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Post by horizon on Jul 29, 2016 7:18:37 GMT -5
Hey, another level. Requested:  , 7 ID: 22135262Length: 1:05no video but the level's pretty easy so
video added, nooberts sorry for garbo quality, you know everyplay just go in practice mode idk |
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Post by Plexidit on Aug 1, 2016 15:54:54 GMT -5
Awesome level! Right off the bat I would like to let you know that I'm putting this in my level picks when I make them. This is probably one of my favorite levels I've ever judged. There are very few things I can tell you to improve on in this level, but here they are: In the decoration category, you could definitely improve, but not a lot because that decoration was beautiful. In the parts where you used white clouds, you kind of clumped them up in some spots and it just didn't look very good, so maybe try to improve that but you do not have to. Also, at around the 70% area, there are spots that you could put some more air decoration in to fill in blank space. I'm only going to take of 1 point from decoration, .5 for each thing I mentioned above since they weren't very major at all. Now, for the originality category, I'm going to take off .5 of a point because the block design you used looks good, but I have seen it MANY times before as a level judge, but I cannot blame you for using this design because it looks good, that's why I'm only taking .5 of a point off. Those are the only things I can tell to improve on.  I absolutely loved the music sync in this level, it synced with the gameplay which is something I rarely see. I also loved the gameplay in the level. It looked very fun and there wasn't really anything you could do to improve on it. Keep up the good work on your levels, and now for the scoring. Scoring: Decoration: 4/5 You could've improved the clumped up clouds and the blank space at around 70% in the level. Very minor things to improve. Gameplay: 5/5 The gameplay in this level looks really fun, and it syncs with the music which is something I love. Music Sync: 5/5 I loved how you synced the music at changes in the music, as well as with the gameplay. I don't really see that much. Originality: 4.5/5 I'm only taking .5 of a point off just because of how often I see that block design. It looks beautiful though! Total: 18.5/20 This is definitely feature worthy and it's going in my level picks when I make them. Good job! Difficulty: 6 |
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Post by horizon on Aug 2, 2016 13:31:38 GMT -5
Awesome level! Right off the bat I would like to let you know that I'm putting this in my level picks when I make them. This is probably one of my favorite levels I've ever judged. There are very few things I can tell you to improve on in this level, but here they are: In the decoration category, you could definitely improve, but not a lot because that decoration was beautiful. In the parts where you used white clouds, you kind of clumped them up in some spots and it just didn't look very good, so maybe try to improve that but you do not have to. Also, at around the 70% area, there are spots that you could put some more air decoration in to fill in blank space. I'm only going to take of 1 point from decoration, .5 for each thing I mentioned above since they weren't very major at all. Now, for the originality category, I'm going to take off .5 of a point because the block design you used looks good, but I have seen it MANY times before as a level judge, but I cannot blame you for using this design because it looks good, that's why I'm only taking .5 of a point off. Those are the only things I can tell to improve on. I absolutely loved the music sync in this level, it synced with the gameplay which is something I rarely see. I also loved the gameplay in the level. It looked very fun and there wasn't really anything you could do to improve on it. Keep up the good work on your levels, and now for the scoring. Scoring: Decoration: 4/5 You could've improved the clumped up clouds and the blank space at around 70% in the level. Very minor things to improve. Gameplay: 5/5 The gameplay in this level looks really fun, and it syncs with the music which is something I love. Music Sync: 5/5 I loved how you synced the music at changes in the music, as well as with the gameplay. I don't really see that much. Originality: 4.5/5 I'm only taking .5 of a point off just because of how often I see that block design. It looks beautiful though! Total: 18.5/20 This is definitely feature worthy and it's going in my level picks when I make them. Good job! Difficulty: 6 Thanks! I know I should be more creative on my blocks, I'm working with other designs a bit more now  Great review!  |
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