Mountain Range - Awesome collab with thundersteve!

Gameplay: 8.5/10% - The ending jump orbs were repetitive. It seemed a bit annoying, but you could replace it with the blue jump orbs. Also at the beginning, the gameplay was a bit weird and seemed dull. The robot kind of messed it up with the music sync from the gameplay as well. Another flaw was at about the double parts. Mini cube and normal rocket. It had very weird gameplay. The rocke ship messed it up with the straight flying though kind of when I played the level. Nothing else I saw bad on the gameplay really. Good job.

Design: 6/10% - The designs aren't really that good as I thought it would be. First of all, the beginning was a bit good, but at about 9-16%, it needed a little more designs and decoration. Second part that needed designs was at 61-67%. It lacked some details at the mini wave, normal wave, and the mini cube. After that part, the designs were good. Some more of the flaws were at the double mini cube/normal ship (72-78%.) needed more details, and looked like some details needed to be removed because they did't look too spot on. But it could use some detail removing like the wall/red bricks. You could replace that with anything you want, but I don't know what you should. It also looked the the red circles needed to be removed, and changed maybe a different color or choose a different design instead of that. I would recommend maybe the yellow music note's after the double to also be put in the double parts. Another flaw was from 79-82% needed more designs. Some designs were good, but those parts needed a bit more detail as well. You could try adding some brick or any pillar with 25% opacity, moving like a real background. You could also add more detail on the saw-blades before the ending part. It looked like it needed more details. One last flaw I saw (and forgot) was from the beginning to 43%. It needed just a TAD bit more details. I loved the designs other than these errors I stated out. I loved the 43-48% designs. That part maybe to you and me was the best part of the level. The ending may have been the best part for you because well... You verified it .

Music Sync: 8/10% - It was good, but the beginning part had some jump orbs that came a bit too early. The robot part was the most music sync messed up with the jump orbs and jumps at the beginning. The 2 jumps before the first gravity ball came way to early, and when I played the level, it was like... about almost 0.75 seconds off I would say. Another flaw is at 10%, the first jump orb seemed a bit unnecessary. You could replace that with a block that has a slab with a slope, then jump on the other orb. The last flaw I saw was at the double rocket ship with the mini cube. It could have had better music sync by trying to dodge some stuff, but I don't know if that could mess up the music sync, or make it impossible for the mini cube. But that was all I saw. Other parts were good to me.


(Scores added up Divided by 3 is how I do it )
Overall: 7.5/15 - Not really that good of a level, but really that bad of a level. The designs could use some fixing up and removable parts could be replaced with better details. I loved the music sync, but it was really off at the beginning. The gameplay was kind of dull and weird, but it was good also. The level was not too bad, but was not professional. It could use some fixing up once again before Rubrub could do anything .

My Opinion Move to Decent

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