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Post by Meowerdoom on Aug 26, 2016 20:35:56 GMT -5
I started this level as just some "if electrodynamix was l1" and shortened to LCTRDNMX. Now I dropped the l1 bit and did my first real attempt at a non-auto level. So far a medium level (wip) trying to get different decoration for each portal.
Unrated.
First real attempt at non auto.
ID is 24312741
Name is LCTRDNMX, all caps.
No hate, only constructive criticism please.
Also insert shameless self advertising.
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Post by flash on Aug 27, 2016 1:51:11 GMT -5
0% - 100%
Usually i'd layout with each section, but this level is really similar the whole way.
Gameplay is not very good. gets a bit too hard towards the end, and is kinda buggy around 90.
Design is really bad. i don't mean to be rude, or hateful, but the colour usage is absolutely horrible. it needs tons more deco and blending.
also, colours. really, really need a lot of work.
The Sync i couldn't judge properly, as i couldn't find a video, and i didn't want to learn the whole level.
What i could see, was pretty good though.
1/10. The only upside is some decent gameplay and some sync.
Overall
I can see some good ideas, and with practice you can become a good creator. please don't take my review as insulting. IMO design is more important than gameplay, and your level lacked decent design.
i can be a bit harsh, but don't feel bad.
1/10 = Needs Improvement.
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Post by Meowerdoom on Aug 27, 2016 7:27:38 GMT -5
It's fine, but I was trying to aim for more simplistic designs anyway. I have been working on nerfing the end a bit, and I'm also fixing the bugs on 90.
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Post by flash on Aug 27, 2016 16:22:21 GMT -5
It's fine, but I was trying to aim for more simplistic designs anyway. I have been working on nerfing the end a bit, and I'm also fixing the bugs on 90. no problem, one thing i forgot to mention was to change up the ground colour. also, experiment using blending. it'd really help.  |
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Favorite Level: Digital Control
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Post by Meowerdoom on Aug 27, 2016 16:33:26 GMT -5
Oh yeah I noticed the ground color, and there is no way to change the pattern. I'm trying to make a simpler, more... official GD-style level, and so I don't really want to use all the fancier stuff. I am doing a sort of lightning effect but now I cant verify lol.
Edit: okay I did it, it is now rated Long so yay.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2016 18:01:20 GMT -5
Oh yeah I noticed the ground color, and there is no way to change the pattern. I'm trying to make a simpler, more... official GD-style level, and so I don't really want to use all the fancier stuff. I am doing a sort of lightning effect but now I cant verify lol. Edit: okay I did it, it is now rated Long so yay. Personally, you should go for the fancier things. Because most featured levels in GD are using 2.0 stuff, and this is a 1.7 ish styled level. |
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Post by Meowerdoom on Aug 27, 2016 20:06:24 GMT -5
But... that's what I'm going for...
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Post by Meowerdoom on Aug 30, 2016 10:41:23 GMT -5
I added coins :3
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Post by artsy on Dec 20, 2016 12:26:00 GMT -5
0% - 100%
Usually i'd layout with each section, but this level is really similar the whole way.
Gameplay is not very good. gets a bit too hard towards the end, and is kinda buggy around 90.
Design is really bad. i don't mean to be rude, or hateful, but the colour usage is absolutely horrible. it needs tons more deco and blending.
also, colours. really, really need a lot of work.
The Sync i couldn't judge properly, as i couldn't find a video, and i didn't want to learn the whole level.
What i could see, was pretty good though.
1/10. The only upside is some decent gameplay and some sync.
Overall
I can see some good ideas, and with practice you can become a good creator. please don't take my review as insulting. IMO design is more important than gameplay, and your level lacked decent design.
i can be a bit harsh, but don't feel bad.
1/10 = Needs Improvement.
Good review, however, it should have a bit more detailed. I like how you gave some tips and improvements, and so, moving to Needs Improvement. |
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106 posts
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Favorite Level: Digital Control
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Post by Meowerdoom on Dec 21, 2016 11:48:30 GMT -5
K look this is just my first level. I personally think I've improved a lot, and this was intentionally made to look more 1.8-1.9-ish. I'm currently working on Caps Locked and Epic Fetus. One is a Deadlocked remake, the other is a TBOI-themed pixel art level. I've also released a few previews of scrapped levels. May revisit.
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