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Post by Anigmus on Aug 2, 2016 16:50:54 GMT -5
I just finished a collab with adasba and I think it's looking really good. Originally I was going for XL demon so I made the difficulty around 8 stars. Unfortunately I ran out of objects at about 1:30. But it might still be long enough for easy demon but idk. The level goes by pretty quick in practice mode so don't get too intimadated by the first 4%, it's hard to get the hang of. If you don't want to go through it though feel free to copy it and check it that way. Here's the id: 22186413 hopefully featured Also just made a video on it here's the link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TEV23Z9a9U
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Post by Anigmus on Aug 8, 2016 11:06:36 GMT -5
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Aug 29, 2016 6:22:47 GMT -5
Will judge it once I get home from school (Around 3-4 PM)
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Post by Anigmus on Aug 31, 2016 13:48:40 GMT -5
Will judge it once I get home from school (Around 3-4 PM) Ripperino
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Sept 1, 2016 6:15:32 GMT -5
Will judge it once I get home from school (Around 3-4 PM) Ripperino I'm forgetful ;-; I promise I'll judge on Friday
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Post by Anigmus on Sept 1, 2016 9:37:00 GMT -5
I'm forgetful ;-; I promise I'll judge on Friday It's fine lol. Don't worry about it
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Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: The Dragon's Lair (Nacho), Bloodbath
Hardest Demon: FF0000
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Post by MrStormm on Sept 1, 2016 9:48:07 GMT -5
i would say this is a 9
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Sept 1, 2016 16:49:31 GMT -5
I'm forgetful ;-; I promise I'll judge on Friday It's fine lol. Don't worry about it Well my parents don't allow me on technology on the week Days (I obviously do it anyways hiding) so that's why I judge on the weekends only
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Post by Anigmus on Sept 3, 2016 20:23:42 GMT -5
It's fine lol. Don't worry about it Well my parents don't allow me on technology on the week Days (I obviously do it anyways hiding) so that's why I judge on the weekends only Kek
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Sept 3, 2016 20:50:09 GMT -5
Taking a breat rn, my hands hurt from typing XD (I saved the review in a .txt file to load later)
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Sept 4, 2016 12:31:42 GMT -5
Design: 7.9/10 1. First normal UFO triple speed. I don't think the colors looked so good. Try using these colors: (Spikes: Red Blending, Platform lines: Orange Blending.) 2. Adasba's purple themed part. I didn't think that there were enough designs there in that part of the level, so I would try adding some 2.0 clouds with purplish pink blending, 3D Platforms, or this: (4 Corner Glow Pieces. Create a ball with them, Select the Top ones, mini move them down once, deselect and choose the left ones and mini move them right. Purple with Opacity 70 and Blending.) 3. Double cube with the purple wavy effects. I didn't think there were enough decor there as well. Try adding move platforms at the bottom when you jump onto platforms in the middle of the screen, and with the platforms below, add spikes to scare the player move (Improves difficulty somewhat.), or try adding Block decor AND Some Blocks with spikes at the botton . 4. Mini gravity ball section. I thought the custom background was great, but needed one more decoration pattern in my eyes. I would use some swirl decorations that came in 2.0 with purple or pink blending, or purple with blending clouds, OR both . 5. I also thought that the wave part in after the ball needed block designs sorry 6. Last mini wave, wave, UFO, Ship, and Cube. I think you could add some block designs with the nine circles background rainbow color effect. Try adding a nine circles effect on the slopes/blocks too. Gameplay: 9/10 1. In the beginning, the spike looking orange things with the orange blending looked a bit repetitive because it was used a lot in the mini cube and normal cube. Try removing some of those, reduce the amount of them, and use a different variety of block designs like those. 2. Double Rocket Ship Part In The Beginning. The slope platforms were repetitive too because they were the only dodge-able things in that part. Try reducing the amount of those, and use a more wider variety of platforms and dangers. 3. Adasba's purple themed part. The singe platforms where the most repetitive in the whole level, because it was almost the only platform used in that purple themed part. I would suggest using different platform sizes and shapes, or use a different look of those blocks while using the same platform block. 4. Okay, this is going with #3. The single platforms are the most used out of Adasba's part . Music Sync: 9.9/10 1. Adasba's beginning part. When his part came, it seemed too late in the music sync timing. Now I think you tried to extend the levels length maybe with that (Yes idk why ) but it didn't seem right. Overall: 8.9/10 My Opinion: Move to High End Decent (Design Reason) | Rate 10 Stars If Design Goes To 8.5 or Over.
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Post by kiriE on Sept 24, 2016 7:44:00 GMT -5
Approved/agreed, moving to Decent levels (high-end). Nice level
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