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Post by Vembz on Jun 7, 2016 3:22:33 GMT -5
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Post by Vembz on Jun 16, 2016 15:28:58 GMT -5
@zielgd
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3,278 posts
Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
Mini-Profile Background: 36caa1
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Post by milesman34 on Jun 16, 2016 17:14:21 GMT -5
Gameplay (16/20) 0-20%, 55-66% These parts have pretty fun gameplay, but the gameplay is affected by the black-tinted orbs and portals. 2.5 20-42% In these parts, the black-tinted orbs and portals are more obvious due to colored decorations. 3.5 42-55%, 66-100% In these parts, there is fun gameplay where the slightly faded portals are a little more obvious. 3.5 Advice My advice is not to use black-tinted orbs and portals, because they are a bit tricky to distinguish apart.
Design 0-20% These parts have great designs and simple but interesting-looking decorations. 3.5 20-31% These parts have some great backgrounds as well as good designs and decorations. 4
Sorry, couldn't finish for lack of time. Someone please finish this review.
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Post by Vembz on Jun 17, 2016 4:50:36 GMT -5
I removed the black tint from most of the portals and orbs. I think it looks much better now
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Post by XilaskaR on Jun 17, 2016 5:16:50 GMT -5
Hello Vembz! Gameplay:
I like it a lot, its a bit slow and its not varied a lot, but it works and thats fine. I would recommend to put more orbs in the cube parts and gravity changes, something your level almost hasnt D: Its still really fun to play but I think it should improve a bit Decoration:
Its like the gameplay, its simple and it works. I like the structures a lot. Its not anything impressive but its certainly good. The only thing I dont like are some parts that feel really empty like the cube ones or the first ship. Sync: Its good synced, nothing impressive. I would recommend to add a lot of pulse triggers in design levels because they help a lot with the sync and make the level design more varied I wont give a final score because people only base on it and not in the criticism. Its good and it works, but I think you need more practice good job on that level!
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3,278 posts
Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
Mini-Profile Background: 36caa1
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Post by milesman34 on Jun 18, 2016 8:34:15 GMT -5
Gameplay (16/20) 0-20%, 55-66% These parts have pretty fun gameplay, but the gameplay is affected by the black-tinted orbs and portals. 2.5 20-42% In these parts, the black-tinted orbs and portals are more obvious due to colored decorations. 3.5 42-55%, 66-100% In these parts, there is fun gameplay where the slightly faded portals are a little more obvious. 3.5 Advice My advice is not to use black-tinted orbs and portals, because they are a bit tricky to distinguish apart.
Design (17.5/20) 0-20%, 31-66% These parts have great designs and simple but interesting-looking decorations. 3.5 20-31%, 81-100% These parts have some great backgrounds as well as good designs and decorations. 4 66-81% This part feels a little underdecorated, but has good designs. 2.5 Advice My advice is to not have any underdecorated parts.
Sync (7/10)This level has pretty good sync. Originality (1.05x)This level has a good original background. Total (42.5/60)Feature Worthy. This level has pretty fun gameplay and great decoration. It also uses sync well. Difficulty6
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Post by Vembz on Jun 20, 2016 11:04:38 GMT -5
Thanks a lot for reviewing
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Post by Vembz on Sept 16, 2016 1:21:13 GMT -5
i like how my level has been here for over 2 months, and it still isn't featured or rated. Asonic even sent it to robtop 1 month ago :/
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