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Post by loeckske on Jul 7, 2016 12:36:39 GMT -5
ID: 20581187
1/2 of gameplay by semmm043
1/2 of gameplay + design by Loeckske
the current version of the level has some text in it as "hints" wich are not shown in this video
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 7, 2016 17:48:08 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 - No words really, Im sorry but I can barely describe the gameplay. I personally thought of 8/10 because it seemed good as to the gameplay to me really deserved that, but it is hard to show you the examples Except at the parts where you had the UFO, and ship. The gameplay was a bit repetitive is all I can say. Design: 5.5/10 - Needs more decoration on the whole level. the only good part with the decoration and design was at around 60-76%. It still needed some improvement first of all. The beginning part could use more stars in a little group, with about 2 stars or 3 with like 4 small ones grouping together. Then, at the first UFO, it could use some decoration as well. You could try adding the stars as I suggested, and maybe a custom background with moving blocks. Try also with the opacity of 40%, blending for the custom Background. Next, the first wave could use more designs as well. Use the same stars maybe xD. But one thing I could suggest to add other than the stars, is diamond looking decorations that move to the beat. You could set the Layer as middle on the first one, 1.00 scaled, then make another one with the Bottom layer, 1.08 scaled. If not, you could use a different design, but add more design to the level. Throughout the beginning to 35% could use more design. The drop needed some as well. Try using more decorations with like you did at the part when it had the custom background with the circles. But scale them small so they don't look bad. Also at the drop with the circles, they looked a bit random. Try making them like this: Z Layer Middle, Same Color, Scaled 1.00. Copy + Paste, Scaled 1.00, Color Black, Mini move 2 spaces over, and down, Z Layer bottom. I could also suggest scaling the glow edge stars smaller, so they don't have the spaces in the middle of them. Overall, the decorations and designs were a bit lacking and seemed good, but as well seemed bad. Music Sync: 9.5/10 - Some parts are off at the beginning, and end. First of all at the beginning, the UFO portal seemed a bit too early as the song was going. The cube was good, but the UFO came too early. Second, in the middle drop, The end rocket ship's flying pattern seemed to be off. I would suggest having a more smoother, and more detailed harder part in the ship to improve it's sync maybe. The level's mood fit the song quite somewhat, along with the rhythm. Overall: 7.8/15 - Not that good of a level with decoration, but it's decent. Still needs improvement before it actually will be messed around with like feature and star worthy. If you improved the designs, and music sync, maybe this could be star rated. My Opinion: Move to Needs Improvement or Decent | IF star rated, rate  4 stars |
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Post by milesman34 on Jul 19, 2016 18:34:01 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 - No words really, Im sorry but I can barely describe the gameplay. I personally thought of 8/10 because it seemed good as to the gameplay to me really deserved that, but it is hard to show you the examples Except at the parts where you had the UFO, and ship. The gameplay was a bit repetitive is all I can say. Design: 5.5/10 - Needs more decoration on the whole level. the only good part with the decoration and design was at around 60-76%. It still needed some improvement first of all. The beginning part could use more stars in a little group, with about 2 stars or 3 with like 4 small ones grouping together. Then, at the first UFO, it could use some decoration as well. You could try adding the stars as I suggested, and maybe a custom background with moving blocks. Try also with the opacity of 40%, blending for the custom Background. Next, the first wave could use more designs as well. Use the same stars maybe xD. But one thing I could suggest to add other than the stars, is diamond looking decorations that move to the beat. You could set the Layer as middle on the first one, 1.00 scaled, then make another one with the Bottom layer, 1.08 scaled. If not, you could use a different design, but add more design to the level. Throughout the beginning to 35% could use more design. The drop needed some as well. Try using more decorations with like you did at the part when it had the custom background with the circles. But scale them small so they don't look bad. Also at the drop with the circles, they looked a bit random. Try making them like this: Z Layer Middle, Same Color, Scaled 1.00. Copy + Paste, Scaled 1.00, Color Black, Mini move 2 spaces over, and down, Z Layer bottom. I could also suggest scaling the glow edge stars smaller, so they don't have the spaces in the middle of them. Overall, the decorations and designs were a bit lacking and seemed good, but as well seemed bad. Music Sync: 9.5/10 - Some parts are off at the beginning, and end. First of all at the beginning, the UFO portal seemed a bit too early as the song was going. The cube was good, but the UFO came too early. Second, in the middle drop, The end rocket ship's flying pattern seemed to be off. I would suggest having a more smoother, and more detailed harder part in the ship to improve it's sync maybe. The level's mood fit the song quite somewhat, along with the rhythm. Overall: 7.8/15 - Not that good of a level with decoration, but it's decent. Still needs improvement before it actually will be messed around with like feature and star worthy. If you improved the designs, and music sync, maybe this could be star rated. My Opinion: