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Post by Grideos on Jul 10, 2016 18:48:57 GMT -5
Long time no see, I haven't posted a level here in ages, but I'll give it a shot and see how the judges have improved ;3; Anyways here's the info; Name: Shadowed ID: 21547835 Video: youtu.be/7KDyJzyjHK8Rating: 3-4 stars Please play the level instead of saying gameplay LOOKS good/bad. |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 10, 2016 22:01:21 GMT -5
I'm not a judge, but really love ur lvls  My Rating:  3 starsDesign: 7.8/10 - Really great and color-less (Not really evil or dark ), but it looked like the dark theme had some design flaws. First of all, the first gravity ball looked good, but could use like 1 more design. (I would suggest something small, like stars inside of a group, a cluster. You could scale the stars diff.) Second, the second ship didn't have that much of the designs. It was lacking about lets say, 2 designs (Well it kind of did lol). I would try adding maybe the stars in a cluster, and maybe like the level in Kipster A, the diamond deco that moves with the beat. instead of the colorful outside of it, you could use gray like you did in the first wave. I loved all the designs after those. They were gray themed (I like as well) and very moody. I would try suggesting adding a little more decoration though. Love the design,s again  Music Sync: 9.7/10 - Really good sync as well as the music goes great with the mood, and whole level it's self. I loved the beginning, ending, and some parts in the middle, but it surprised me to see actually no music sync/off beat jumps to me. But I will tell you what I like, and what you can maybe change. First, at the beginning, the sync fit very good, and the transaction to the rocket ship was really on-time. The rocket ship had some really good sync as well. I would maybe try removing the spikes, and replacing them with the fake spike decorations that look half razor/half spike. Now it doesn't have to be removed, but this is just MY opinion . I would also suggest at the first gravity ball, maybe try fixing up the last 2 jump rings before the first UFO. I loved everything else after those flaws I spotted. Gameplay: 9.5/10 - Nothing looks really repetitive, or bad with the gameplay. I love the first rocket ship, first UFO, and first/second mini wave the most. But some blocks at the beginning look kind of repetitive. The blocks with 3 blocks across the top look a bit repetitive though. It kind of loops like C+P at some parts of the beginning with those blocks. Another flaw with gameplay is at the first gravity ball part, the 3 blocks across the top blocks as well look repetitive. I would try replacing them with different blocks or like as the beginning. Nothing else too repetitive as I saw past these. Overall: 8.66/15 - Very good level, and could be featured. But I would really suggest seeing the designs section if you want, because the designs were good, but as well, not good. Nothing else to say other than great job. My Opinion: Move to Feature Worthy | Feature second page | Rate 3 stars (Normal) |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2016 1:53:25 GMT -5
I'm not a judge, but really love ur lvls My Rating: 3 starsDesign: 7.8/10 - Really great and color-less (Not really evil or dark ), but it looked like the dark theme had some design flaws. First of all, the first gravity ball looked good, but could use like 1 more design. (I would suggest something small, like stars inside of a group, a cluster. You could scale the stars diff.) Second, the second ship didn't have that much of the designs. It was lacking about lets say, 2 designs (Well it kind of did lol). I would try adding maybe the stars in a cluster, and maybe like the level in Kipster A, the diamond deco that moves with the beat. instead of the colorful outside of it, you could use gray like you did in the first wave. I loved all the designs after those. They were gray themed (I like as well) and very moody. I would try suggesting adding a little more decoration though. Love the design,s again Music Sync: 9.7/10 - Really good sync as well as the music goes great with the mood, and whole level it's self. I loved the beginning, ending, and some parts in the middle, but it surprised me to see actually no music sync/off beat jumps to me. But I will tell you what I like, and what you can maybe change. First, at the beginning, the sync fit very good, and the transaction to the rocket ship was really on-time. The rocket ship had some really good sync as well. I would maybe try removing the spikes, and replacing them with the fake spike decorations that look half razor/half spike. Now it doesn't have to be removed, but this is just MY opinion . I would also suggest at the first gravity ball, maybe try fixing up the last 2 jump rings before the first UFO. I loved everything else after those flaws I spotted. Gameplay: 9.5/10 - Nothing looks really repetitive, or bad with the gameplay. I love the first rocket ship, first UFO, and first/second mini wave the most. But some blocks at the beginning look kind of repetitive. The blocks with 3 blocks across the top look a bit repetitive though. It kind of loops like C+P at some parts of the beginning with those blocks. Another flaw with gameplay is at the first gravity ball part, the 3 blocks across the top blocks as well look repetitive. I would try replacing them with different blocks or like as the beginning. Nothing else too repetitive as I saw past these. Overall: 8.66/15 - Very good level, and could be featured. But I would really suggest seeing the designs section if you want, because the designs were good, but as well, not good. Nothing else to say other than great job. My Opinion: Move to Feature Worthy | Feature second page | Rate 3 stars (Normal)Great review and nice structure. Sadly you're not supposed to judge in this board. Keep that in mind. Good job though EDIT: Oh and don't talk about designs and decoration in Gameplay section, thanks. It also seems that the creator wants this judged, so could Lumpy Safyire ~Pear~ megaman9 can one of you move this to the appropriate board? (Feature Worthy) Thanks. |
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Post by Grideos on Jul 11, 2016 2:03:40 GMT -5
I didn't know what was the appropriate board :V it's too many boards for me, sorry  |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2016 2:06:32 GMT -5
I didn't know what was the appropriate board :V it's too many boards for me, sorry Eh, happens all the time lol XD EDIT: kiriE you too :v |
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Post by kiriE on Jul 11, 2016 2:57:56 GMT -5
