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Post by Beany on Jun 11, 2016 14:01:26 GMT -5
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jun 11, 2016 15:29:05 GMT -5
Gameplay: 9.5/10 A bit harder than I expected when I played it, but the design and sync makes up for it. Really look forward to seeing this level star rated!
Design: 9.5/10 Really good! I expected the designs to be crappy, because in 1.9, there aren't many decorations to completely make up the level, but this level changed my mind! Great Job!
Music Sync: 7.9/10 Some parts are a bit off, but overall it's great!
Overall: 26.9 Really great level! Fun and star rate material! Not really feature material because it's 1.9 designed and not that much get featured, but I somewhat see it featured. Great Job!
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Post by Beany on Jun 11, 2016 17:29:25 GMT -5
Gameplay: 9.5/10 A bit harder than I expected when I played it, but the design and sync makes up for it. Really look forward to seeing this level star rated! Design: 9.5/10 Really good! I expected the designs to be crappy, because in 1.9, there aren't many decorations to completely make up the level, but this level changed my mind! Great Job! Music Sync: 7.9/10 Some parts are a bit off, but overall it's great! Overall: 26.9 Really great level! Fun and star rate material! Not really feature material because it's 1.9 designed and not that much get featured, but I somewhat see it featured. Great Job! Thanks man! I think that the ball parts were the most off sync, but I tried
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Jun 11, 2016 18:18:38 GMT -5
Gameplay: 9.5/10 A bit harder than I expected when I played it, but the design and sync makes up for it. Really look forward to seeing this level star rated! Design: 9.5/10 Really good! I expected the designs to be crappy, because in 1.9, there aren't many decorations to completely make up the level, but this level changed my mind! Great Job! Music Sync: 7.9/10 Some parts are a bit off, but overall it's great! Overall: 26.9 Really great level! Fun and star rate material! Not really feature material because it's 1.9 designed and not that much get featured, but I somewhat see it featured. Great Job! Thanks man! I think that the ball parts were the most off sync, but I tried The Gravity Ball was my favorite part actually xD. Your welcome too, just wanna say the truth.
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Post by Beany on Jun 14, 2016 10:03:53 GMT -5
@zielgd When you have time, can you review this?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2016 10:33:25 GMT -5
@zielgd When you have time, can you review this? will do it when i get home tomorrow. expect a review in about 15-17 hours.
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Post by Beany on Jun 14, 2016 11:57:33 GMT -5
@zielgd When you have time, can you review this? will do it when i get home tomorrow. expect a review in about 15-17 hours. Thanks
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2016 2:56:36 GMT -5
Let's get right into it.
Gameplay: Well... Let's just say... The amount of triples in this level is atrocious. Too much. The gameplay in the gravity-switch ship is absolutely horrible, and I've seen much better transitions before. Other than that, it's pretty smooth... Not. Even Dear Nostalgists had better gameplay. 1.8/4
Decoration: Cutoffs near the end, block design is basically crap, and bad use of mirror portals. Transitions look bad. Spammed pulsing objects in the ship just looks bad. Really, really bad. Colours are bland. Seriously. Add more variety. 1.2/4
Music Sync: Decent. Kinda. Cube parts need work, a little bit off sync. 3.7/4
Originality Multiplier: Old school styled levels. Really. It's just unoriginal. Cycles? Even worse. Not original at all. 0.8x
Total score is 5.96. Belongs in Decent Levels section.
Less triples next time please ;3;
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Post by haastregt on Jun 15, 2016 3:41:00 GMT -5
I would like to add to what Ziel said.
