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Post by f1ref1y on Jul 4, 2016 7:14:28 GMT -5
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Favorite Level: Demon Vole IV
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Post by Lopaha on Jul 4, 2016 7:20:26 GMT -5
Seemed like nice map until the ball part, where my PC just exploded.
JK, but it lagged really bad, low detail plx
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Post by f1ref1y on Jul 4, 2016 7:35:48 GMT -5
IK I'm working on it
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3,278 posts
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Post by milesman34 on Jul 4, 2016 10:23:10 GMT -5
0-31%In the cube part, you can't tell that the blue pulsing objects are green orbs, and the first jump is really sudden. Also, it is a bit weird to have parallaxed blocks in ball mode, it makes the ground less stable. The effect in the first cube is decent, but some parts where the effect isn't active are empty. You should maybe make the pulsing objects start as somewhat transparent. As for the ball part, the laser effect is not well executed, and the black stars feel weird. The sync is very good.
This part contributes 2 points to gameplay.
This part contributes 1 point to design.
This part contributes 2 points to sync.
31-59%The gameplay is good in these parts except for the wave, where either nothing is going on or the blocks are invisible. These parts look decent, but aren't too well executed. The sync is pretty good.
This part contributes 2.5 points to gameplay.
This part contributes 2.5 points to design.
This part contributes 1.5 points to sync.
59-78%All the obstacles here are either invisible or really hard to see. As for the effect, it is copied from Lost Souls II, but isn't as good. The transitions and the effect are at least well synced, but the jumps aren't.
This part contributes 0.5 points to gameplay.
This part contributes 0 points to design.
This part contributes 1 point to sync.
78-100%This part has pretty solid gameplay, except for in the last part, where it appears to speed up past triple speed. As for the design, it is pretty good, but overuses the black glow, and doesn't fit with the theme of the level that much. The sync is pretty good.
This part contributes 3 points to gameplay.
This part contributes 2.5 points to design.
This part contributes 1.5 points to sync.
Gameplay (10.4/20)The gameplay is generally decent, but has a few flaws, especially from 59-78% Design (7.8/20)The effects aren't that well executed, and that doesn't even mention the one you copied from lost souls 2. Sync (7.8/10)The sync is generally pretty good. Originality (0.9x)You copied the effect from Lost Souls 2 Total (23.4/60)Decent. Difficulty 5 
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