I didn't know what was the appropriate board :V it's too many boards for me, sorry That's why you should read the rules before you post ;3; // Moving to Level Suggestions (Judged). |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2016 6:05:13 GMT -5
I didn't know what was the appropriate board :V it's too many boards for me, sorry That's why you should read the rules before you post ;3; // Moving to Level Suggestions (Judged). And then I'll move it to Feature Worthy ._. |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 11, 2016 9:29:11 GMT -5
I'm not a judge, but really love ur lvls My Rating: 3 starsDesign: 7.8/10 - Really great and color-less (Not really evil or dark ), but it looked like the dark theme had some design flaws. First of all, the first gravity ball looked good, but could use like 1 more design. (I would suggest something small, like stars inside of a group, a cluster. You could scale the stars diff.) Second, the second ship didn't have that much of the designs. It was lacking about lets say, 2 designs (Well it kind of did lol). I would try adding maybe the stars in a cluster, and maybe like the level in Kipster A, the diamond deco that moves with the beat. instead of the colorful outside of it, you could use gray like you did in the first wave. I loved all the designs after those. They were gray themed (I like as well) and very moody. I would try suggesting adding a little more decoration though. Love the design,s again Music Sync: 9.7/10 - Really good sync as well as the music goes great with the mood, and whole level it's self. I loved the beginning, ending, and some parts in the middle, but it surprised me to see actually no music sync/off beat jumps to me. But I will tell you what I like, and what you can maybe change. First, at the beginning, the sync fit very good, and the transaction to the rocket ship was really on-time. The rocket ship had some really good sync as well. I would maybe try removing the spikes, and replacing them with the fake spike decorations that look half razor/half spike. Now it doesn't have to be removed, but this is just MY opinion . I would also suggest at the first gravity ball, maybe try fixing up the last 2 jump rings before the first UFO. I loved everything else after those flaws I spotted. Gameplay: 9.5/10 - Nothing looks really repetitive, or bad with the gameplay. I love the first rocket ship, first UFO, and first/second mini wave the most. But some blocks at the beginning look kind of repetitive. The blocks with 3 blocks across the top look a bit repetitive though. It kind of loops like C+P at some parts of the beginning with those blocks. Another flaw with gameplay is at the first gravity ball part, the 3 blocks across the top blocks as well look repetitive. I would try replacing them with different blocks or like as the beginning. Nothing else too repetitive as I saw past these. Overall: 8.66/15 - Very good level, and could be featured. But I would really suggest seeing the designs section if you want, because the designs were good, but as well, not good. Nothing else to say other than great job. My Opinion: Move to Feature Worthy | Feature second page | Rate 3 stars (Normal)Great review and nice structure. Sadly you're not supposed to judge in this board. Keep that in mind. Good job though EDIT: Oh and don't talk about designs and decoration in Gameplay section, thanks. It also seems that the creator wants this judged, so could Lumpy Safyire ~Pear~ megaman9 can one of you move this to the appropriate board? (Feature Worthy) Thanks. Thanks for the heads up! Where would I be able to judge? |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 11, 2016 9:33:00 GMT -5
I'm not a judge, but really love ur lvls My Rating: 3 starsDesign: 7.8/10 - Really great and color-less (Not really evil or dark ), but it looked like the dark theme had some design flaws. First of all, the first gravity ball looked good, but could use like 1 more design. (I would suggest something small, like stars inside of a group, a cluster. You could scale the stars diff.) Second, the second ship didn't have that much of the designs. It was lacking about lets say, 2 designs (Well it kind of did lol). I would try adding maybe the stars in a cluster, and maybe like the level in Kipster A, the diamond deco that moves with the beat. instead of the colorful outside of it, you could use gray like you did in the first wave. I loved all the designs after those. They were gray themed (I like as well) and very moody. I would try suggesting adding a little more decoration though. Love the design,s again Music Sync: 9.7/10 - Really good sync as well as the music goes great with the mood, and whole level it's self. I loved the beginning, ending, and some parts in the middle, but it surprised me to see actually no music sync/off beat jumps to me. But I will tell you what I like, and what you can maybe change. First, at the beginning, the sync fit very good, and the transaction to the rocket ship was really on-time. The rocket ship had some really good sync as well. I would maybe try removing the spikes, and replacing them with the fake spike decorations that look half razor/half spike. Now it doesn't have to be removed, but this is just MY opinion . I would also suggest at the first gravity ball, maybe try fixing up the last 2 jump rings before the first UFO. I loved everything else after those flaws I spotted. Gameplay: 9.5/10 - Nothing looks really repetitive, or bad with the gameplay. I love the first rocket ship, first UFO, and first/second mini wave the most. But some blocks at the beginning look kind of repetitive. The blocks with 3 blocks across the top look a bit repetitive though. It kind of loops like C+P at some parts of the beginning with those blocks. Another flaw with gameplay is at the first gravity ball part, the 3 blocks across the top blocks as well look repetitive. I would try replacing them with different blocks or like as the beginning. Nothing else too repetitive as I saw past these. Overall: 8.66/15 - Very good level, and could be featured. But I would really suggest seeing the designs section if you want, because the designs were good, but as well, not good. Nothing else to say other than great job. My Opinion: Move to Feature Worthy | Feature second page | Rate 3 stars (Normal)Great review and nice structure. Sadly you're not supposed to judge in this board. Keep that in mind. Good job though EDIT: Oh and don't talk about designs and decoration in Gameplay section, thanks. It also seems that the creator wants this judged, so could Lumpy Safyire ~Pear~ megaman9 can one of you move this to the appropriate board? (Feature Worthy) Thanks. Nvm found it lol. The new boards got me confused a bit |
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