Gameplay: Indeed, the start has way to many triple spike jumps. And the upside down shippart is not that great because you can hit the bottom and top everywhere. But besides that, there is a very limited use in portals, there are only three different gamemodes used and gravity switches, but there is alot more you can use, for example speed changes or smaller/bigger portals. Those things really make gameplay better. Also, if you really want to get advanced, also use slopes and moving items in the gameplay. Besides that, with the things you did use you made decent gameplay. Score for gameplay: 1.5/4
Design: Well, de design is not that great. Basically, you used two different blocks + another block at the ball part, and spammed music triggers around it. Maybe a bit of clouds and particles under the spikes (which you dont see when having GD on low detail mode by the way), but it is very limited. The first ship part is better though (the one with the gravity switches). Score for design: 0.75/4
Music sync - I agree with Ziel again, but for me, music sync shouldnt weigh as much as gameplay and design. Also, there isnt any music sync in the design except for the music triggers (with that I mean background pulses and stuff). so it is 1/2 for me.
Originality: 0.8x. Again, as ziel said old school levels are very unoriginal and besides that it seems like a bad excuse to not have to do much work.
Total score: 2.6/12, its a needs improvement for me.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2016 3:59:22 GMT -5
I would like to add to what Ziel said. Gameplay: Indeed, the start has way to many triple spike jumps. And the upside down shippart is not that great because you can hit the bottom and top everywhere. But besides that, there is a very limited use in portals, there are only three different gamemodes used and gravity switches, but there is alot more you can use, for example speed changes or smaller/bigger portals. Those things really make gameplay better. Also, if you really want to get advanced, also use slopes and moving items in the gameplay. Besides that, with the things you did use you made decent gameplay. Score for gameplay: 1.5/4 Design: Well, de design is not that great. Basically, you used two different blocks + another block at the ball part, and spammed music triggers around it. Maybe a bit of clouds and particles under the spikes (which you dont see when having GD on low detail mode by the way), but it is very limited. The first ship part is better though (the one with the gravity switches). Score for design: 0.75/4 Music sync - I agree with Ziel again, but for me, music sync shouldnt weigh as much as gameplay and design. Also, there isnt any music sync in the design except for the music triggers (with that I mean background pulses and stuff). so it is 1/2 for me. Originality: 0.8x. Again, as ziel said old school levels are very unoriginal and besides that it seems like a bad excuse to not have to do much work. Total score: 2.6/12, its a needs improvement for me. Combining your score and mine, and finding the average, it seems that this belongs in "Decent Levels" section. 4.28/12.
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Post by LuMaIchArgI on Jun 15, 2016 4:48:01 GMT -5
Gameplay: 9.5/10 A bit harder than I expected when I played it, but the design and sync makes up for it. Really look forward to seeing this level star rated! Design: 9.5/10 Really good! I expected the designs to be crappy, because in 1.9, there aren't many decorations to completely make up the level, but this level changed my mind! Great Job! Music Sync: 7.9/10 Some parts are a bit off, but overall it's great! Overall: 26.9 Really great level! Fun and star rate material! Not really feature material because it's 1.9 designed and not that much get featured, but I somewhat see it featured. Great Job! Lol wut, the most recent update some of the designs come from is 1.8, the rest is from 1.3 or below lol
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Post by Beany on Jun 15, 2016 6:34:12 GMT -5
Let's get right into it. Gameplay: Well... Let's just say... The amount of triples in this level is atrocious. Too much. The gameplay in the gravity-switch ship is absolutely horrible, and I've seen much better transitions before. Other than that, it's pretty smooth... Not. Even Dear Nostalgists had better gameplay. 1.8/4Decoration: Cutoffs near the end, block design is basically crap, and bad use of mirror portals. Transitions look bad. Spammed pulsing objects in the ship just looks bad. Really, really bad. Colours are bland. Seriously. Add more variety. 1.2/4Music Sync: Decent. Kinda. Cube parts need work, a little bit off sync. 3.7/4Originality Multiplier: Old school styled levels. Really. It's just unoriginal. Cycles? Even worse. Not original at all. 0.8xTotal score is 5.96. Belongs in Decent Levels section. Less triples next time please ;3;Thanks for reviewing
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