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Favorite Level: Crunchy Apple v2
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Post by Novus on Jul 24, 2016 12:59:59 GMT -5
Hello everyone! Just wanted to post about my recent level System Storm! I think it's one of my best, and if you can, please try and get it sent? Thanks a lot Name: System Storm ID: 21899518 Rating: Harder 6 Stars Creator: Novus Video: youtu.be/WsAroIsLAPs
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246 posts
Creator Points: 263
Favorite Level: 1.9 Version of hypersonic
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Post by panman30 on Jul 24, 2016 14:05:31 GMT -5
Wow! That's amazing! Your gameplay is pretty clear cut, there wasn't an instance where I got distracted by how annoying or confusing it is. Also your design is very well done along with decorations. Your use of dark colors with blending adds to the simplicity of the level and your bg adds a nice feel to it! Only 2 suggestions: your background could use "don't fade" (search this up on YouTube if you don't know what it is or how to do it) and the beginning and end of the level has some poor designs. It looks like you only put down a brick and said "design is done." Great job!
8.5/10 Feature worthy!
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Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
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Post by milesman34 on Aug 8, 2016 11:33:48 GMT -5
Length: 63 seconds? 0:00-0:24 (38%)This part has very good gameplay, with great use of moving objects and alpha triggers. The backgrounds are good, but the first cube doesn't have enough air decorations. Also the block designs in the first cube aren't as good, because, as panman30 said, you pretty much only put down a brick there. There is a little decoration in the first cube's block designs, but it isn't that well visible. The rest of this part has better designs, especially the ball. The sync is really good. This part contributes 4 points to gameplay. (152) This part contributes 3 points to design. (114) This part contributes 2 points to sync. (76) 0:24-0:47 (37%)The gameplay here is generally very good. However, the dual cube has several confusing elements. The designs, air decorations, and backgrounds are very good in this section. The only problem is the last mini wave, which is a little messy due to the black rainbows overlapping with the blocks. This could be improved by using layering to make the black rainbows hide behind the blocks, or just change the designs to make that possible if required. Sync is super good. This part contributes 3 points to gameplay. (111) This part contributes 3.5 points to design. (129.5) This part contributes 2 points to sync. (74) 0:47-0:63 (25%)The gameplay here is very good, it has no flaws. However, the design isn't quite as good, as the block designs are very simple and the same as the ones earlier in the level. Also the backgrounds aren't visible at the very end. The plus is the good ground decorations and the decorations attached to the block. It needs more air decorations though. The sync is pretty good, but not as good as earlier in the level. This part contributes 4 points to gameplay. (100) This part contributes 2 points to design. (50) This part contributes 1.5 points to sync. (37.5) Gameplay (18.2/20)This level has really good gameplay. The only flaw is the dual cube, which is a bit confusing. Design (14.7/20)The design is best in the middle of the level. However, the first and last cube parts aren't as good, as they don't have as good block designs, and they don't have that much air decorations. Also, the last mini wave is a little messy. Sync (9.4/10)The sync is very good, except for in the end. Originality (1.05x)There are a few original designs, specifically the use of invisible objects to create intricate block designs. Total (44.4/60)Feature Worthy. This level has great gameplay and sync, and the design is pretty good, especially in the middle. Difficulty6
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