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Post by traviss1 on Sept 3, 2016 9:16:15 GMT -5
Sadly because I don't have a YouTube account or Everyplay, etc. I can not have a video for you guys. But, I can tell you the level ID and if you can play through practice that would be good enough. Level ID: 24535598 Level Name: EVW Rating: 8 Stars (Insane) Song: Team A by MadHouseDUDE If you can reply on what you think that would be great. I appreciate all feedback! milesman34 haastregt |
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Post by haastregt on Sept 13, 2016 10:46:27 GMT -5
Okay, lez review dis 8))))))))))))))))))))) ^ mature staff kappa So, Ill start with the gameplay. The gameplay is pretty good, but it has a couple flaws. The good things about the gameplay is that it has some variation, there are a nice amounth of gamemode switches, speedchanges, you use jump orbs, dual mode, slopes, which is all very good. But, there are also flaws with the gameplay. The biggest one is that some spikes or pillars are badly visible. Take the first flying part for example, it is really hard to see where the spikes are, and on top of that the sliders are blocking your view by a bit which makes it hard to see. Later on in the level there are also quite some spikes or other objects that are pretty dark, but those arent that bad. Another tiny flaw is that the wave parts are kinda basic, with that I mean that they are the standard slope stuff, and the dual is also a semetrical slope gameplay. I take the wave as an example, because here you could really place some spikes in the way too, or make you manoevre through some gears, then it doesnt seem so basic. (of course you can still use slopes, but change it up every once in a while for variation). Another good thing with the gameplay though, is that the jumps are really well synced with the music! The design, to be honest I didnt really like the design (sorry). The ball part after the drop and the ufo part just a bit before the drop were kinda cool, they had a nice block design and some decoration, but the rest of the level the overall design wasnt that great. Most block designs were standard blocks, there was very little decoration, and the backgrounds were quite basic too and besides stood out a little too much for a background. What is good again though, is that you did change up the colors and blocks every once in a while, which makes it alot better already  . Also a thing you could do for design is making things move or pulse, so that it seems more alive, and thus looks better. Overall, I would put this in decent, with most of all decoration to improve. If you disagree with this you can always tell me or tag another judge  I hope this feedback helped for your future levels! |
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Post by Mechanguis on Oct 2, 2016 4:14:44 GMT -5
Okay, lez review dis 8)))))))))))))))))))))
^ mature staff kappa
So, Ill start with the gameplay. The gameplay is pretty good, but it has a couple flaws. The good things about the gameplay is that it has some variation, there are a nice amounth of gamemode switches, speedchanges, you use jump orbs, dual mode, slopes, which is all very good. But, there are also flaws with the gameplay. The biggest one is that some spikes or pillars are badly visible. Take the first flying part for example, it is really hard to see where the spikes are, and on top of that the sliders are blocking your view by a bit which makes it hard to see. Later on in the level there are also quite some spikes or other objects that are pretty dark, but those arent that bad. Another tiny flaw is that the wave parts are kinda basic, with that I mean that they are the standard slope stuff, and the dual is also a semetrical slope gameplay. I take the wave as an example, because here you could really place some spikes in the way too, or make you manoevre through some gears, then it doesnt seem so basic. (of course you can still use slopes, but change it up every once in a while for variation). Another good thing with the gameplay though, is that the jumps are really well synced with the music!
The design, to be honest I didnt really like the design (sorry). The ball part after the drop and the ufo part just a bit before the drop were kinda cool, they had a nice block design and some decoration, but the rest of the level the overall design wasnt that great. Most block designs were standard blocks, there was very little decoration, and the backgrounds were quite basic too and besides stood out a little too much for a background. What is good again though, is that you did change up the colors and blocks every once in a while, which makes it alot better already :). Also a thing you could do for design is making things move or pulse, so that it seems more alive, and thus looks better.
Overall, I would put this in decent, with most of all decoration to improve.
If you disagree with this you can always tell me or tag another judge ;)
I hope this feedback helped for your future levels! Agree with haas here. Moving to Decent.
traviss1
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. Also a thing you could do for design is making things move or pulse, so that it seems more alive, and thus looks better.