Move to Needs Improvement or Decent | IF star rated, rate 4 starsReview Approved. Moved to Decent. |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 19, 2016 18:35:48 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 - No words really, Im sorry but I can barely describe the gameplay. I personally thought of 8/10 because it seemed good as to the gameplay to me really deserved that, but it is hard to show you the examples Except at the parts where you had the UFO, and ship. The gameplay was a bit repetitive is all I can say. Design: 5.5/10 - Needs more decoration on the whole level. the only good part with the decoration and design was at around 60-76%. It still needed some improvement first of all. The beginning part could use more stars in a little group, with about 2 stars or 3 with like 4 small ones grouping together. Then, at the first UFO, it could use some decoration as well. You could try adding the stars as I suggested, and maybe a custom background with moving blocks. Try also with the opacity of 40%, blending for the custom Background. Next, the first wave could use more designs as well. Use the same stars maybe xD. But one thing I could suggest to add other than the stars, is diamond looking decorations that move to the beat. You could set the Layer as middle on the first one, 1.00 scaled, then make another one with the Bottom layer, 1.08 scaled. If not, you could use a different design, but add more design to the level. Throughout the beginning to 35% could use more design. The drop needed some as well. Try using more decorations with like you did at the part when it had the custom background with the circles. But scale them small so they don't look bad. Also at the drop with the circles, they looked a bit random. Try making them like this: Z Layer Middle, Same Color, Scaled 1.00. Copy + Paste, Scaled 1.00, Color Black, Mini move 2 spaces over, and down, Z Layer bottom. I could also suggest scaling the glow edge stars smaller, so they don't have the spaces in the middle of them. Overall, the decorations and designs were a bit lacking and seemed good, but as well seemed bad. Music Sync: 9.5/10 - Some parts are off at the beginning, and end. First of all at the beginning, the UFO portal seemed a bit too early as the song was going. The cube was good, but the UFO came too early. Second, in the middle drop, The end rocket ship's flying pattern seemed to be off. I would suggest having a more smoother, and more detailed harder part in the ship to improve it's sync maybe. The level's mood fit the song quite somewhat, along with the rhythm. Overall: 7.8/15 - Not that good of a level with decoration, but it's decent. Still needs improvement before it actually will be messed around with like feature and star worthy. If you improved the designs, and music sync, maybe this could be star rated. My Opinion: Move to Needs Improvement or Decent | IF star rated, rate 4 starsReview Approved. Moved to Decent. Thanks  |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jul 19, 2016 18:36:48 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 - No words really, Im sorry but I can barely describe the gameplay. I personally thought of 8/10 because it seemed good as to the gameplay to me really deserved that, but it is hard to show you the examples Except at the parts where you had the UFO, and ship. The gameplay was a bit repetitive is all I can say. Design: 5.5/10 - Needs more decoration on the whole level. the only good part with the decoration and design was at around 60-76%. It still needed some improvement first of all. The beginning part could use more stars in a little group, with about 2 stars or 3 with like 4 small ones grouping together. Then, at the first UFO, it could use some decoration as well. You could try adding the stars as I suggested, and maybe a custom background with moving blocks. Try also with the opacity of 40%, blending for the custom Background. Next, the first wave could use more designs as well. Use the same stars maybe xD. But one thing I could suggest to add other than the stars, is diamond looking decorations that move to the beat. You could set the Layer as middle on the first one, 1.00 scaled, then make another one with the Bottom layer, 1.08 scaled. If not, you could use a different design, but add more design to the level. Throughout the beginning to 35% could use more design. The drop needed some as well. Try using more decorations with like you did at the part when it had the custom background with the circles. But scale them small so they don't look bad. Also at the drop with the circles, they looked a bit random. Try making them like this: Z Layer Middle, Same Color, Scaled 1.00. Copy + Paste, Scaled 1.00, Color Black, Mini move 2 spaces over, and down, Z Layer bottom. I could also suggest scaling the glow edge stars smaller, so they don't have the spaces in the middle of them. Overall, the decorations and designs were a bit lacking and seemed good, but as well seemed bad. Music Sync: 9.5/10 - Some parts are off at the beginning, and end. First of all at the beginning, the UFO portal seemed a bit too early as the song was going. The cube was good, but the UFO came too early. Second, in the middle drop, The end rocket ship's flying pattern seemed to be off. I would suggest having a more smoother, and more detailed harder part in the ship to improve it's sync maybe. The level's mood fit the song quite somewhat, along with the rhythm. Overall: 7.8/15 - Not that good of a level with decoration, but it's decent. Still needs improvement before it actually will be messed around with like feature and star worthy. If you improved the designs, and music sync, maybe this could be star rated. My Opinion: Move to Needs Improvement or Decent | IF star rated, rate 4 starsReview Approved. Moved to Decent. Thanks |
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