22 posts
Discord: #9299
Favorite Level: acropolis
Hardest Demon: nine circles
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Post by Zirgon on Jul 6, 2016 15:27:57 GMT -5
I think i made a good level called blood menace
Id:18166519
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Post by Twitzen on Jul 7, 2016 9:32:58 GMT -5
I'm not a level judge, but I'll give you my thoughts Gameplay- 8/10 I thought this game play was pretty decent overall. There were a few parts I found a bit confusing, but I found myself enjoying the level as I played it. I' recommend making the teleports a little less undecorated, as I could see nothing but background sometimes. But, all-in-all, I thought the gameplay was fun and enjoyable. Decoration- 7/10 The level seemed to be evenly decorated all the way through, which is a nice surprise to someone playing. It's obvious that you really put time and effort into making the level look good. I'd recommend that you make the triangles connect by using "red dots." It will basically make the object look at bit more connected. But, I found the decoration easy on the eyes and suitable for the level. Overall- 8/10 I actually really liked this level and would love to see it star-rated. Nice job Total- 23/30
Ratings: 0-10 - Needs improvement 10-20 - Decent 20-25 - Good 25-30 - Feature Worthy 30 - AMAZING
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Post by geocrafter12 on Sept 23, 2016 16:21:34 GMT -5
Back to reviewing levels again! Gameplay: The Gameplay for the Cube and the Flying part, is not too bad, no bugs to be seen at those parts. Over all pretty smooth for those parts. But one thing in the level I find bad in terms of gameplay is the 1st wave part at 32% - 40%, you can't see ANYTHING. You could only see 1 or 2 blocks ahead of you and it's very hard to react to the obstacles, the light needs to be bigger or not be there at all. And another problem I had was the UFO part right at the drop, It was a lot harder than the rest of the level and buggy as well, especially the transition with the Ufo to the Flying part. I keep dying at the spikes as I transition. The Robot part though I find to be a little awkward especially since there are invisible blocks. The other parts were fairly easy unlike the UFO and Wave part I mentioned. If you could make the difficulty more fair and consistent that would be great!! ;D 5/10
Decoration: If I could pick one word to describe this level, it would be red. There is WAY to many red in this level. Around 99% of this level is red, the colors, the blocks, the orbs, the portals, the background, they are all the color red. You really need to make a more variety of colors. Just because you are making a hell themed level, it doesn't mean that you can only use the colors red and black. Plus I don't see many decoration out there, looks really empty, especially around 63% - 75%, there was hardly any decoration at all. I see that you tried to fill it up with the circles in the background but that's not very original the decoration could be done a lot better. Plus a lot of copy and past throughout the level as well. Especially during the beginning at the cube part. Overall I see the standard brick design which I don't find any creative. I really wish that you used blending throughout you level, the level you look a lot better if you used blending. Overall you could've done better, you should've put more decoration on the level and were a little more creative in the block design instead of just copy and pasting everything. Also didn't make everything look bright red and black. 3/10
Sync: Some parts have been synced pretty good, the best example is the beginning wave part, pretty nicely synced to the level. But on the other hand, some parts have not been synced good at all. Like the transition from the 1st Flying part to the 1st wave, or the transition from the cube to the ball after the drop. And some of the transition portals are a little off sync to the level. Plus I hardly found any jumps in the level that are synced to the level, other than the first cube it's not synced at all. You need to work on syncing the level more. Making the jumps go with the song, also the transition portals as well. Syncing the level makes the gameplay a lot more fun. 2/5So the overall total is 10/24 or 4/10 That should be in Decent
Suggestions: The biggest problem is the decoration, you need to use a variety of more colors, more block design, and blending, instead of copy and pasting everything, make different alterations of it to make it more interesting. Fix the wave part as well. Lighten it up more, make it more easier to see what is coming up, make the level more consistent with it's difficulty as well, the wave part and the ufo part are too hard compared to the rest of the level. The sync needs improvement, make the transition portals and jumps go with the music more, syncing improves the gameplay a lot. Hope this helped!!
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