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Jul 11, 2016 13:17:21 GMT -5
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Post by tripl3 on Jul 11, 2016 13:17:21 GMT -5
Paradise in Joy by me, beta and raptor.
ID: 21217849
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2016 16:35:46 GMT -5
Ship Section (0-9%) - Overall pretty well decorated. The only problem I have is the grey background really conflicts with the colorful decorations. Maybe try to add some colorful background flashes there or just change the color. Another thing is that this is mostly just straight flying. Wave Section (10-16%) - Again the decoration looks pretty good, but again the background conflicts with the decoration. And again, it's mostly straight. Robot Section (17-24%) - Here the grey background fits more, because everything else is grey. The gameplay is very straightforward, and that's a good thing. Overall good use of gravity changes, and pretty good sync to the music. UFO Section (25-32%) - Good matchup to the grey background again, mostly fun gameplay, interesting decoration. Ball Section (33-50%) - Here the gameplay isn't as great; mostly due to the excess of orbs here. I think the gameplay would be more interesting with more blocks instead of just orb spam gameplay. Other than that, the decoration is pretty decent. Wave Section (51-60%) - This is one the the most decorated parts of the level. It looks very 2.0 and has some layering to it. The only con to this part is that there's a huge spike of difficulty, going from  -  to  -  . Ship Section (61-70%) - Same as above. Cube Section (71-100%) - Decoration is great just like above. Again there's few cons to this part. The only part that wasn't so great was the excess of orbs and limited reaction time. OVERALL Gameplay - 7/10 - Mostly fun, but there are some orb spam parts, straight parts, etc. Another huge con to this was that there was a huge difficulty spike. Decoration - 7/10 - Decoration looked pretty great. The first parts did have some conflicting colors that didn't go well together, but the rest went together really well. Adding some depth or even a custom background could improve this even more. Sync - 1.5/2 - Mostly good, just some of the straights didn't go well with the music. FINAL SCORE - 20.5/30, Good Levels |
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Post by iIMewIi on Jul 12, 2016 17:06:20 GMT -5
( 0-74% ) GAMEPLAY: 5.5/10Couldn't judge the gameplay of the full level due to a bug for 144hz at 74%, Just move the top block up one and it should be good. Now, the gameplay up to 74% is decent, but it's not fun. It's slow paced, repetitive at the ufo. (26%) and the difficulty is inconsistent. The first two parts are way easy for 5* and the part at 60% is hard for 5*. Try to make each part have a consistent difficulty. Like I said before I can't judge the last quarter of the level due to the bug. Design/Deco: 4/10The Decoration and Design was overall horrible until 51%. The block designs were bland and only used one block most of the time and the decoration did not match the background at all and was just plain ugly. Mostly the first two parts. There was no blending involved up until 51% which made the level look even more ugly. Not to mention the laser type things that are clearly copy pasted at 10% go right through the blocks making it look bad. Also there wasn't any background flashes to make the level more colorful. My advice is to use blending come up with more creative block designs then just using plain blocks. Also add some background flashes/decoration flashes. The only reason why this has more than a 3/10 is because of 51-74% as that's the best part of the level. That could be lower if I could get past 74% but I can't.
Music Sync: 3/10
The only things that were sync'd to the song was the transitions mostly and the object outline at 51%. There were no background flashes or color changes before 51% that went to the beat of the song. Originality: 0.9x/1.2x
There was nothing original in the level, it's 0.9x because I've seen those same hexagons at 51% in other levels. Nothing else to say.
Overall: 11.25/36
My Opinion: Low-End Decent Level. Move to "Decent Levels"
kiriE @zielgd milesman34
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Post by DaxD0w on Jul 13, 2016 3:56:55 GMT -5
( 0-74% ) GAMEPLAY: 5.5/10Couldn't judge the gameplay of the full level due to a bug for 144hz at 74%, Just move the top block up one and it should be good. Now, the gameplay up to 74% is decent, but it's not fun. It's slow paced, repetitive at the ufo. (26%) and the difficulty is inconsistent. The first two parts are way easy for 5* and the part at 60% is hard for 5*. Try to make each part have a consistent difficulty. Like I said before I can't judge the last quarter of the level due to the bug. Design/Deco: 4/10The Decoration and Design was overall horrible until 51%. The block designs were bland and only used one block most of the time and the decoration did not match the background at all and was just plain ugly. Mostly the first two parts. There was no blending involved up until 51% which made the level look even more ugly. Not to mention the laser type things that are clearly copy pasted at 10% go right through the blocks making it look bad. Also there wasn't any background flashes to make the level more colorful. My advice is to use blending come up with more creative block designs then just using plain blocks. Also add some background flashes/decoration flashes. The only reason why this has more than a 3/10 is because of 51-74% as that's the best part of the level. That could be lower if I could get past 74% but I can't.
Music Sync: 3/10
The only things that were sync'd to the song was the transitions mostly and the object outline at 51%. There were no background flashes or color changes before 51% that went to the beat of the song. Originality: 0.9x/1.2x
There was nothing original in the level, it's 0.9x because I've seen those same hexagons at 51% in other levels. Nothing else to say.
Overall: 11.25/36
My Opinion: Low-End Decent Level. Move to "Decent Levels"
kiriE @zielgd milesman34  No one knows im a judge Anyhow, approved. Moving to decent Also i was gonna reject but the fact that you have 144hz and bugs so  |
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Post by iIMewIi on Jul 13, 2016 10:18:28 GMT -5
;3; It probably still would be decent if I could play through the whole level. :V
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No one knows im a judge 
