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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2016 21:03:54 GMT -5
My best level. [28k Obj] (Entry to Legowanwan's contest) NOTE: I was lagging. I had to pause the level from time to time to sync the level's music, if it is off-sync at the parts, that's why. ONLY IN VIDEO: Off-Sync areas 2nd Cube, 3rd Cube (city), Robot, UFO, up to the ship (city), Final Cube (only half) ID: 22400452 Hope this is good enough for a feature, rate at least? Thanks. (Hard 5-Harder 6?) |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 13:58:49 GMT -5
Update: - Reduced lag by replacing start BG - Added BG to ship part - Changed BG color at 2nd city part - Fixed BG at ball part - Added more to the BG at last cube - Added more effects to the grounds  |
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Post by milesman34 on Sept 9, 2016 17:02:17 GMT -5
Not judging sync due to lag. Also going to stop doing Initial Thoughts because of vagueness and it doesn't work as well in my reviews. 0-20%The gameplay generally isn't that bad. However, the ship is a little boring due to its length and it having the same obstacles. This could be fixed by replacing some parts with a different section. The cube part is pretty fun though. The design isn't too bad. The first cube part is quite messy and a little copy-pasted though. Also, the glow effect has a weird cut-off that looks bad. Making it go all the way through or adding fake blocks there to stop it would really improve it. Its a serious problem because it happens everywhere in the cube part. The sun part is pretty good, although the clouds are a bit copy-pasted. Also, the art could be improved.
This part contributes 2 points to gameplay. (40)
This part contributes 1.5 points to design. (30)
20-53%I find that the gameplay is pretty good. One of the problems though would be the ball part where in the beginning its a little hard to tell if there is gameplay or if it is auto. The decoration isn't really too good. The first cube part here is rather empty and a bit copy-pasted. After that, you have a city part that is too messy. Adding blending to the water might help, but clearing it up a little or making the backgrounds more transparent would help. Also, the ball part is a bit copy-pasted. Add more varied decoration there. Doing this might improve the part.
This part contributes 3 points to gameplay. (99)
This part contributes 1.5 points to design. (49.5)
53-100%The gameplay is pretty good. However, the ship is a little weird. Maybe making the ship portals visible and only having them at the key parts may help? The city part is a bit messy like the last one. The next ship part also has the problems of copy-pasting. This could be fixed by adding more varied deco. The final part is pretty good though. I like the cool effects.
This part contributes 2.5 points to gameplay. (117.5)
This part contributes 2 points to design. (94)
Gameplay (16/25)This level has pretty good gameplay, but a few parts have flaws. Design (10.8/20)Copy-pasting and messiness are frequent problems within this level. SyncOriginality (1.1x)This level has a bunch of original ideas within it, but not the best execution. Total (29.5/60) Decent. Difficulty 6  |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 10, 2016 8:11:15 GMT -5
Alright, I'm making some sort of continuation or sequel, probably not for this level, but maybe. Thanks for the review though. I'll take your review into consideration while building this one.
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