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Post by Cornexium on Jun 18, 2016 4:56:33 GMT -5
It is completely changed and reuploaded. I hope it is better than before Here is a link: youtu.be/hFk0L55bZHkID: 20852112 Hope you will like it |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2016 6:41:36 GMT -5
Fixed title for you.
You could've just updated the original thread and tagged someone but okay.
Will review later. :3
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Post by The 69er on Jun 18, 2016 9:51:48 GMT -5
this level is great, just needs to fix the sync pretty much...
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2016 2:56:27 GMT -5
Gameplay: Uhm, I really love the gameplay. It's great, and I like how you handled the transitions...most of the time anyways. Transitions to Razor's part is... mediocre, to say the least. Lots of variety though. Ending feels very rushed though, so I really dislike it. 2.9/4
Decoration: Eh, it was alright. A little too much copy and paste, and block design looks messy. Needs variation and like the gameplay, the ending feels very rushed. I really liked the ending title card though, that looked AMAZING! BOTH transition to Razor's part is, still, mediocre, as stated in the gameplay and not to mention it looks lazy. The moving blocks could use some tweaking, try using Easing. I don't like how you did the portals in the first part though. Glow is used nicely with blending, which is nice still. By the way, try balancing the different colours so they don't look over/underwhelming. 1.9/4
Music Sync: Some parts such as the waves or the UFOs in the beginning needs work, but the rest is very nicely synced after around 32%. Nice job. 2.3/4
Originality Multiplier: Some creative designs, but most ideas have already been used in different levels before, such as invisible portals w/ text and the orbs. No effect in this category, I guess. 1.0x
Total score is 7.1. Belongs in Good Levels section.
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Post by kiriE on Jun 24, 2016 16:34:13 GMT -5
My critiques in the other review stands, but here are some comments on the updated parts: -The first UFO part I see you added some comet/meteor stuff, which is good, but the part is still severely underdecorated and add more variations in terms of block forms/shapes - 0:22 I do like the decorations, but I hate the color combinations. It's bland, it's messy, it's too bright and it just feels too cluttered, it's just not good :/ And it's pretty copied and pasted as well, especially the block shapes/block design even though it itself is very good. I also dislike that the gameplay is quite inconsistent because it's a lot harder than the rest of the level. And also, why does everything turn black at 0:35? And then an unexpected blind transition at 0:36 appears... - And btw, you seriously need to do something at the part at 0:48, there's just TOO much copy+paste ;3; - I see you changed the coin placements, but the last coin is still pretty bad.
It's still belongs in good levels. Good job though! Sorry if I sounded a bit harsh ;3; I now recommend you to make a new level  |
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Post by Cornexium on Aug 8, 2016 10:57:15 GMT -5
Can be moved to sent section
Sent by Megaman9 as 6* no featured
Thank you very much Megaman9!!!
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Post by TimeLink on Aug 8, 2016 11:01:12 GMT -5
Can be moved to sent section Sent by Megaman9 as 6* no featured Thank you very much Megaman9!!! GG! Moving to sent. megaman9 |
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Post by Cornexium on Oct 20, 2016 11:41:28 GMT -5
Lol sent by 5 more mods and still no rated |
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