Post by azzianpotato on Sept 1, 2016 6:36:58 GMT -5
What i do with filling up the section, to make it look more professional, i add username, level id, level length, requested stars, music, and some of your own description of the level, but its your choice on how you post
Post by milesman34 on Sept 23, 2016 19:03:30 GMT -5
Length: 1 minute and 4 seconds 0:00-0:26 (40%) The gameplay is very fun. There aren't really any problems. The fade at 0:13 was implemented well.
The designs are pretty good in the first part. The wave part could use the blocks that are more corner-piece-like (not sure exactly how to describe it, but I hope you know what I mean) to make it look better. Decoration is pretty good, although the bricks overlap too much in the wave. Background is good, and I like the fade. You should use the moving object trick at the beginning though, to make it look less cut off when it enters.
The gameplay sync is pretty good. It would be better if the background pulsed to the song to back up parts that aren't as well synced. This part contributes 4 points to gameplay. (160) This part contributes 2 points to design. (80) This part contributes 1.5 points to sync. (60)
0:26-0:54 (44%) The gameplay is generally pretty fun. I think you should make the gears brighter, to make them stand out more against the background in the first few parts. That would make them more visible.
The designs could be varied more and improved upon. I like how they are semi-transparent in the ship part, though. The first background is kinda messy. Moving some of the pulsing objects closer together (as in the individual pairs) could help. I like the second one though. How did you make those curved objects? They are very good.
Its kinda similar to the last part sync-wise. The gameplay sync is pretty good. Pulsing backgrounds would help improve the sync though. This part contributes 3 points to gameplay. (132) This part contributes 2.5 points to design. (110) This part contributes 1.5 points to sync. (66)
0:54-1:04 (16%) The gameplay is very good. There aren't problems here. One thing to know, though. Did you reach the object limit? I'm asking because the end feels a little cut off. That isn't really a problem though.
The designs are definitely interesting in how they look. The background is also really good.
The sync is very good in this part. This part contributes 4 points to gameplay. (64) This part contributes 4 points to design. (64) This part contributes 2 points to sync. (32)
Gameplay (17.8/20) The gameplay is generally very fun. The only problem is some hard-to-see gears around halfway through. Design (12.7/20) A few parts are a bit messy, but it gets a lot better later in the level. Sync (7.9/10) The sync is pretty good. Background flashes could have been used to improve it though. Originality (1.1x) This level has lots of original backgrounds. Total (42.2/60) Feature Worthy. Difficulty 5