12 posts
Discord: [DW] Verification#5210
Clans: Dynasty Warriors
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Cosmic Jump By Spectex
Hardest Demon: Acropolis By Zobros
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Post by [DW] Verification on Jun 4, 2016 13:41:16 GMT -5
A while a ago I created a level called Chinese Machine and it actually turned out to be pretty much my best level ever. The ID is 17808830 If you dont have time to play it here is the video www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ebub_LL43HgIm pretty sure this is feature worthy, and the comments on the level agree with me  |
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3,278 posts
Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
Mini-Profile Background: 36caa1
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Post by milesman34 on Jun 19, 2016 10:20:47 GMT -5
Gameplay (10.5/20)
0:00-0:13, 0:23-0:27, 0:34-0:41
These parts have way too many invisible portals, which requires more memorization and impedes gameplay. 1.5
0:13-0:23, 0:27-0:34, 0:41-0:60
These parts have pretty fun gameplay, but there are some weird invisible objects. 2.5
Advice
My advice is to not use so many invisible objects.
Design (10.7/20)
0:00-0:04
This part doesn't have enough decoration and the designs are too much like the first part of X. 1
0:04-0:13, 0:17-0:27
These parts have good designs but the deco is slightly copy-pasted. Also one part has backgrounds that are pretty much copied from MisterM. 2.5
0:13-0:17, 0:27-0:41
These parts just have a background as the only decoration. 0.5
0:41-0:60
This part has an interesting concept that is pretty well executed. 3.5
Advice
Use less copy-pasting and don't use unoriginal things.
Sync (4/10)The first half is pretty good but the second half is off. Originality (0.95x)It has some designs from X and backgrounds from MisterM's levels. It is slightly salvaged because of the concept at the end. Total (23.9/60)Decent. The gameplay has too many invisible objects and the decoration is a bit copy-pasted. Difficulty 5  or  6
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