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Post by SiLeNT on May 18, 2016 19:52:48 GMT -5
Well, i'm used to use popular at moment songs xD
Name : Flawless Wings
Song : Name says it all xD
Diff : Harder
Plz, it deserves more, i can even deco update it :v
ID : 18839052
If you don't find it, i'm TheColors.
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Post by daydream on May 18, 2016 23:42:05 GMT -5
>Says diff is harder
>Stars requested: 10
Gameplay: Definitely isn't harder, more like insane 8*. Gameplay is pretty good to say the least. 7/10
Design: Design is good, although I don't like the change from red to white, but most levels do this. Also, some parts need a bit more deco and the end feels like it was rushed. 6/10
Overall: 7/10 Good
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2016 0:00:17 GMT -5
>Says diff is harder >Stars requested: 10 Gameplay: Definitely isn't harder, more like insane 8*. Gameplay is pretty good to say the least. 7/10 Design: Design is good, although I don't like the change from red to white, but most levels do this. Also, some parts need a bit more deco and the end feels like it was rushed. 6/10 Overall: 7/10 Good Are you sure you're judging the right level? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I don't agree with this review, but I'll review it soon. |
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Post by SiLeNT on May 19, 2016 17:47:18 GMT -5
ye, i request 10 stars becuz i beat it on android and i was a little noob so... xD
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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2016 22:19:58 GMT -5
Gameplay: I really like how in start gameplay is moved and funny. But after your part it starts to fluctuate crazyly. Oh, and white part makes it still worse. Worst part of that fluctuations is that gameplay is a bit pointless. 4.5/10
Decoration: Very likeful in start but it gets progressively empty. 4.5/10
Not something else to say because I can't beat it. I beat it in practice.
4.5/10 Needs improvement :/
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Post by undampedstraw on May 20, 2016 22:39:48 GMT -5
Alright, i don't see any good reviews going on here so i guess lil ol' me will have to help
Design
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I think in most places of your level you nailed the block design. Sadly, that was really the only thing going for you. Most places felt more like a layout to me than anything, and in the areas that had deco it was badly placed and didn't fulfill the level. Lots of empty spots. A tip: Add moving backgrounds along with the deco. This level could have been a lot better with that.
Overall: 4/10
Gameplay
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To be completely honest, i really liked the gameplay all throughout this level. I had fun in some parts, and there weren't many bugs for me either. +1 for the no bugs part. But, in areas like the last ufo in the line of white spikes, where you just keep tapping, spots like those i really don't like. -.5 per part like that, and if I'm remembering correctly there were 2. Good job on this.
Overall: 8/10
Originality
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On most of the block designs, of what i could see, you were original. I can't rate you for your deco, so -4 for that. On one of the wave parts it looked directly copied from The Hell Factory, so -1 for that. Not much else to say here. No original gameplay concepts either (ex: swing copters), but thats only bonus.
Overall: 3/10
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I honestly don't have anything else to say. Not much to the level, all points i wanted to make were above. Just one tip: Don't use just saws in a section, that also really don't like stuff like that.
+0
Overall Score: 5
8.1-10: Feature worthy
6.1-8: Good
2.1-6: Decent
0-2: Needs Improvement
Your gameplay is what saved you here, everything else you need to work on.
