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Discord: #0979
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Post by Jump4lifevr on Aug 24, 2016 0:33:27 GMT -5
Name: Stuck ID: 24278570 Rating: ~5-7 stars Just looking for some feedback. Thanks for checking it out! I realize this level isn't very original/bad gameplay but any feedback would be appreciated...
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Post by kiriE on Dec 8, 2016 15:06:48 GMT -5
This is a very weird level, because at some points this level is actually pretty cool, while others it's really, really bad. Gameplay: The level had alright gameplay which synced very well to the song! It was all in all pretty fun to play, but a bit confusing here and there, it felt a little weird to have more gameplay in the level after calling it a victory I don't like the transition at 0:21, and at 0:31 the consistency of the gameplay gets very flawed. What I mean is, suddenly it gets way more difficult than it was, making the gameplay unbalanced. Design: I liked the effect in the first part, the webs and of course: the confetti But the level is WAY too empty in terms of decoration, add more decoration please! You need to tick on "blending" on your colors as well, and the color combinations could be more clever to be honest. Red and black is also very unoriginal. The rainbows have an awful color and are placed incorrectly. The water/lava is basically floating in the middle of the air at 0:19 and it looks terrible: Please make it stand on something and please make the color a bit more blended out, it is way too bright at the moment. Music Sync: Amazing! Gameplay is synced very well. I love the wave at 0:18! <3, and so is the flashes! I can clearly see that you've put loads of effort into this aspect of the level. Originality: The song choice was interesting, and the effects at the start were also pretty cool. I also loved the confetti part! The rest was pretty unoriginal and made the level a bit uninteresting to be honest, but it's hard to be original these days. DECENT LEVELS
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12 posts
Discord: #0979
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Post by Jump4lifevr on Dec 11, 2016 3:49:34 GMT -5
Thanks so much for someone actually reviewing this level even though I made it in August and it's now December... I haven't really gotten feedback from anyone at all before on my levels. I agree on the gameplay being very unbalanced. Pretty sure I had no idea what to do for gameplay at the end of the level so it got really bad because I thought the level should be longer after the "victory". Add more decoration as in what? Also what do you mean by the rainbows are placed incorrectly? I build and play on an iPhone so I think placement and colors are hard to do. I'm sure this sounds very noob-like but in terms of blending how does that actually work? Does it just blend all the colors in that spot or the background...Glad you thought the music sync was good. Also I'm glad you liked the start effects, webs, and confetti. They were my favorite parts too. Thanks again!
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