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Post by edavis on Aug 5, 2016 5:26:25 GMT -5
Hello everyone, check my new level called Around the world. My nick in the game is iDavis.
ID: 16206024
Check also my previous levels, like Tunnel of Terror and Find the other way.
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Creator Points: 100
Favorite Level: VeriTy by Serponge
Hardest Demon: a
Mini-Profile Background: c
Mini-Profile Name Color: b
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Post by Geometric123 on Aug 5, 2016 8:01:55 GMT -5
Please give ID, read the rules. Make sure you edit this to include it or this thread will be locked.
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Post by edavis on Aug 9, 2016 9:50:25 GMT -5
I'm sorry for ID, I'll add ID there.
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Post by kiriE on Dec 9, 2016 17:30:28 GMT -5
Wrong ID, but found your level don't worry. Apologize for the extremely long wait time ;3;
Gameplay: Bland and not synced very well to the music. Try to make the gameplay more interesting by putting more speed changes, portals and obstacles. Cut down on the memorization. Sync the gameplay more to the music by timing it to the beats of the song, and make every transition timed as well (the gamemode changes e. g.)
Design: Very, very, very bland and non-existant. There's very, very little air decoration, this is required for a high-quality level. Many, many blocks/block designs are basically placed incorrectly, and some blocks are floating randomly in the middle of the air; make them have a natural position. Color combinations are alright, but some of the red you've used are too bright and clash too much together. Tone it down by ticking on "blending". The lines on the blocks are also fairly often been placed incorrectly. Try looking at some tutorials on YT to improve the design + decorations, because this level shows very little of it.
Music Sync: Basically non-existant and the song choice is also very unoriginal and boring. Choose an original custom song next time, and try to sync the gameplay, design and colors more with the music. Without music sync I basically see no point with having music playing in the background because it just gets meaningless.
Originality: This level contains basically no originality. No original block designs or gameplay is being introduced, and the "traveller" concept have been used extremely many times before.
NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
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