-Straw
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Post by undampedstraw on May 27, 2016 13:23:22 GMT -5
I reviewed this level a whole week ago, with even a level judge responding in this forum, saying that they would review the level themselves. A whole week later, the judge still hasn't approved any of the reviews or reviewed the level themselves. :/
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Post by kiriE on May 27, 2016 15:25:36 GMT -5
I reviewed this level a whole week ago, with even a level judge responding in this forum, saying that they would review the level themselves. A whole week later, the judge still hasn't approved any of the reviews or reviewed the level themselves. :/ Although I do agree we should be more active, please refrain from saying things like that. Many of us are busy with irl stuff at the moment like exams, and you guys just have to be patient. And by the way I think this is Needs Improvement. It clearly lacks decoration and gameplay isn't that good either. If someone could bring a video I could judge this properly. |
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Post by undampedstraw on May 27, 2016 15:35:45 GMT -5
I reviewed this level a whole week ago, with even a level judge responding in this forum, saying that they would review the level themselves. A whole week later, the judge still hasn't approved any of the reviews or reviewed the level themselves. :/ Although I do agree we should be more active, please refrain from saying things like that. Many of us are busy with irl stuff at the moment like exams, and you guys just have to be patient. And by the way I think this is Needs Improvement. It clearly lacks decoration and gameplay isn't that good either. If someone could bring a video I could judge this properly. But the judge on that had commented on this page has been active on many other posts since they posted here. I have seen on a lot of other posts of judges promising to make reviews then they never do. It's just annoying when they make that promise, they don't fulfill it, and they wont even come back to just approve/deny reviews that have been put since their promise post was made. |
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Post by kiriE on May 27, 2016 15:41:20 GMT -5
Although I do agree we should be more active, please refrain from saying things like that. Many of us are busy with irl stuff at the moment like exams, and you guys just have to be patient. And by the way I think this is Needs Improvement. It clearly lacks decoration and gameplay isn't that good either. If someone could bring a video I could judge this properly. But the judge on that had commented on this page has been active on many other posts since they posted here. I have seen on a lot of other posts of judges promising to make reviews then they never do. It's just annoying when they make that promise, they don't fulfill it, and they wont even come back to just approve/deny reviews that have been put since their promise post was made. Ziel is super busy at the moment, so you just need to excuse him, he even made a thread for it. And yes, I know it can feel annoying when we promise things like that, honestly I'm one of those guys who can't always keep up with it. But often we don't remember which level we review or promise to review because it falls way back at our participated notificiations or just simply forget it. If this happens just tag us. But you do have a very big point there, some of the judges reaaaaally should start judging more often and keep their promises (*cough* myself *cough) But great that you're standing against me, we need more people like you  |
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Post by SiLeNT on May 27, 2016 21:38:07 GMT -5
Well, as i see the reviews, i have been updated it, the new id is 20219608 ( Because i don't know why it didn't allow me to update on same id ) Please, check the update and say what you think  |
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Post by kiriE on May 28, 2016 2:40:32 GMT -5
Well, as i see the reviews, i have been updated it, the new id is 20219608 ( Because i don't know why it didn't allow me to update on same id ) Please, check the update and say what you think Do you have a video? ;3; |
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Post by SiLeNT on May 28, 2016 7:55:40 GMT -5
No :/ But i will record one maybe....
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Post by SiLeNT on May 28, 2016 8:59:34 GMT -5
Well, i can't record it, i h8 my pc xD
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Post by undampedstraw on May 28, 2016 10:40:45 GMT -5
Im only going to change some things of my review with the update.Alright, i don't see any good reviews going on here so i guess lil ol' me will have to help Design -------- I think in most places of your level you nailed the block design. Sadly, that was really the only thing going for you. Most places felt more like a layout to me than anything, and in the areas that had deco it was badly placed and didn't fulfill the level. Lots of empty spots. A tip: Add moving backgrounds along with the deco. This level could have been a lot better with that. With the update you added some deco, but in some places you added way too much and somehow made it worse. I'm going to give you .5 points for making at least some parts a bit better. You would have had more if you balanced the deco a bit.Overall: 4 .5/10 Gameplay ----------- To be completely honest, i really liked the gameplay all throughout this level. I had fun in some parts, and there weren't many bugs for me either. +1 for the no bugs part. But, in areas like the last ufo in the line of white spikes, where you just keep tapping, spots like those i really don't like. -.5 per part like that, and if I'm remembering correctly there were 2. Good job on this. Somehow you made the gameplay worse. It got buggy, and some parts weren't fun anymore. -1 for the bugs, and -2 for the worse gameplay. I'm also changing the score of my original review to 7/8 because i feel i didn't go too hard on you for the lines of just spikes and the areas of just saws.Overall: 4/10 Originality ----------- On most of the block designs, of what i could see, you were original. I can't rate you for your deco, so -4 for that. On one of the wave parts it looked directly copied from The Hell Factory, so -1 for that. Not much else to say here. No original gameplay concepts either (ex: swing copters), but thats only bonus. This is the same.Overall: 3/10 Additional Points ------------------ I honestly don't have anything else to say. Not much to the level, all points i wanted to make were above. Just one tip: Don't use just saws in a section, that also really don't like stuff like that. Again, nothing else to be said.+0 Overall Score: 8.1-10: Feature worthy 6.1-8: Good 3.1-6: Decent0-3: Needs Improvement Your gameplay is what saved you here, everything else you need to work on. I also changed my scoring, since needs improvement was only a range of 2 points. You just barely scraped needs improvement.-Straw Updated review. |
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