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Post by manu123890 on Jun 11, 2016 22:39:58 GMT -5
This is my new level. I think it's demon, an easy one, considering that there are levels like Platinum Adventures or Wrandering. youtu.be/7FsHxUmZ2DATell me what you think. Thanks! ID: 20658443 NOTE: I updated the level to fix some bugs, change the deco a little bit in the dual part and making the coins not free, now you have to find them in the level. I'll see if I can get a video of the update, but for now, play the level by yourself. Thanks. EDIT: @zielgd milesman34kiriECould a judge review this, please? I've been waiting for more than two weeks  |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jun 11, 2016 23:15:50 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 - Kind of looks easy for a demon, but if you were a noob, you would start crying. Really like the gameplay except a bit of flaws. A small bug in the double part. I (And I mean only me, idk about anyone else.) die when i try to get to the portal. The last block kills me lol. Other than that, the gameplay is great!
Design: 9.2/10 - Super Cool Designs! Like how you placed some decors on the blocks to make them stand out more. It would have made it a hard demon without the bolded blocks xD. Overall for the design, it looks boss! Hope it gets featured!
Music Sync: 7.8/10 - Saw some off parts. First, the 2 beginning orbs, and some part it the first mini ship. Other than that, the jumps fit the songs beat perfectly!
Overall: 25/10[/i]/u] - Looks dark and colorful! Love the song and drop. My favorite part is when you first turn into wave, because it's a tight space. So you look like you can earn some creator points with your skills!
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Post by manu123890 on Jun 11, 2016 23:49:01 GMT -5
Thanks for the review! I'll take it into account  |
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jun 11, 2016 23:53:38 GMT -5
Thanks for the review! I'll take it into account Your welcome  Just want to help people as much as I can |
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Post by Yendis on Jun 30, 2016 5:41:57 GMT -5
Gameplay (9.5/10) - Is your gameplay balanced, fun and interesting?
Wow. This gameplay is really neat dude! I can see you've really put a lot of effort into making it super fun to play. There are no bad transitions, good use of slopes, verticality, some amazing duals & pretty balanced difficulty. There are no bugs I can find through practice mode. This level reminds me a lot of a tama_n, haon or surv level gameplay wise: good work. Design (9/10) - How well does your level flow? this includes sync too!
This level flows really well to the song. speaking of which. that sync is beautiful. I really wish I could give you feedback on how to improve in gameplay & design but you seem to have hit the nail right on the head with this level. Decoration (6/10) - How pretty does your level look? this includes effects!
This is the only area your level falls down in in particular. A lot of the block designs are just solid black blocks, try change this up a little with some more unique block designs in each area. Because some of the areas look a little copy & paste. Deco wise the level has some bland areas with some empty space that could be filled with background cogs, arrows, etc. Although what deco is there is nice although some of it is a little C & P. Deco-Sync is also on point with background colour flashes. Just something that personally bother me: Some 3d is off in the first area should look like this on the pillars coming through the roof: imgur.com/kq25kUz
Originality (Multiplier x1.10)Some extra points for those duals being different, they're some of the hardest things to make work gameplay wise & you made them flow extremely well in this level. Also an original song choice so nice work on that. Total (27/36)
Category: Feature-Worthy Recommendations: Feature + Demon 10  Really nice level with great gameplay, keep up the amazing work. good luck with your future creations!
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Post by GrenAde on Jul 3, 2016 11:58:38 GMT -5
So here is my review. Gameplay: 9/10- The gameplay is fast paced, well synced, and overall looks good. The one thing I dislike about it is the memorization gameplay (Going through fake blocks. It is a personal preference of mine to keep the gameplay straightforward ) Overall though, the gameplay looks good and well thought out. Design: 6/10- I didn't like the design as much. The block design was pretty copy pasted, remember to try to keep your block design from looking completely copy pasted. The block design looked a bit too simple for my taste, try some different kind of block designs. Using small scaled decoration blocks with the black block would improve the look and give the level a better look. Just remember to hold back with the copy paste button. Decoration: 8/10- The decoration was simple, but it looked well done. I would suggest adding more variants for the decoration, such as the same decoration, but scaled smaller or larger. Overall Score: 8.3/10- The level could use some general changes for block design and maybe a little bit decoration variation. Also try not to use copy paste as much. It looks good for the most part and the sync is well done. My recommendation: Feature Worthy |
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Post by manu123890 on Jul 3, 2016 19:10:36 GMT -5
Thanks for the review! I'll try to change the design and deco a bit to make the level look more original |
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Post by TimeLink on Jul 6, 2016 10:30:14 GMT -5
I agree with most of the Reviews, the Level is pretty original and nicely designed, with mostly good Gameplay to top it off. I especially liked the Duals, there was quite a lot of Effort put into them, and they nicely matched the Theme of the Song. I have slight Critic on the Design, it got really repetitive and unoriginal at a certain Point, and there could have been some more Effort put into some Parts, but overall, like the above threee Reviews already said, very nice Level.
Approved. Moving to Feature-Worthy.
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