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Post by XilaskaR on Aug 5, 2016 16:23:07 GMT -5
Face the darkness that makes your mind go numb...
75k objects...
2 months to build...
Harder than CC...
Harder than THF...
Welcome... To Tenebrus...
Have no ID because it hasnt been verified. However Victim said that he would beat it after Kurumi City... So we just have to wait.
Dedicated to Manix648 and lVictimm
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Post by qwertyqwertz on Aug 5, 2016 18:12:16 GMT -5
Hey! I'm going to judge the level  Design: Decorated very well and awesome effects! The colour changes add a nice effect to the level and it goes with the music! I give you 20/25 Gameplay: The gameplay looks very fun, and as you can see in the Originality and Idea section, some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it's still looks fun and it's really cool! I give you 18/25 Originality and Idea: You never see any dark and grey levels with a fast-paced song, and it makes it really nice looking! Some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it still looks very fun, and it's very cool! I give you 16/25 Music Sync: For some reason the music sync wasn't too good. once or twice when it came to a new section in the level, it stayed at the same mode, for example the wave. I'm sorry to say that you get 7/25 Overall: The whole level was amazing! In my opinion this is definitely feature-worthy. I might get one of my friends, who is a level judge to look at it too! I give you 20/25 @creator GMD Total: 81/125. Awesome score man! Good luck! Sadly I cannot send this in or anything because i'm not a level judge, but as I said before, i'll get my level judge friend to check it out! Best of luck to you man! |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Aug 5, 2016 18:13:52 GMT -5
Design: 9.4/10 Designs look very great and look as they had much effort put forward to them. I would make some changes too for better designs though. Loved them still after these flaws I found! 1. 16-19% UFO in the beginning. The black saw-blades seemed very clustered, leading to me and possibly some other players to dislike that type of design. I would lessen the amount of those saw-blades, and replace some with different harmful objects such as a ball of spikes. (Get 1 spike, flip it, copy and paste the spikes, rotate them, copy and paste them, and rotate once more 45*.). 2. 40%'s color change. I personally didn't like the change of the theme, but the colors matched greatly. I would mix some red and gray in the theme change to keep one theme together, and not confuse people on what theme they are seeing. 3. 73-79%'s wave and rocket ships (Mini). I would lessen the amount of white orbs that move to the beat of the song to better improve the gameplay and lessed some bad looking parts for that. I see how it would look if you lessened the amount of them by a little, and they look perfect! Gameplay: 9/10 Gameplay was solid at some points, but had some repetitiveness at some points as well. I loved the beginning and ending gameplay the most. It fascinated me mostly  1. 6% mini rocket ship with the very small red spikes. Those seemed a little repetitive in the beginning. I would change some colors of the spikes up to make it look as a color pattern. Black and Red  2. 13-19%'s UFO (mini). The black saw-blades were the most repetitive in the beginning. I would really change some sizes of some, remove some and replace them with spike balls, and maybe use a different type of harming object. 3. 40%'s color theme change. Personally and maybe to some other players, I would really keep one color theme, or mix colors and keep the same color theme noticeable. Maybe you could use black, gray, white, and red! 4. 87-88%'s UFO at the end's beginning. The saw-blades were repetitive, but not as much as the beginning. I would use some spike balls like I suggested before, and remove the ones you will use for spike balls. Music Sync: 9.7/10 Some parts had very off beats. Transactions were mostly off sync and either too late or too early. I also though that the song with the theme's change didn't quite fit the level, but it fit somewhat. 1. 2-3%'s wave. The part where the wave went down into the mini ship didn't quite fit the sync well. I would change instead of going down, keep going up and have a teleporter ready at the rocket. 2. 76-83%'s rocket's speed. The speed of the rocket ship didn't seem to fit the music's speed and mood. I would keep the x2 or 3 speed of the ship to improve this mistake. Overall: 9.3/10 My Opinion: Move to Feature Worthy | Feature 1st page, 4th place | Rate  10 stars. All this for the NON Auto version btw  |
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Post by XilaskaR on Aug 6, 2016 5:01:36 GMT -5
Hello everyone, thanks for your support and your critics, I really apreciate it =]
The change of theme from Red to Gray was to make it original. If the level was all red or all grey people would start prejudging it and clasifying it as "another generic red extreme demon" like what happened with Bloodlust or WcropoliZ. So I tried to change it color after drop. This also helps with a hidden story I tried to put within the level.
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Aug 6, 2016 9:53:44 GMT -5
Hey! I'm going to judge the level Design: Decorated very well and awesome effects! The colour changes add a nice effect to the level and it goes with the music! I give you 20/25 Gameplay: The gameplay looks very fun, and as you can see in the Originality and Idea section, some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it's still looks fun and it's really cool! I give you 18/25 Originality and Idea: You never see any dark and grey levels with a fast-paced song, and it makes it really nice looking! Some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it still looks very fun, and it's very cool! I give you 16/25 Music Sync: For some reason the music sync wasn't too good. once or twice when it came to a new section in the level, it stayed at the same mode, for example the wave. I'm sorry to say that you get 7/25 Overall: The whole level was amazing! In my opinion this is definitely feature-worthy. I might get one of my friends, who is a level judge to look at it too! I give you 20/25 @creator GMD Total: 81/125. Awesome score man! Good luck! Sadly I cannot send this in or anything because i'm not a level judge, but as I said before, i'll get my level judge friend to check it out! Best of luck to you man! Sorry didn't see ur review . Anyways, good review except you should add more detail to it in an edit. Good review btw for starts! btw, tag me like this @ gmdestroyer or @ creatorgmd without the spaces lol. Review Approved, and moving to Feature Worthy. Just add a bit more detail in a edit please or add more detail in future reviews |
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Post by qwertyqwertz on Aug 6, 2016 18:58:52 GMT -5
Hey! I'm going to judge the level Design: Decorated very well and awesome effects! The colour changes add a nice effect to the level and it goes with the music! I give you 20/25 Gameplay: The gameplay looks very fun, and as you can see in the Originality and Idea section, some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it's still looks fun and it's really cool! I give you 18/25 Originality and Idea: You never see any dark and grey levels with a fast-paced song, and it makes it really nice looking! Some of the gameplay isn't very original, but it still looks very fun, and it's very cool! I give you 16/25 Music Sync: For some reason the music sync wasn't too good. once or twice when it came to a new section in the level, it stayed at the same mode, for example the wave. I'm sorry to say that you get 7/25 Overall: The whole level was amazing! In my opinion this is definitely feature-worthy. I might get one of my friends, who is a level judge to look at it too! I give you 20/25 @creator GMD Total: 81/125. Awesome score man! Good luck! Sadly I cannot send this in or anything because i'm not a level judge, but as I said before, i'll get my level judge friend to check it out! Best of luck to you man! Sorry didn't see ur review . Anyways, good review except you should add more detail to it in an edit. Good review btw for starts! btw, tag me like this @ gmdestroyer or @ creatorgmd without the spaces lol. Review Approved, and moving to Feature Worthy. Just add a bit more detail in a edit please or add more detail in future reviews Thanks for the help! |
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