner pieces. You need to add all corner pieces, as not having corner pieces displays a lack of effort. The ship part could also have better decoration, as well as fire on the top. You need it to be less empty. The cube part is pretty good, but is too short to really have that work. Meanwhile, in the ball part, the white color is just....meh. It doesn't fit with the color scheme. At least you have a cool effect, but you used it again from earlier in the level. Also, in the UFO, the white background pulses just don't fit well. The ball part is also a bit messy and empty in some parts. The robot could have had more decoration as it had none.
So many parts are too messy, or just have poor aspects or colors. Some parts are also empty. These are vital components of the design which need to be fixed.
Sync (9.4/10) The sync is pretty good. However, one or two parts could really have benefited from the use of background pulses. This is mainly evident in parts with worse sync. Originality (1x) A few parts have original elements, but the fact that you used the same effect in multiple parts hurts that. Total (28.6/60) Decent. Difficulty Easy Demon.
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54 posts
Discord: DevilSpain#6601
Creator Points: 2
Favorite Level: DeadLocked v3
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Post by DevilSpain on Dec 23, 2016 20:23:46 GMT -5
Thx miles for judge
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