129 posts
Discord: TSRAnimations (Thea)#1593
Clans: AG (Ascentional Geometricans)
Creator Points: 0
Hardest Demon: Supersonic by ZenthicAlpha and Mastermind by Hinds
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Post by Thea S. (TSRAnimations) on Jul 8, 2016 14:06:55 GMT -5
I'm not lying when I'm saying that this level is one of my shortest levels. Due to the song's length, it won't be any longer than this. I've kinda experimented with using some form of 2.0 design, and for those who have judged or reviewed any of my other levels, knows that 2.0 isn't my strong side in terms of design. Level Title: Epic Loop Level ID: 21097416 Level Length: aprox. 24s (Short) Song: Epic Loop by Evil-Dog (ID: 4195) Song Length: 24s Style and Design: Mixed General Difficulty: 3  or 4  Current Rating:  Gameplay: What do you think of this level? Pros and Cons? What would you rate it? Even if it's a short level, I want constructive criticism from reviewers and level judges. Some side info: Whenever I wanna make a part in 2.0 (Excluding the moving obstacles), I don't know where to start with deco. I don't like all of the 2.0 deco and it's so frustrating when it all goes to waste, and people don't approve of my attempt to make something with some hint to 2.0 Everyone who either follows me or are friends with me in GD, FB, Skype, etc. Knows that my weak sides are deco and 2.0 The new 2.0 cloud decorations are among the 2.0 deco I didn't like as much as the original ones from 1.4 (I don't remember the version, correct me if I'm wrong) |
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232 posts
Discord: Rexone#2250
Creator Points: 4
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Post by Rexone on Jul 15, 2016 15:06:20 GMT -5
Thea S. (TSRAnimations) Gameplay: 14/20 (Above Average)In general I like the gameplay. It may be a little boring, but it's good for the amount of time there was to work with. You have many gamemodes in this short level, yet it still flows smoothly. Design: 15/20 (Above Average)The variation is great in this level. And design itself is pretty good too. However, at the beginning cube part, I don't really like your color choices and I feel that there could be a little more deco there as well. Sync: 7/10 (Above Average)I like the sync here, especially with the portals (0:04-0:09). Sometimes, during the UFO part, for example, the sync isn't as good. Originality: 1xDespite being a good level, it's not too original. Overall: 39/60Good. Unfortunately, because of the length, I'm taking off 5 points. The design, gameplay, and sync are all good in this level, but could still be improved for future ones. You need to work on originality. Difficulty:  2  And, because you asked, pros and cons.PROS - Good design variation - Good gameplay - Good sync most of the time CONS - Not very original - Short Judges, please give feedback on this reviewKey: Overall:
0-15: Needs Improvement
16-30: Decent
31-50: Good
51-60: Feature-worthy
For separate categories:
0-3: Bad
4-6: Below Average
7-9: Slightly below Average
10-11: Average
12-13: Slightly Above Average
14-15: Above Average
16-17: Good
18-19: Great
20: Perfect
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2,446 posts
Discord: VegetarianBacon#5162
Creator Points: 2
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Post by VegetarianBacon on Jul 15, 2016 15:48:29 GMT -5
Try using some more blending
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3,278 posts
Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
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Post by milesman34 on Aug 29, 2016 19:12:55 GMT -5
Thea S. (TSRAnimations) Gameplay: 14/20 (Above Average)In general I like the gameplay. It may be a little boring, but it's good for the amount of time there was to work with. You have many gamemodes in this short level, yet it still flows smoothly. Design: 15/20 (Above Average)The variation is great in this level. And design itself is pretty good too. However, at the beginning cube part, I don't really like your color choices and I feel that there could be a little more deco there as well. Sync: 7/10 (Above Average)I like the sync here, especially with the portals (0:04-0:09). Sometimes, during the UFO part, for example, the sync isn't as good. Originality: 1xDespite being a good level, it's not too original. Overall: 39/60Good. Unfortunately, because of the length, I'm taking off 5 points. The design, gameplay, and sync are all good in this level, but could still be improved for future ones. You need to work on originality. Difficulty: 2 And, because you asked, pros and cons.PROS - Good design variation - Good gameplay - Good sync most of the time CONS - Not very original - Short Judges, please give feedback on this reviewKey: Overall:
0-15: Needs Improvement
16-30: Decent
31-50: Good
51-60: Feature-worthy
For separate categories:
0-3: Bad
4-6: Below Average
7-9: Slightly below Average
10-11: Average
12-13: Slightly Above Average
14-15: Above Average
16-17: Good
18-19: Great
20: Perfect I will approve this review, but change the result. This review isn't the most detailed, but it does hit on important points, and its not vague because the level is so short that it is easy to point things out like this. One thing to note, is that some background pulses could be added to make the level more interesting. In all honestly, it is very unlikely that a level this short would get a star rating. As noted in the comments, it needs more blending. Moved to Decent |
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