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Post by ivald on Jul 8, 2016 20:21:54 GMT -5
I just verified my first actual level The Vagabond. It is an XL level inspired by Lonely Travel.
I don't yet have a video for it but the ID is below
ID: 21518167
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Post by Tygrysek on Jul 9, 2016 16:34:39 GMT -5
Gameplay: 6.5/10The first parts of the level seem mostly auto. Also the first piano part, you managed to screw the sync real bad. I kind of like the idea of flying through the rainbow rings, not avoiding them. But that part is very repetetive, and can get boring... The wave part seems good, can't complain much about it. Just a simple part. The cloudy cube is kind of okay, seems just dull a little. The UFO part is what I actually like, in every way! I love how you have to omit the rain drops, really shows that cubes are made of sugar hehe. The cube is just like the first one, but a little darker and more rain. No comment on that. Then the cave-like ship. Just simple gameplay with omitting blocks, nothing much special. Next - wave. Avoiding clouds which kill you, or just going down and waiting for the next part. Yeah. Ball part is actually good, avoiding the dark clouds. I really like it! And it's also a little harder than the rest of the level which just seems auto. Makes it a little unbalanced. Cube part is after the ball. Simple  2 gameplay. Nothing much. The end!Design: 5/10I really hate how these dragons look. It's just bad, doesn't look okay. Try to fix that. Also WHAT IS THIS KIND OF A SORCERY WITH INVISIBLES??? By the way, not relating to the invisibles, but to the second stage blocks. They just don't work good. But apart from the cons, it doesn't have anything bad. The UFO where a lightning changes it to mini is very great! The way it looks like a storm is occuring is awesome! Then we have the cube in a storm, similar to the first one, but this time the fella's holding a torch. Seems pretty well-made. Next - cave-like ship. Kind of dull design. Then we have a wave part, using the same stuff from the cloudy ship. Not good, but okay, you could not find a good idea for that one. Ball part - is okay, nothing bad in it. Then the cube, it REALLY lacks some kind of a bit more decoration, not all over the level, but just a small gradient on the background. It's very very simple. BUT YOU JUST DON'T DO THIS. YOU JUST DON'T. ARGH. And the end. That was it!OVERALL SCORE: 5.5/10The level has potential, it could be a very good level, but you aren't that skilled yet. So eat some more pudding, get some more skill, and get better at creating! I suggest dropping it into High-End Decent Levels, but if you could do small fixings to some flaws on the picture, it could jump into Good Levels
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Post by ivald on Jul 9, 2016 23:17:36 GMT -5
Gameplay: 6.5/10The first parts of the level seem mostly auto. Also the first piano part, you managed to screw the sync real bad. I kind of like the idea of flying through the rainbow rings, not avoiding them. But that part is very repetetive, and can get boring... The wave part seems good, can't complain much about it. Just a simple part. The cloudy cube is kind of okay, seems just dull a little. The UFO part is what I actually like, in every way! I love how you have to omit the rain drops, really shows that cubes are made of sugar hehe. The cube is just like the first one, but a little darker and more rain. No comment on that. Then the cave-like ship. Just simple gameplay with omitting blocks, nothing much special. Next - wave. Avoiding clouds which kill you, or just going down and waiting for the next part. Yeah. Ball part is actually good, avoiding the dark clouds. I really like it! And it's also a little harder than the rest of the level which just seems auto. Makes it a little unbalanced. Cube part is after the ball. Simple 2 gameplay. Nothing much. The end!Design: 5/10I really hate how these dragons look. It's just bad, doesn't look okay. Try to fix that. Also WHAT IS THIS KIND OF A SORCERY WITH INVISIBLES??? By the way, not relating to the invisibles, but to the second stage blocks. They just don't work good. But apart from the cons, it doesn't have anything bad. The UFO where a lightning changes it to mini is very great! The way it looks like a storm is occuring is awesome! Then we have the cube in a storm, similar to the first one, but this time the fella's holding a torch. Seems pretty well-made. Next - cave-like ship. Kind of dull design. Then we have a wave part, using the same stuff from the cloudy ship. Not good, but okay, you could not find a good idea for that one. Ball part - is okay, nothing bad in it. Then the cube, it REALLY lacks some kind of a bit more decoration, not all over the level, but just a small gradient on the background. It's very very simple. BUT YOU JUST DON'T DO THIS. YOU JUST DON'T. ARGH. And the end. That was it!OVERALL SCORE: 5.5/10The level has potential, it could be a very good level, but you aren't that skilled yet. So eat some more pudding, get some more skill, and get better at creating! I suggest dropping it into High-End Decent Levels, but if you could do small fixings to some flaws on the picture, it could jump into Good Levels Thanks for your input! I will try to fix what you said could be fixed. I have a question through. in design where you said "WHAT IS THIS KIND OF A SORCERY WITH INVISIBLES???" which invisibles did you mean? Thanks  |
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Post by ivald on Jul 9, 2016 23:33:34 GMT -5
Also what part do you mean the "second stage blocks"
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Post by kiriE on Aug 19, 2016 5:49:13 GMT -5
Approved. Also I'd like to include that the level gets very repetitive as it goes, and there is simply too much parts involving... clouds  I agree with Tygrysek though, this level has potential and isn't very far from good levels! Moving to decent levels. |
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I agree with Tygrysek though, this level has potential and isn't very far from good levels!