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Post by lavaloid on Aug 14, 2016 4:44:21 GMT -5
So, I finally finished my first serious level, New End. I'm open to any kinds of criticism, be as harsh as you want! Level name : New End ID : 23245833 Song : Holography by garlagan (ID : 561616) Video : Looking forward to seeing this in the Needs Improvement sub-forum
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Post by geocrafter12 on Aug 14, 2016 20:01:39 GMT -5
So, I finally finished my first serious level, New End. I'm open to any kinds of criticism, be as harsh as you want! Level name : New End ID : 23245833 Song : Holography by garlagan (ID : 561616) Video : N/A, too lazy Looking forward to seeing this in the Needs Improvement sub-forum Harsh as you want? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Gameplay: Some parts are good, some parts are bad. Like at the Robot part at 17%. I've had trouble because it gives you little time to jump. Plus I don't like the ball part, I don't like that you are just going from floor to ceiling and the dark green spikes with the brown background make the spikes hard to see. Plus the duel part at the end is VERY annoying, you have sooo little reaction time as it transition from each cube. It'll take a lot of memorization to pass that part in the end. Although there are some bad parts, There are some good parts as well. The UFO is honestly the best part in terms of gameplay. Btw I think the transition from the UFO to the wave could've been done better. And the flying part and the first cube honestly has very good gameplay. You just need to work on the other parts. 5/10Decoration: Same as gameplay, some parts are good, some parts are bad. An example is the first part, it's too blue, all of the decoration in that part look like the exact same color. You should have a more variety of colors or at least different shades of blue. Cause honestly the decoration looks the same. Btw I also don't like that you put the glow in front of the black spike things. (Don't know what those are called...) Usually they are behind it. Also you picked the wrong clouds in the first part, Those are for the ground, Use the clouds in the other section for the air. Also there are some problems in the ball part, like the dark green spikes in the brown back ground. Honestly I find this part very ugly overall. I don't like the dark outline it just looks dark green and brown all over and it just doesn't look good. Put other than that, the decoration is pretty good. The flying part looks good. The Ufo is good, honestly the UFO part is the best part of the level, and the duel part has some good decoration too. Overall not bad. 6/10Sync: Honestly I find the sync pretty good overall, not really any problems here. 5 /5So the overall total is 16/30 or 5.3/10 so it's rated DecentSuggestions: The parts that need work on gameplay is the Ball part, The Robot part and the Duel part. You should have better reaction times so the players can get through it and they don't have to memorize it. Plus going from ceiling to floor isn't very good and landing on some block would be very nice. The parts that need work on deco is the Cube/robot and the ball part. You need to have a more variety of colors instead of just blue and maybe put some different shades of blue to make it look good and blend more into the level. Good for being your first serious level. Keep improving and learning and you become a great creator!
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Post by lavaloid on Aug 15, 2016 2:35:32 GMT -5
So, I finally finished my first serious level, New End. I'm open to any kinds of criticism, be as harsh as you want! Level name : New End ID : 23245833 Song : Holography by garlagan (ID : 561616) Video : N/A, too lazy Looking forward to seeing this in the Needs Improvement sub-forum Harsh as you want? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Gameplay: Some parts are good, some parts are bad. Like at the Robot part at 17%. I've had trouble because it gives you little time to jump. Plus I don't like the ball part, I don't like that you are just going from floor to ceiling and the dark green spikes with the brown background make the spikes hard to see. Plus the duel part at the end is VERY annoying, you have sooo little reaction time as it transition from each cube. It'll take a lot of memorization to pass that part in the end. Although there are some bad parts, There are some good parts as well. The UFO is honestly the best part in terms of gameplay. Btw I think the transition from the UFO to the wave could've been done better. And the flying part and the first cube honestly has very good gameplay. You just need to work on the other parts. 5/10Decoration: Same as gameplay, some parts are good, some parts are bad. An example is the first part, it's too blue, all of the decoration in that part look like the exact same color. You should have a more variety of colors or at least different shades of blue. Cause honestly the decoration looks the same. Btw I also don't like that you put the glow in front of the black spike things. (Don't know what those are called...) Usually they are behind it. Also you picked the wrong clouds in the first part, Those are for the ground, Use the clouds in the other section for the air. Also there are some problems in the ball part, like the dark green spikes in the brown back ground. Honestly I find this part very ugly overall. I don't like the dark outline it just looks dark green and brown all over and it just doesn't look good. Put other than that, the decoration is pretty good. The flying part looks good. The Ufo is good, honestly the UFO part is the best part of the level, and the duel part has some good decoration too. Overall not bad. 6/10Sync: Honestly I find the sync pretty good overall, not really any problems here. 5 /5So the overall total is 16/30 or 5.3/10 so it's rated DecentSuggestions: The parts that need work on gameplay is the Ball part, The Robot part and the Duel part. You should have better reaction times so the players can get through it and they don't have to memorize it. Plus going from ceiling to floor isn't very good and landing on some block would be very nice. The parts that need work on deco is the Cube/robot and the ball part. You need to have a more variety of colors instead of just blue and maybe put some different shades of blue to make it look good and blend more into the level. Good for being your first serious level. Keep improving and learning and you become a great creator! Whoa, that's some detailed review. Thanks! I'll try to improve it.
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Post by kiriE on Aug 17, 2016 16:04:07 GMT -5
Approved Moving to decent levels. This is actually a pretty cool level, I love the last parts! The sync in this level is also very good. However the first two parts clearly needs work, especially in terms of design, and as Geocrafter said, give enough time for the player to react to the upcoming obstacles I'd say this is high-end decent levels!
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Post by lavaloid on Aug 18, 2016 18:31:02 GMT -5
Approved Moving to decent levels. This is actually a pretty cool level, I love the last parts! The sync in this level is also very good. However the first two parts clearly needs work, especially in terms of design, and as Geocrafter said, give enough time for the player to react to the upcoming obstacles I'd say this is high-end decent levels! Thabks! That was quick.
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