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Post by Star77 on Jul 7, 2016 21:42:36 GMT -5
Took me a while Sorry, some of the parts are rushed cuz I got really bored... 8( Anyway, I hope it's fun for you guys  Video ID is 21481960 |
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Post by Agg on Jul 8, 2016 6:05:42 GMT -5
Gameplay:Fun Gameplay!Its a bit hard the mini wave part because it wants good timing otherwise you crash! 9/10 Music Sync:Nice Sync!I dont see parts that are off-sync!(btw undertale asriel)10/10 Decoration:Decent at first but good from 0:45 and after! 8/10 Overall:27/30 Feature Worthy |
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Post by Athel on Jul 8, 2016 7:52:07 GMT -5
Hey there! I'm not a judge, but I can still give my opinion... Right? Anyway, thought I'd share my opinion on this and hope that a judge notices this. This level is, indeed, a feature worthy level. I'm inclined to say that you need to get bored more often  The gameplay throughout the level was alright. I particularly suck at miniwaves, but hey that's just my inner noob talking here :-D There was one bug around 76-79%, where I was a robot and I completely skipped the green grow portal. Nothing too gameplay breaking, but it kinda threw me off. The deco was also alright, though I'm not sure if it was just me or what, but LDM didn't work out for me. The level lagged slightly for me, which is fine considering how my device is crap anyway. The usage and unique combination of objects, plus the colors, were a visual plus in the level. The music sync was also pretty well. I like the music choice, but then again I also love the origin of the remix as well, so. There wasn't anything off about the sync. Effects. There was that one at the end. When the ship does its little Level Won animation, it goes directly into a monsters mouth with a few watching, and then they even recede back after the level ends. All in all, I haven't seen this before, and I'm kinda curious as to how you did it. All in all, final judgements from me. Gameplay 9/10 Decoration 10/10 Music Sync 10/10 Effect(s) 10/10 Difficulty 5/10 br]Try tagging a judge maybe and then you could get an official saying for this xD |
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Post by realy0_ on Jul 8, 2016 11:19:47 GMT -5
the parts looks blank for me maybe add more customs bgs.
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Post by Regen on Jul 8, 2016 12:26:48 GMT -5
What the level could be rated:  Originality: 1.1x This level uses a lot of stuff we are used too, but the addition of the mini wave felt pretty new, and I think more easy/normal levels need it. 8/10 (something new that I like, but is a small part of the level) Bugs: 1x Pretty solid, I didn't experience any bugs in the level, so I'm happy you ironed out the bugs in this level before releasing it, as some creators ignore them. 10/10 (Clean of bugs) Gameplay: A lot of creators like to make simple gameplay levels, and it usually works, so I'm happy you took that route, as it usually makes a good level. 8/10 (Good job) Design: It is a very simple look, but you sprinkled in a bit of good decorations in the level. so i think that this level is fine for decoration. 8/10 (Appealing to the eye) Sync: 1x, It isn't like Funnygame autos sync, but its really good, shouldn't need to explain why. (10/10 Amazing) Total: 44/100 I think it needs stars, maybe rubrub will feature it if he likes it ;^) Also: I'm starting to review more levels, I'm not doing it just to get judge, I do it because i enjoy playing a unknown creators level, then giving my honest opinion on it, so kek. (lol notice me) |
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Post by Star77 on Jul 8, 2016 18:16:47 GMT -5
Hey there! I'm not a judge, but I can still give my opinion... Right? Anyway, thought I'd share my opinion on this and hope that a judge notices this. This level is, indeed, a feature worthy level. I'm inclined to say that you need to get bored more often The gameplay throughout the level was alright. I particularly suck at miniwaves, but hey that's just my inner noob talking here :-D There was one bug around 76-79%, where I was a robot and I completely skipped the green grow portal. Nothing too gameplay breaking, but it kinda threw me off. The deco was also alright, though I'm not sure if it was just me or what, but LDM didn't work out for me. The level lagged slightly for me, which is fine considering how my device is crap anyway. The usage and unique combination of objects, plus the colors, were a visual plus in the level. The music sync was also pretty well. I like the music choice, but then again I also love the origin of the remix as well, so. There wasn't anything off about the sync. Effects. There was that one at the end. When the ship does its little Level Won animation, it goes directly into a monsters mouth with a few watching, and then they even recede back after the level ends. All in all, I haven't seen this before, and I'm kinda curious as to how you did it. All in all, final judgements from me. Gameplay 9/10 Decoration 10/10 Music Sync 10/10 Effect(s) 10/10 Difficulty 5/10 br]Try tagging a judge maybe and then you could get an official saying for this xD Thx for the feedback I guess I found the problem for the LDM not working and I hope I fixed it ( I will be really thankful if you checked it again 8) ) If this didn't work I may remove lots of the glowing stuff xD And to answer your question about the end scene, I just put few "move triggers" near the end. Nothing special |
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Post by Star77 on Jul 8, 2016 18:21:17 GMT -5
the parts looks blank for me maybe add more customs bgs. There are custom BGs. I just made them simple/hardly visible because I don't want the player to get distracted. I just like making a level with clear/visible path so any average player can beat it without getting confused. Anyway, thx for the feedback |
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Post by S3rios on Jul 8, 2016 22:00:08 GMT -5
Here are my thoughts:
Decoration: The decoration is simplistic, which allows for players to focus on the gameplay. Though, the deco isn't anything original, making the level much less memorable. However, I do feel that sometimes less is more, so I'll give it an 7/10
Gameplay: The gameplay is simple and fun, which is about what I expected. It makes for a good expirience, and I'll give this a 9/10
Bugs and overall smoothness: This level has no bugs I came across, and the difficulty stays consistant throughout the level. I'll give this a 10/10
Overall score is a 26/30
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Post by iIMewIi on Jul 9, 2016 8:16:07 GMT -5
Gameplay: 10/10The gameplay in this level is phenomenal, it's not repetitive, and it's fun. Really fun for a 3 or 4 star level! Great Job! No criticism for this part.Design: 5/5The block designs in this level are very unique and well executed, I love the block designs because they have little objects inside of the blocks, it shows a lot of effort being put into a level! Nice!Decoration: 4/5The decoration in this level was great, but at a point through the level the decorations were a little bit repetitive, 34-70% to be precise. Try to change it up a little bit, not a huge deal though. I also love how you made the backgrounds/background decorations harder to see so the person playing doesn't get distracted. When I first played through the level I didn't notice the moving objects at the first part. Music Sync: 9/10The level overall was synced to the music very well, especially the first cube. But some parts weren't synced as much as others. 33% is an example of this. The only time it really goes to the music is when the ball turns into a mini ball, other than that it's not synced. A little more sync there and this level would be 10/10 for music sync.Originality: 1.2x/1.2xThe block designs in this level were original, I've seen similar but not the way you did it, your block designs were different then that. I especially like that "enemy" even though he doesn't kill you. (44%-70%) I also love that every major part has a different block design that are all unique. It's great.Overall: 33.6/36
My opinion is High-End Feature-Worthy or Low-End LEGENDARY
milesman34 kiriE Star77
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Post by kiriE on Jul 9, 2016 10:52:09 GMT -5
Approved feature-worthy as the majority of the reviews I do think the level could be more... Unique, just generally impress me more, that's why it doesn't get legendary, but design is solid and gameplay is fun, awesome job, Star77!  Moving |
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Post by œ on Sept 30, 2017 20:07:42 GMT -5
Star77 also has a lot of rated levels here
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Post by CreativeGuy on Oct 1, 2017 8:52:19 GMT -5
Moving to Rated Levels.
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